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I feel sorry for this Displaced, I'm curious as to how she'll be able to do anything outside of her limited mobility aka cross-over into other world.
8948303
well it kinda depends on if anyone's willing to crossover when I can show that off.
Eh, might be interesting. Let's see where this goes
8948308
Oh, so you don't know how she could go into other world while she's restricted to one place?
8948319
oh I do know... it's just I can't exactly show it if no-one bothers to crossover.
8948332
Oh, true. Ya don't want to spoil anything.
hmmm. Wonder if Ava would be able to help my Halo Displaced Sigmund upgrade his androids?
8948402
ooh! first Thrin and now Sigmund? that's interesting.
I'd be up for it if you are... just prepare for Ava to be as sarcastic and savage as the real GLaDOS when it comes to inspecting said androids.
8948433
*looks to the right to see an android's head fall off* well considering he only has the parts for basic up keep and even that's more like putting a band-aid on em. Only problem I see is Sigmund doesn't have a Token yet and nither does Ava.
8948440
no, I mean she's probably going to be brutal about them, even about how they were in their prime... and yeah, you'd have to wait for my token so Sigmund could call her to your world.
also I know it's off-topic, but what do you think of the song bit I put in the description? I'm hoping someone could make a full lyric write-up from it just so I can make a blog post about it.
8948498
*gives the thumbs up* I liked it
For the want of a prime burger, a human turned AI with the power of Aperture science labs and personnel, will enjoy orgasmic pleasure when she finally gets that burger
*Takes a closer look at picture* OH. Oh. That's... not good.
8950305
I don't get it? is it the watermark?
8950463
Yes, that watermark is the symbol of a very bad thing. I won't say anything more to avoid spoilers.
Great work keep up the good work
Is Blueballs trying to date a machine just because Glados/Eve has the control over the whole facility?
8951031
Knowing blueblood most likely
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOkay then. I have
I really want more of this.
The im different turret should be with her helping her would be funny and cute
I'm liking this and I like orange and blue are female and male and im glad they in love great work just asking when she meet the main six
Im loving this so far, but I would love to see the initial interactions the between her, the ponies, the princesses and the world as a whole explored a bit more. Like what was her first interaction with the princesses like.
Is this pre-episode 1? Is Luna back from the moon yet?
I give these first two chapters a big fat meh. The story timeline is all over the place, the pacing is too fast, and it seems to be focusing on superfluous details.
don't worry everyone, these first two chapters are just me familiarizing myself, after all no-one has done something like this where the displaced being the fic is focused on was in a fixed position, I need to look into how I'm doing her before I start feeding in everyone else, or the entire project will be pointless.
... on that note, leave a reply on this comment about if you think Ava is interesting enough to hold her own in this without depending on everyone else... and also any ways to tweak it if she isn't.
Shouldn't more of those words rhyme?
Glorious! Let the testing commence! *sluurp soda, dig into bag of popcorn*
LOL
8955462
Is there some reason you couldn't just say you were going to snack (fat) while you read?
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I think she can hold her own, you've given this a lot of room to work with, you could have her go evil, go good, she could try and find a way to give herself at least limited mobility, etc. It wouldn't hurt giving her other things or people to work with, but it's good right now.
ok so quick question does Ava have like a body not stuck in a roof or did i misunderstand something
8955430
you'd be surprised, since the original doesn't rhyme as much either.
8955731
no, she's like the real GLaDOS and affixed to the ceiling of her main chamber, why? what's making you confused?
8956246
I was thinking thats what was the project she was working on in secret
8956533
if you looked back to chapter 1, Project 1 was manipulators capable of actual sense of touch, so she could grab things like a human, project 2 gave the sense of taste and allowed her to eat.
slowly she's regaining all the positives of a human body: the abilities to touch, eat, sleep and ____, she already has a sleep mode, so what's left?
8956539
Not being stuck in on place?
8956542
no, and I'm not gonna explain why because that would be spoilers.
here's a hint: she's been getting a substitute for it from the Testing...
Luna's reaction is so amusing
REALLY! FUCKING REALLY?! it was that easy?
Well,this is certainly a new idea. I'll be keeping an eye on this. Though I do wonder what kind of reputation she'll get from her tests. Especially since the Princesses and the Elements are going to be doing some.
8959036
it actually should've been harder, but because Ava's actually (SPOILER) and that means she's a (SPOILER) so it makes sense that she could easily (SPOILER)(SPOILER)(SPOILER).
I really like this. Big fan of the Portal games so it's great to see something like this. I like how you present this story so far and hope you continue doing a great good.
I am now very curious what will happen once Ava and Starburst meet Freya....and kinda scared at the same time.
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Whos that?
8961525
the AI companion for my Halo Displaced. Seeing how Starburst and Ava messed with Rainbow and Luna I'm not sure I want them to meet her.
Imagine chell's reaction if she saw this
Lol