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keithsterling


I started writing went I started college, I continued writing then.

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It has been about two years since the Purple Sentinel (a large Amethyst gemstone belonging to Princess Luna Silverlight) was stolen on Hearth’s Warming Eve from the Royal Canterlot Museum while it was on exhibit. After a remarkable investigation that concluded at midnight that very day by, then Royal Investigator Somnus Silverlight, the thief was identified as a pegasi burglar named Cloud Climber (No other name was found for the suspect). Unfortunately, the Purple Sentinel was never recovered on the body of Cloud Climber as she met with a grisly demise while in hiding at the hands of an unknown suspect. It was several years later that the Purple Sentinel was finally recovered. It was found at the end of the Crystal War in the treasury of the Crystal Empire.

Now history is repeating itself, but this time, the gem that was stolen was a one of kind large pink sea pearl called the Alicorn Pearl. The owner of this jewel was Princess Celestia Silverlight, the older sister of Princess Luna Silverlight. Searching for this stolen pearl fell to Celestia’s granddaughter Equestrian Princess Alysia Ara Silverlight. Alysia had taking up the mantle of the Royal Investigator in Equestria that was left vacant by her father, Grand Prince of the Moon Somnus Silverlight. It was held by her Grandfather Prince Justice Silverlight under her Grandmother. She has vowed to her Grandmother that she will recover her stolen gem and not let it disappear for many years.

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Comments ( 6 )

I'm confused, yet at the same time... I like it.

8966347
Thank you and how are you confused?

8966529
I'm not confused about the story in general. It's the last part of the chapter that bugs me. At times I get confused as to waht is currebtly happening due to a misuse of the tenses. Such as:

"The patron convinces her that there’s no harm in talking with the unicorn lawyer the business card belongs to."

This is supposed to be in the past yet there is no past tense.

While it dose hinder the enjoyment of the story its nothing too drastic.

8966643
I see what you mean....Went I read it over I didn't catch and my editor didn't either...So I'll fix it...My fault.

Do seaponies appear in this story?

8972761
Sorry about not answering sooner.....but anyway technically speaking Alysia is a young seapony siren.
Her mother is seapony siren I didn't mention it in this story...But in return of the Sun and moon story it come up.

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