Brilliant brilliant chapter! i'm curious even if things in this Equestria aren't exactly like how the show portrayed. Will Eris share her future knowledge or share with anybody? Though again the differences in the show could still come play, for example Tirek might not escape Tarturus alone.
I like it. Saying fuck you to the natural order and coming out on top like the Goddess she is. I'm looking forward eagerly to see just how many references this next update can bring.
Sorry for taking so much time to respon to the update, you caught me in a bad time. Well, you certainly were fast at getting to the sexy part of the HiE story, I wonder if this will lead to something more interesting down the road. I wonder if the Changeling will try to keep him a secret from the Chrysalis for as long as possible and keep him to themselves? I wonder if they would force him join the hive, or if they will manipulate him into it? Keep up the good work.
More please! I'm in love with your story, I love the references and honostly it's a nice level of 'mature' that I dont find often on this site in a story I like. Keep up the amazing work!
Note: As I write this, I think that night I accidentally created new species resembling Pokémon who now reside in the Everfree. For whoever comes across a charizard and gets eaten, i'm sincerely apologies. If you stumble by an Eevee and make it your pet, your very welcome.
I find this very irritating, but a lot of people confuse your and you're. Your is for possession of an object, and you're is "You Are".
Comon, it's the worst kind of republic. With many creatures it will have shit representation. Why would you even need iron throne? Parlamentary republic works much better.
Twilight's maturity level has risen. How's her OCD?
IT LIIIIIIIIVES!!!!!
Lil, couldn't help it! I hope the next chapter is just as good as this one, and do take your time hun, art takes work after all~
May soft sands guide your path
~ponyheart07~
Brilliant brilliant chapter! i'm curious even if things in this Equestria aren't exactly like how the show portrayed. Will Eris share her future knowledge or share with anybody? Though again the differences in the show could still come play, for example Tirek might not escape Tarturus alone.
So. How's that update coming
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Soon, very soon.
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Cool. Cause now I can read it. As long as it's not dead
I like it. Saying fuck you to the natural order and coming out on top like the Goddess she is. I'm looking forward eagerly to see just how many references this next update can bring.
Minor error- She asked. A scared looking Sike huddled behind her.” Other than that good chapter.
More
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;) It's on its way. Just fine tuning now.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kT0aZu1vYcgeI2Gxv_IrrdF6zQDIC7RdBnGnBmCLZio/edit?usp=drivesdk
Sorry for taking so much time to respon to the update, you caught me in a bad time. Well, you certainly were fast at getting to the sexy part of the HiE story, I wonder if this will lead to something more interesting down the road. I wonder if the Changeling will try to keep him a secret from the Chrysalis for as long as possible and keep him to themselves? I wonder if they would force him join the hive, or if they will manipulate him into it? Keep up the good work.
This needs more chapters lol
More please! I'm in love with your story, I love the references and honostly it's a nice level of 'mature' that I dont find often on this site in a story I like. Keep up the amazing work!
" I AM FIRE, I AM DEATH, I AM...tiny?"
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Love it!
Spike.
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Tiny Smaug approves :)
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Aw his first coin!!!!!
I find this very irritating, but a lot of people confuse your and you're. Your is for possession of an object, and you're is "You Are".
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Hun, you're the confused one. This is once again, the correct usage.
Author really has a way to convey emotions with words. I can't help but feel intense anticipation as the Ivory Tower slowly rises.
Comon, it's the worst kind of republic. With many creatures it will have shit representation. Why would you even need iron throne? Parlamentary republic works much better.