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Samaru163


I am a simple writer and connoisseur of gender bending stories. I also do a little editing and collaborations if you're in need—just know that my schedule isn't the most reliable.

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Two new mares have shown up in Ponyville. They seem friendly enough, wanting nothing more then to play games and have fun with ponies. And as luck would have it they end up meeting six particular ponies of interest. But there's something these ponies need to know about the games these mischievous mares play. Once you start one, you need to finish it.

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GM&F IN THERE OWN FANFIC?!?! YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES. (should i expect an appearance by eclipse, and or historic?)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

CHAOS MAGIC IM CALLING IT

I like this so far. I especially love the idea that Twilight and Spike time their errand runs. XD Just a few mistakes with ponies being a little out of character, but I can live with that. :pinkiesmile:

1248130 I'm sorry about that. As you can probably tell I'm still very green with this.:rainbowwild:

Oh my gosh. So good.:pinkiegasp:

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:ajbemused: Puns. Puns everywhere. :trollestia:

And this chapter is excellent.

Nitpick: Love the Dr. Who reference! But it is 'Allonsy!'

I bet one penny that he will regret it.

Oh, this can't end well. Well; On with the show!

Gm! Fest! Stop casually breaking the laws of physics! We might need them later! If you're going to break them, at least make it look like it takes effort!

I wonder if this wild card is......:trixieshiftleft:

All I can think of is Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories. :ajsmug:

1409430 Funny, cause that was my least favorite of those games.:rainbowwild:

1320465
obviously no a betting man are you? :trixieshiftright:

1409504 I like to make some wagers here and there. Why, you insinuating something?:ajsmug:

1409473
ReChain of Memories was good, and it is necessary to understand Kingdom Hearts 2. :twilightsmile:

1409602 Oh yeah, I liked that game.:twilightsmile:

1409627>>1409667Both of you should just realize that no Kingdom hearts game can compare to Kingdom Hearts 3: The Game. (I actually prefer 358/2 but my brother wanted me to say 3) (The organization never says die!!! Except when they do....)
.. Oh yeah! The story! Great chapter. Can't wait to see them lose a challenge!:pinkiehappy:

1409919No... I'm pretty sure he means KH3...

1409945Yeah right. Next thing you'll tell us is that half life episode 3 hasn't come out yet either. I'm pretty sure my brother knows what he's talking about.

And now we get to see what happens when one loses a challenge. I can't wait for the next chapter!... Actually I can wait. Oh well!:pinkiehappy:

Losing a challenge. Interesting, Though you might need to look over your chapter a bit. There were quite a few errors in grammar and past/present tense. If you ever need help, you should give it to a brony friend and have him read it to him, or if he's not a brony, strap him to a chair and read it to him out loud:pinkiecrazy:

I wonder what sorts of games shall be played...:pinkiecrazy:

Well then...:rainbowwild: That was a good chapter. And now we know what happens.
I think I might like to use the word "well" too much.

Finally got to reading this. Decent chapter, but there were a few mistakes, spelling and present/past tense. I would point them out, but I have a headache and staring at a computer screen for hours on end doesn't help much.

1834973 Thanks for your criticism, and sorry for the spelling mistakes. I'm trying to find an editor but it's not going so well.:ajsleepy:

I thought their games weren't supposed to be deadly? I'm led to assume the dice are appearing only a short distance above her so as to not hit anywhere close to terminal velocity.

You could say that things are getting....... Festive.

Was that painting?....:applecry:

It’s bory arched skyward and it lashed forwards, only to be blasted backwards by a beam of magic.

Bory? Do you mean body or do I not understand serpents?

“These mirrors are so much fun to play with, each one a different change.

Oh god. Full Tilt! Full Tilt! :pinkiesick:

Well I enjoyed it. Brought back bad/amazing memories but enjoyed it all the same.

2034522 Fixed those mistakes, and glad to see I made you remember something.:twilightsmile:

2042329the book "full tilt" and its hall of mirrors. Certainly a must read. At least IMP. But o do have to say that it is creepily similar.

Dat last sentence. You can tell something obscure is bound to happen.

Festivities and Games relationship reminds me of a certain pair of people. I can't put a finger on it, but it's vaguely familiar.

Great chapter. I loved the mirror scene. :pinkiehappy:

2144387 Thanks, and now I'm curious as to who you're thinking of.

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Reminds me of Peter and Lois when Lois chides Peter for acting like a fool.

2144516 That's...actually hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

This rook will self destruct in five seconds.

Now that would be an interesting chess match. Every piece detonates if its taken. I think you might have misspelled eerie at the beginning but I can't find it anymore. Fun chapter and now awaiting the next.

A most interesting turn... but I believe more twists await... :trixieshiftright:

Yeah, it's the play offs. You win or don't go home! :moustache:

A final game? Mysterious ponies? ............. :trixieshiftright: Dis vill be fun...

Okay I'll bite. Where's the shining character moments? I can't really say I'm one to talk or even utter criticism but where's pinkie being pinkie or twilight doing twilight-ey stuff? They just don't feel like they're being themselves or something like that. I suppose it can be chalked up to unpreparedness of the situation for them acting different but...
In any case I'm excited for the next chapter. I don't want to say things are winding towards their conclusion yet but that's what things appear.

2292371 Yes, I know that I'm not the best at keeping the characters how they should be. I'm trying my best, and hopefully I'll make up for it next chapter. :applejackunsure:

2293357 From what I see, I'm the only one complaining so maybe it's just me.:unsuresweetie:

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