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Orsuros


An editing dragon who also likes hoarding art and stories.

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Heather just wanted a place to survive and be happy after losing her old world. She found it until the plague came. As a changeling queen, she needs ponies for her and her hive to survive, but what ponies are left after the disaster?

A Ponies After People story and my entry for and winner of the 3rd anniversary contest.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

An interesting beginning!
So many possibilities raised by the setting.
Thanks!

Wow. :rainbowderp:

That was... very depressing. Great job on this, man!

First, you wrote a very entertaining story and I hope to see it continued.

Second, if this story’s protagonists are successful, I can image a popular School of Friendship will be established in Salt Lick City, washing away the plague as well as ponies’ fears and hatred. According to the television series, the Magic of Friendship is more powerful than all other kinds of magic combined, as Lord Tirek discovered in the episode Twilight's Kingdom - Part 2. If the Magic of Friendship can overcome an evil god of Lord Tirek, it will overcome the plague.

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I do have some ideas of what I want to do to continue it. The school of friendship idea does seem pretty interesting, but I'd have to figure out whether that would fit with the other main ideas I had.

This is pretty good! Any update on that sequel? I'm interested to see where this goes next.

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I still plan on writing more in PaP. It's just been a busy month with a move, some conventions, and a trip. Thank you for the encouragement!

This is an impressive story to me.
I find myself surprised at how each character feels like a rather complete person with their own past and goals, even with how little story time some of them actually get.
Here we have a pony who is instinctively feared trying to create a ray of hope in one of the bleakest times and an inhospitable place, too. I love it, and like her plan.
I hope we get to see her succeed!

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Well that was neat! :O

Where can I read about this war? O.o

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I'm not entirely sure there's any PaP stories covering that specific war, but it's sort of mentioned in passing. I could look up the specific reference if you want, but it's pretty minimal.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

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That's surprising and unfortunate! :O It sounds like it could be an entire major story!

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