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A Day in the Life


Right before the big Canterlot Wedding, Twilight Sparkle makes a 'false' accusation against 'Princess Cadence.' Abandoned by her friends, teacher, and brother, the heartbroken pony experiences conflicting feelings of guilt and anger. Seizing this opportunity, Chrysalis takes in the fragile unicorn as her protege for her plan to plunge Equestria in darkness and chaos. With the Elements useless and the world being torn apart, how can Princess Celestia and the Elements possibly undo the damage they could've so easily prevented? And will Twilight be able to push away the darkness, or lose herself to it?

Note: Alternate Universe because of a few....'secrets' certain characters have, as well as obvious other reasons.

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Comments ( 130 )

Well, leave a comment. Tell me what you think. :ajsmug: And remember: Crazy Twilight is best pony! :rainbowlaugh:


Looks like a good start to what could be an awesome fic, keeping tabs for sure.

This my friend... this is the beginning of something amazing.

I will give a chance to it, dont fuck it up. That history have big potential ;)

See this is what I didn't understand about the rest of the mane 6, in lesson zero they said that they should take others feeling more seriously and they turn around and brush off her concerns in the royal wedding like it was nothing which almost ended up destroying Equestria in the process.
Annoyed me to no end.
Will track because I enjoy evil/crazy Twilight.

988235 Dat description is a depressing alternate universe. (You need to add that tag I believe as it is tied to the episode *I could be wrong*) I may read this when its done, I cant stand suspense when one of the mane 6 go evil or something like that.

Oooo, I'd wondered why no one took this AU and ran with it yet.:rainbowhuh:
I thought there would be more fics about what would of happened if Twilight left or turned against them for their disbelief. Hoped there'd be some about the make-up amongst the mane six, or even with Celestia. There was the whole "whoops, we should've listened and we're about to lose Twilight, so we're extremely sorry' in Lesson Zero. The finale's consequence was being conquered by the changlings, possible enslavement, etc etc. I guess it had to be pushed aside to make room for the happy ending and all.

enough ramblings:twilightblush:
I will read this in a bit:pinkiehappy:

Hm, you have my attention.

Ive had ideas for this,but never bothered to write it because due to my currnet age(12.Derp)I haven't the slitest clue how to edit ,and write a good plot(Not the freaking pony plot!!).

fucking brilliant story bro, i simply love it

"i do not care how strong your body is

i do not care how powerful your magic is

all i care about is how fragile your mind is"

~me, just now.

don't know why but i just thought this up after i read this

"She lied down on the carpeted stairs of the grand hall" This should be "lay", not "lied".
Aside from this one error, the rest of the story was very engrossing. Can't wait to see what happens!

Interesting you have my attention, let's see where this story goes. What part will a certain draconequus play in this?

Twilights going to turn good at the end of this :ajbemused:

Well, at least you changed something I always hated in the show. Twilight was falling for the lies, so why did the changeling Queen send her to the real Cadence and ruin everything?! :facehoof: I am so going to love this story. Especially if Twilight stays crazy. There are too many 'The good guys always win' Stories! I want the evil guys to win once!

Awesome story so far and I can't wait for Twilight to really break down and cause some disaster! Rare you see an evil Twilight story and even more rare a good one, this is both so I'm going to enjoy :twilightangry2:

awesome opening!:pinkiehappy: i love crazy twilight stories!:yay:

crazy is second

'Oh my God, This is gonna be amazing. Annnnnnd record" -Vegeta Dragon Ball Z Abridged, But still this looks good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ohh, getting interesting.

Corrupted Twilight is always interesting.

Let's see what happens when Shining armor faces the damage he inadvertently done.

on a second note I'm liking this story very much so far..let's see what happens when Twilight "Turns to the dark side" to put it in Star Wars terms :rainbowlaugh:

anywho, bring on MOAR!!!

Mmm, yes yes, very good! Looking forward for more.:pinkiehappy:

i like where this is going:twilightsmile:

ooooh i love how this fic is going:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:
cant wait to see her lose it:twilightsmile:

I am loving where this fiction is going. :heart: Twilight's friends are pretty gullible.:derpytongue2:

...Can we move on to the part where she goes crazy?
Everypony is starting to piss me off...

I feel epic rage against Chrysalis (Whatever her name is spelled) and Twilight's 'friends' I know they are being manipulated beyong anything, but don't they have a single braincells or any power to forgive her for a mistake. I can't wait for Twilight to destroy their flanks! :twilightangry2:

1073760 Patience is the key to success, my friend. :pinkiehappy:
But please, be patient. I'm trying to write a half-decent fic instead of going 'Derp! I'mma make Twilight go crazy for no flapjackin' reason!'

1074969 Oh I know that was my way of saying "I'm enjoying this please write some more!"
And that well the Mane 6 (plus Celestia) is pissing me off in extreme levels...and I really want crazy Twilight to teach them a lesson.
Take your time good things take time.:twilightsmile:

great chapter!:pinkiehappy: i don't really have any criticism to give you, nothing caught my eye while reading and the flow was great. there is one thing which i would like to ask; is it gonna stay on a once-every-two-weeks schedule?:twilightoops:

1074717 It's like Twilight said, they're caught up in their wedding plans.

AHAHHAHAHHAHAHA!!! And our shadows descend! Well done we approve and demand more! And If you dont comply we will simply devour everything you hold dear.


1085651 WHERE ON GOD'S GREEN EARTH DID YOU FIND THESE EPIC FREAKIN' PICTURES!? (particularly the last one.) :pinkiesmile:

1085751 the last one was a remnent of pony booro on google the others i searched on google using tags i felt fitting to the story and twilight sparkle on the front. otherwise yes they are pretty damn epic also would you believe me if i said i was trying origionally to look for an entirely different image in the form of a gif.:rainbowwild:

also i thought we were having an immage contest. lol


1085651Insane Twilight Sparkle is Best Twilight Sparkle.:twilightsmile:

Oh god...Listening to this song while readin this chapter....:facehoof:Bad Idea...I was crying the whole chapter.....:fluttercry:

So is "Shining Armor" a Changeling or just a manipulative douchebag?

I'm certain that the "Cadence" that Twilight met in the streets was actually Chrysalis. But was the Cadence at the wedding the real one or not?

Keep writing!

Too much out of character for me to enjoy this.

Interesting idea, I can't wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

What fools these ponies are....all except for Twilight. :facehoof:

In a sad way and when all is said and done, it will be the Elements fault for the Fall of Equestria, just like Discord. :pinkiecrazy:

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