Published Author looking to expand out side of hit comfort zone by wirting from different perspectives with input from others with the risk of personal jugement.
A small lapse of judgment on Rarity's part sets in motion a series of events leading to realization, admission and development of the feelings of three mares for Spike. How will this affect their friendship? Who will win his love? Read and find
After royal duties hold Twilight hostage for most of the day she forced into internal turmoil after missing her date with Applejack...for the fourth time in a row.
First time I think I've read a story where Granny Smith actually says she's fine with AJ dating a mare. Not that I've seen any where she isn't.
She just never says it. Or's even in the story.
And oy does this have a bad case of 'Needs an Editor now'.
Really needs an editor.
Very cute, but a few errors!
I like it, but I have to back up what others have said - needs some editing.
How sweet