When your people are nearing obliteration. When your cities are but smoking ruins. When all other options have been exhausted. Can your final, desperate gambit release their jaws from your throat? Or will the devil you know undo your finest schemes?
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Awesome. Very gripping first chapter.
Every journey starts with a first step, trite but true, even here... Who'm I kidding? This is an amazing leap! <3 Glad to see it taken <3
Congrats on getting your first story live, Duvet!! May this be just the first of many!
This was an incredibly fun project. And I have to say, this is probably the most "edge of your seat" story I've read in some time.
Filled with all sorts of moments!
And and moments!
And moments!
Even a couple moments!
Loved it!
Nice start, maybe we're thrown in a bit quickly into whatever's happening, but I assume further chapters will show what's up.
Or is this maybe a sequel/in-universe fic to something I've missed?
Anyway, I'm tracking for now, looking good so far.
8985160
All in due time
8985160
I wrote a very short prequel to the story if you want to check it out. It doesn't spoil Duvet's story, though. Just adds a bit of insight to what has been going on in the story's premise.
Ashes
sounds freaking amazing, how long to you figure this story to be?
8985254
The story is just shy of 30k words.
Plenty of blood, drama and mayhem ahead!
Haven't read the story yet, but it seems right up my alley. This requires a deeper look...
8985270
30K!!! thats it ewww man it needs at least 200k man it sounds like it has potential
8985743
Oh the tale is far from over when this story ends...
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Yeah, It's just the introduction to this alt-U. There are a lot of ideas flying around how things might go afterward.
Things are already pretty bleak at this point... as it should be.
Very good job on both the pacing and the atmosphere in this chapter, a very intriguing opening into this AU. Sadly other duties require my attention now, but I hope to continue reading soon!