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I started The Writer's Group and I do stuff sometimes! :D


Written in rhyme. Heavy on thought. The ramifications of mortality interlace with the plot.

Chapters (3)
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And that concludes part one of the two part prologue. Time for an interlude! :D

As long as this keeps going, you're in good shape. Otherwise, well, they don't call me LimeAttack for no reason.


I don't know who you are. But I love you forever for that gif.

But still, >Lime<
Although I reckon limes could be made combustible as well.

1124079 Just change the color and nopony will know :3

Brazilian lemons are America's limes (green).
America's lemons are Brazilian limes (yellow).

I will now express my feelings for the story in a rhyme.

The rhymes in here make me think.
They sure don't give me time to blink.
This story sure is fun.
I can honestly tell, this isn't a pun.
Keep this up the way it is.
Or your brain I'll have to freeze.
This new OC doesn't suck.
Hope you don't make me say oh... no. :trollestia:

1124251 RIGHT HERE
Keep an eye our for this d00d. He updates the script sporadically.
By sporadically, I mean once a month.

... lazy bastard. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png

Do you know that the dumb don't fear?
For they may see the dear and slow hum
of the grim as he pulls his lone and evil drum
to beat the final breaths out their chest
but they don't fear death.

They know not of evil or of good,
nor the haven saved for those of wooden moral
they see no hell that awaits those who've cast spells
they simply sit and wait for death to throw them out.

Yet we feel the dumb are weak.

are we right?
the dumb have no fear of death
the end may be near, but panic they will not bear.

are they wrong?
we tell them so more and more.
yet they are the ones who hold the door open
to our own subjected weakness.

What is worse,
the fear of death, almighty and strong?
or the fear of the dumb?
and filled
with bliss.


I like your work. The rhyme definitely caught my attention and I'm excited to see how your story progresses.

OOOOKAY, anyone get the feeling this was written by Zecora?:trixieshiftright:

That was seriously AWESOME! Thank you for making this, and I hope you continue! :twilightsmile:

My friends seem to love it when I read this aloud in skype ^^

1129951>>1129972 MY heart R 'bout 2 splode from happy <3

Thank you very much :'3 (oh and I just finished the prologue part two :D)

I apologize right now that this isn't a very moving chapter <3 I really needed it to hop scotch over to the main plot dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png

Damn it, Ty, for the first time I actually can't comment... I simply have no words. This masterpiece puts my poetry to shame...

And now, we move through the introduction and into the story.

Thumbs-up purely for the synopsis.

This deserves more views. More than this 600 and a few.
So I'm sharing this to 1 or two groups, maybe the ponies will catch the loop.
(My vocabulary is not a dell, so I hope this comment is written well):fluttershyouch:


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