YES MORE MOOAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR

das is good yes it is

Brilliant chapter.

Thank you for the support. This next chapter is going to be long one.

this is one of the better stories i have found about humans with chaos embodiment/manifestation as a power, i.e. draconequus physiology. keep up the good work, for you have my faith that you will become a page in the library if infinitude.

*sigh* I feel this is dead now please give us a sign that its not

9333970 Not dead. College just consumes a f-ing ton of time. I’ll get back to it soon.

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*play's the iconic ode to joy music*

I can hardly wait to see what mischief she gets up to!

He chuckled, “So you're a fan I see. That makes things much easier.” He snapped his fingers, and we suddenly found ourselves in a void of sorts. I gasped as I saw him shifting and contorting into a familiar daconequus shape that I never thought I would see in real life.

He stretched, “Oh that is so much better. I always found that form quite constricting. Too many complicated joints and organs to think about. not to mention how easily it bruises. Speaking of.” I felt a warmth in my face where the guy punched my, "All better."

My what? You left us wondering what "my" is...

“Feeling better.” He asked as his serpentine form found its way on his couch which hung on the ceiling.

Isn't it supposed to be a question mark since he's asking Eris a question?

“In the flesh. Diddy Tune now actually. He turned to his wings and squinted at them." He looked back to his doppelgänger, "Little help. I would be quite annoying to explain to everypony why i'm an alicorn." Discord clone sighed and snapped his talon. In a flash his wings were gone. He looked back to me, “You will see me again pretty soon. Tell me if my clone is misbehaving, i'll put him in his place. I wish you luck Eris, may you find true happiness in life.”

Capital I in I'm.

“I don't kid a whole lot about it, but he told me that he wished to retire from his role as the God of Chaos. He chose me to inherit his power. Just putting it out there that I really don’t mean you any trouble.”

“What were you before darling,” Rarity said as she extended a hoof to help me up. I took it, and dusted myself off.

I am not an expert in English, but I do feel like this sentence is grammatically correct but it just sounds weird to me...

She didn't look too happy about it but turned and said, “fair enough.” And didn't press the issue.

Capital F? Also I do know that you can do this sometimes for special cases, but I'm assuming that a lot of us were told by our English teacher not to start a sentence with "And".

Twilight cleared her throat, “I mean it has the basic idea of what we did and the end result. I wont say I agree with how we were all were represented. I know I’m certainly not so stubborn and anxious as what is portrayed.”

Won't has an apostrophe.

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Are you talking about the 'you're' when you're asking 'my what'? Because... That's correct. You're is you are, not the second person possessive your. So it'd be "You are correct" when it says "You're correct"