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Thanks man. This really helps a lot. And I'm a bit ashamed about the shutters and the thatch roof.
For the bleeding and the no treatment. I had it more in mind that while he rolled down through the trees he suffered mostly beatings from the trunks and branches he collided with and just minor cuts which didn't bleed so much it would leave a trail.
And after the Everfree I had levitation going. So no blood trail either.
About the bad description. This is a learning progress story. I have no editors or proof readers and everything that is written here is entirely my fault. I'm learning and bettering myself throughout the process and everybody can see if I'm doing better or not.
So in this light, I won't correct such flaws and let them stand, but will take your recommendations to heart and try to do better in the next chapter.
Thank you for your constructive criticism and have a nice day.

Dragon