After being volunteered by his wife to help relieve some of Celestia's pent-up frustrations, Shining soon finds a hat with more than a few names in it that require his 'services'. Cadance is more than okay with this.
Eight kids!! Well I bet he will be a great father. If you where to give anyone “twins” Rarity would be my vote (if this was up for a vote, but I doubt that). So if you would be so kind as to reveal who you plan on having Shining Armor impregnate beyond Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and Chrysalis that would be cool.
8979859 You might be able to work around the rhyming thing, too. Just have Shining bang her brains out until she’s too cum-drunk and bimbofied to be able to rhyme.
8979575 With Twilight Velvet on there, it always brings up the question of what happens with Night Light? Poor guy is left out.
My solution would be a bit out there for some, but hey. Shining has already knocked up his sister and Mother. Why not change Night Light into a mare and have HER join the fun?
Going down that road, could always turn 'Prince' Blueblood into 'Princess' and get all the royals, but well I like genderswapping.
Personally I think she will tell the public and the nobles that Celestia being pregnant is none of their business. If they have an issue then she can say it is the nobles fault for taking up so much of her time for so long that her body was going to drive her up the wall if she didn't have a kid, now. Personally I bet Cadance knew this was going to happen and just doesn't care.
I see you are being ambitious af for your second fic on here. I respect that, especially if you finish. Too many are incomplete.
I hope you can keep the steam going, you are certainly talented enough. This was a great cock worship part here. Can't wait to see what else you release.
I know you said there was no story in this at the beginning, but I still think a little of Shining's perspective in all this would have been nice. At the very least the chapter should have had a short prologue detailing the conversation between Shining and his wife, perhaps elaborating on what she'd said previously about him being her legal property. Or maybe I just have a thing for world building. Either way, I'm liking how this is going.
You're a disappointment.
Well are we going to take bets on the gender of the kid produced? I would like to see an alicorn stallion.
Good chapter.
8979536
I already know that, you just need to know when to suck though.
8979454
That was a good one. And why would you be sorry.
8979519
Eight kids!! Well I bet he will be a great father. If you where to give anyone “twins” Rarity would be my vote (if this was up for a vote, but I doubt that). So if you would be so kind as to reveal who you plan on having Shining Armor impregnate beyond Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and Chrysalis that would be cool.
8979575
Twilight Sparkle or Twilight Velvet? If not one or the other, do both. Plz?
8979666
Sweetness.
Also, when the story is all said and done, will there be an orgy chap at the very end?
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That is... Acceptable. I still think a finally orgy is a good idea.
What about Zecora? Do you gonna have it? I wanted to read how Shining gonna have striped foals)
And what about Twilights friends?
Remember Shining, keep calm and carry on.
8979766
Mine was obvious, what about yours is? Remember, we're writing in text not speaking.
8979774
Ya don't have too, just try and at least get somewhere close to her speech pattern. And yes, striped bitches are hot as fuck.
8979812
Hold on, let me re reread that message real quick.
Okay now I see it. I think it would have helped if you used this font.
8979822
Ah yes but when someone usually uses deep sarcasm they tend to embolden the words, yes? Make them stand out more, hmm?
Pfft, in my mind I sound like some evil villain explaining his whole plan, lol!
8979774
No need to write in rhyme just write how Zecora gonna beg shining to impregnate her and make for her their striped foals)
8979859
So now Shining gonna have already 9 foals and one of them is gonna be with cute stripes
Honestly I don’t even know where you cum up with this stuff.
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You might be able to work around the rhyming thing, too. Just have Shining bang her brains out until she’s too cum-drunk and bimbofied to be able to rhyme.
Well, Cadance should have known that this was a possibility. I wonder how she, and the rest of the public, are going to respond?
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With Twilight Velvet on there, it always brings up the question of what happens with Night Light? Poor guy is left out.
My solution would be a bit out there for some, but hey. Shining has already knocked up his sister and Mother. Why not change Night Light into a mare and have HER join the fun?
Going down that road, could always turn 'Prince' Blueblood into 'Princess' and get all the royals, but well I like genderswapping.
EDIT: Well guess people don't like that idea.
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Personally I think she will tell the public and the nobles that Celestia being pregnant is none of their business. If they have an issue then she can say it is the nobles fault for taking up so much of her time for so long that her body was going to drive her up the wall if she didn't have a kid, now. Personally I bet Cadance knew this was going to happen and just doesn't care.
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Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
In those immortal words. "Run, Shining, Run!"
The pic for this story is,
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I see you are being ambitious af for your second fic on here. I respect that, especially if you finish. Too many are incomplete.
I hope you can keep the steam going, you are certainly talented enough. This was a great cock worship part here. Can't wait to see what else you release.
Do do do him, it's alright♩
I know you said there was no story in this at the beginning, but I still think a little of Shining's perspective in all this would have been nice. At the very least the chapter should have had a short prologue detailing the conversation between Shining and his wife, perhaps elaborating on what she'd said previously about him being her legal property. Or maybe I just have a thing for world building. Either way, I'm liking how this is going.
This was a good chapter.
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Wow, how'd I not notice all these updates?
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Less for being drunk than causing trouble while drunk
I'm all for a spot of erotic drivel, but this is a bit too much blatant and mindless fetish-fuel for my tastes.
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Dude, pointing it out doesn't get you anywhere here, just leave somewhere it'd work