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New writer hoping to improve little by little.

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After capturing an enemy pony, the Princesses decide on reforming them...in the Human World. Princess Twilight places the task on Sunset, trusting her to make use of the friendship lessons that she has learned. But Sunset finds herself at odds with their new guest. Without communication, can Sunset break through the prisoner's wall? Or will she play the warden until the Princesses grow tired and take drastic measures?

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 5 )

Before I read this, I must know: Why the human world and not Equestria?

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The assumption is that the 'prisoner' is wary and distrusting of ponies in Equestria as a whole. So a new setting might help the reforming process.

I'm with Dusk on this. I mean she was force to do something that she didn't to do, that is not the way to reform. The hatred to ponies have level up by 5.

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Thanks for the input!
Glad the “by force” factor was noticed. Thank you for taking the time to read!

I liking it and Sunset and her pals should know of going that a prisoners have some... dark memories that they don’t want to show.

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