Man, that was beautiful, that poor mare has suffer enough and now she is scare to know if she is worth it of foreignness or not. Makes me wonder what the hell happen to all the equestrian girls, girls if she has being alone for so long, but hey, I imagine you have something in store for that.

Zecora! Make him impregnate Zecora next.

Nice job as always my friend and can't wait for more.

Warning: gentle consensual sex for procreation
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Fucking nice.
Looking forward to the next chapter. It's rare to see good stories about Zecora getting a thorough insemination.
I hope we get see him with his parents soon. Both of them. At the same time. Shit, throw Twilight in there too, make it a good old fashioned family orgy.

Honestly, I tried to read this story but didn't get past description of Celestia. I tolerate anthro but prefer show-likeness, I barely tolerate heat season conception but your style is a big no (for me), I do not tolerate lactation unless it last months of pregnancy or having milk-feeding babies. Also boobs that larger than head are ugly, bleh. You're already having c-c-combo!

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I don't get the reference. In short I don't see any value in expressionists art. Or see a pickle in chocolate with mayonnaise sauce as something appealing.

Phew, lewd cranked up to 11. Just how I like it. You write some good smut!

While I'm pretty certain it's not planned, I'd be more than happy to see you write the rest of the mane six into this.

Gotta love the loving side of Shining Armor...

Now for the exotic striped Zebra mare who is likely going to make a concoction with Shining's cum... literally and proverbially speaking... oh who are we kidding, she will likely make potions out of his cum and even have her own brew in her womb with him at this point.

More! More of this glorious story of Shining Armor getting all the mares.

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will we get any backstory on her? maybe a "trip down memory lane" where we see some of shining's past conquests?

;~;

Cancelled? Nooooooooo!

Why is it canceled?!

canceled? aww!

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AND WHAT'S WRONG WITH PINEAPPLE ON PIZZA?!! Blasphemy! Heresy! You sick freak! I will never love you again until you realize the magic of eating pizza with pineapples! Grr! Roar!

OK... I guess I still love you.

(BTW, in case it wasn't obvious, this post is meant as a joke. I'm not really angry. I do like pineapple pizza, though.)

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HERESY!

But seriously, you can have your pizza whatever way you like it.