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SwarmLordAbdonis


Fellow Changeling lover and writer. Well, OLD style changelings anyway

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Days after the Canterlot invasion, three Changelings are captured and taken to a classified location for interogation. The only problem is that two of them are very skeptical of the third changeling. Nopony knows why. Not until it's too late.

This tale follows one of the changelings who by luck is out of his cell by the time everything takes a horrifying turn. As time and information is gathered, it soon grows more and more apparent that he must escape whatever the cost.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

I'll be keeping my eye on this.

This is pretty nice, the only thing that really bothers me is the quotations.

"Hey."
not "Hey".

"Blarg," She said. (Another example)

Well damn, gonna leave me on another cliff hanger? Least you got my attetion, good job and das want moar.

"We got .. it... sir!..... The ... thing... that's been on the rampage, unfortunetly we had to stab it in the neck..."

Oh no problem lol

Thanks to AdamAperture for the advice on speech marks.

SH*t you got me gooshbumped amazing story
sad life for the other prison inmates and staff/spoiler]

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