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The Usurper


I write stories. One day, I'll be really, really good at it. One day.

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The winners write the history books.

Everypony knows that beings like Discord, Nightmare Moon and Queen Chrysalis are completely, utterly evil. The victor has made it so, and therefore nothing can be said or done to change it. For now.

Pressure from recently defeated foes will bring Equestria to its knees, but none of them will be able to match the suffering brought about by the inevitable escape of an earth pony from her chaotic prison.

Right?

Or maybe, Equestria will change for the better.

No matter what the outcome, everypony will soon realise that nothing can be viewed in just black and white...

There will always be shades of grey.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 3 )

This could prove to be quite good. Its an interesting start with an intreguing blurb. I'll keep an eye out for this.

That cliffhanger...

Looking forward to more!

Intriguing, but it feels like you're trying a bit too hard to force the impression of Celestia's outlook as fundamentally flawed when she hasn't really done anything out of line yet.

I don't see Pinkie shipped that often (besides with :rainbowwild: of course, which I do love, but variety is nice), and it's pretty sweet here. Even if it's part of somepony else's scheme (Pinkamena?:pinkiecrazy:).

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