Unforeseen arrival
Magic and Saiyan: New expectations
I do not own My Little pony or Dragon ball Z
Chapter 1: Unforeseen arrival
A loud explosion was heard miles away, at the same time that the old warehouse was buried under the rock.
Hundreds of miles away, a namekian was interrupted by his meditation, his eyes snapping open at the sudden disappearance of the young saiyan's ki.
Piccolo frowned. "Something is not right, Gohan's ki has disappeared completely." Standing up, the namekian rose into the air and began to fly at great speed towards the last presence of ki ...
Gohan moaned as he would slowly have his eyes, feeling a strong headache accompanied by intense throbbing pain in his abdomen.
"Ugh, Wh-Where am I?" The half-saiyan said, raising his right hand to touch his forehead.
Gohan stopped abruptly as he felt a strange bump on his forehead. Touching it slowly from different angles, the hybrid gave a cry, discarding that it was some kind of bruise and realizing that a kind of horn had grown on his head.
Gohan forced himself to sit on the bed despite the enormous pain. "What the hell is this thing ?!
The concern of the black haired boy intensified when he realized that both his hands and his feet had disappeared as well and that they had been replaced with a pair of hooves.
He quickly lifted the blanket that covered the rest of his body and could clearly see that he had become a kind of horse. "This can not be possible, what happened to me!"
Gohan began to crawl to the edge of the bed, once he had arrived he slowly moved one of his hooves to the ground. "I need a mirror, there must be one in this room!"
Looking more closely at the bedroom, the half-saiyan could see a mirror covered by a white blanket nearby. Forcing himself to get up, Gohan walked slowly across the room staggering from time to time and with a feeling of total discomfort for never having walked on all fours. Finally, Gohan stopped in front of the huge mirror and using his mouth, he bit the blanket and threw it towards the marble floor.
Gohan put his hooves on his cheeks and shouted once more, still standing. "Oh my goodness!".
Looking at his new body from top to bottom, the hybrid dropped on the ground while passing one of his hooves by his mane. "I need to get out of here and look for answers, like why I became a horse and more important WHERE I AM ?!"
"I think I can answer those questions"
Gohan turned around when he heard footsteps approaching from behind. Finding himself with a colossal but elegant pony. She had a colorful and beautiful mane, covered by different blue, purple, green and pink stripes that moved effortlessly as if they were made of the same wind.
Baffled, Gohan tried to stand up as quickly as possible in case this new `guest ', tried to perform some kind of attack.
"Let me help you," the strange pony said softly. Without warning, the horn of the latter began to glow, emitting a yellow glow that covered Gohan. Thus lifting the middle saiyan from the ground and positioning it on top of the bed again.
Gohan was stunned, literally had no words to describe what had happened, a huge mare with strange hair had appeared suddenly and as if this were not enough, this magically lifted him off the floor and put her back on his bed. "It's okay ... I think I'm dreaming and I'll wake up at any moment" He said as he took one of the pillows and covered his face with it.
"I'm afraid that's not the case ... Son Gohan" said the huge figure sitting on his left side.
Gohan was trying to analyze what had happened, this strange 'horse' had been able to guess his name without having mentioned it at any time. He quickly removed the pillow from his face and sat on the bed. Looking at the huge mare in the eyes and stuttering a little "How-how do you know my name?"
" Sorry Son Gohan, but I needed to check your memories to see if you were not a threat to my little ponies. "Said the colossal figure with a calm but elegant tone.
Calming his brain to give a sense to all this, Gohan decided to leave these doubts for later and ask the most important. How he had become this. "I suppose you were the one who brought me here and treated my wounds, I am very grateful to you, but could you please explain to me how I became a kind of horse"
Looking softly at the little pony, she began to speak "A couple of days ago, while a few of my guards did their daily routine, a strange hole opened from the sky. Some described it as a kind of vortex or swirl "The portal ..., thought the half-saiyan having a little headache from the sudden memory.
"As I was informed, that strange circle in the sky ejected a strange object that directly impacts the garden of the castle. Immediately I went to where the impact had occurred, to find a stranger being very hurt inside a small crater, I honestly did not understand what kind of creature this was, I had never seen anything like it in all my years of life. Suddenly, a light enveloped the creature's body transforming it into a pony, a unicorn to be more specific "Said the pony while touching Gohan's chest with her hoove.
Gohan began to better understand what had happened, realizing that somehow or other he had transformed into a pony upon arriving at this place. The spiky haired boy touched his chin with his hoove while different theories of why he had transformed into a pony flooded his mind.
The pony beside her saw this and gave a small smile, telling the rest to the stallion. "Son Gohan, I think-"
"Just call me Gohan, you do not need that much formality," said the young saiyan interrupting the pony.
The mare cleared her throat to speak again. "So, Gohan, I think the reason you became a pony was because of the magic of our world, so I understand magic is not very common in your world, right?"
Knowing that the pony had seen his memories, Gohan just nodded and asked. "Do you have knowledge about what humans are?"
The pony got up and started walking towards the balcony of the room while answering the question "I did not have it until I saw your memories, but I dare say that you and your friends are not exactly human"
Gohan cringed on his bed, feeling the tension of the moment, had been discovered. She knew that he was not an ordinary human like the rest.
The pony saw the stallion sweating and had a nervous look, then decided to talk to calm the anguish of the pony. "Gohan, you do not have to worry, I know perfectly what you've been through. Your hard childhood, your trip to the planet namek, the appearance of those androids, the death of your father, the rejection by your mother. "His violet eyes stared at the young saiyan. "I also know that you are not an ordinary human, I know you are a hybrid between two races: the human and the saiyan"
Gohan's eyes widened, making the pony clear his throat and continue talking. "Unfortunately, I also have to inform you that it is possible for you not to come home." Gohan left his trance, now more upset than surprised. "At least not for now" said the mare, calming the young saiyan.
"I do not know what to say the truth" Gohan said scratching the back of his head. To her surprise, the mare put a hoove on her shoulder
"You do not have to say anything, you're welcome in this Kingdom like any other pony." Releasing the stallion's shoulder, the pony continued the conversation. "Gohan, the saiyan are able to recover at a much faster rate than humans, but it seems that something is happening to you, so I could see your powers are not working properly"
Gohan suddenly got up from the bed. "WHAT!"
Immediately, the saiyan medium began to try to rise in the air, charge a sphere of ki or move at a tremendous speed. Having tried hard enough, Gohan stopped short and closed his eyes tightly, concentrating to become a Super Saiyan.
The mare approached Gohan, mentioning to the latter the cause of the sudden disappearance of his powers. "Gohan, as I have seen this world has done more than just change your physical appearance, has also blocked those transformations that you call Super Saiyan, in order to give yourself a balance."
Hearing this, the pony stopped his attempt to reach the legendary phase and fell to the ground, looking the mare in the eyes with an air of concern. "That explains what happened with my transformations, but what happens with my powers"
Listening to the stallion's question, the mare sat on her flank and shook her head "Sorry Gohan, but the only thing I can think of to explain the strange behavior of your powers is the absence of your cutie mark".
Gohan winced at the last thing that had been mentioned, "Cutie ... mark?"
"You will see Gohan, each pony in Equestria is very different, each one has what makes it different from the rest, its special talent, that talent is represented in the form of a brand that appears on our flanks and tells us what we are special" Said the pony standing up and showing with her hoove her cutie mark in form of the sun.
Gohan was speechless with what he had heard, this world is much more amazing and interesting than he imagined, on the one hand he was worried about his powers, but on the other, the idea of having to discover his special talent and discovering what was good I made him jump with joy inside.
"That's amazing, I can not wait to try to find out what I'm good at" Said the half-saiyan with a smile.
The mare giggled when she saw how excited the pony was. "I know you will, Gohan, but now there is a favor that I need to ask you ..."
Without warning, one of the guards galloped into the room where the mare was. "Princess, sorry to interrupt in this way but your presence is necessary in the throne room, to arrange the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration party."
She walked slowly towards the guard "You do not have to worry, I'll go right away to tend to those ponies"
Turning his head to where the young saiyan was, the mare proceeded to speak with he "Gohan, I recommend that you be patient with the absence of your powers, I am sure they will return at any time. For now I retire I need to finish agreeing my assistance in ponyville. After all, three days are missing for the celebration of the summer sun, it was nice to talk with you, by the way your belongings are in the closet next to your bed. I leave for now"
Having left the hybrid alone, Gohan walked to the closet. Opening it and finding its combat gi in a deplorable state, with a lot of holes everywhere. Not to mention that he was now useless in his new pony form. Leaving this aside, Gohan looked for a small pocket inside his suit, begging that this had not suffered any damage like the rest. Finally, Gohan found a small closure on the top of the gi, opening it and taking out a small seed from inside.
Gohan ate the little food by chewing slowly. "I knew it would be useful, unfortunately it was the last one I had, I hope my powers come back soon I do not think I can resist another impact of that magnitude". The way slowly to his bed rising again and covered with the huge blanket.
Now calmer, Gohan began to observe the room where he was, being this very elegant, with some ornaments and a balcony that allowed you to see the beautiful stars. He had never seen it like that before, he usually lived in an economic house on a hill far from the city, of course he had also gone to the bulma house hundreds of times, but not even his house looked as luxurious as this room.
Gohan yawned as he settled on the bed and closed his eyes. "I need to thank the princess again for everything she is doing for me." With that said, Gohan began to let himself fall slowly into a deep sleep while his last words resonated in his head.
Suddenly, the half-saiyan opened his eyes suddenly realizing what he had said unconsciously "It's a PRINCESS !!"
On the bed in his bedroom, Gohan rested under the elegant blankets. Sunlight began to filter through the balcony, reaching directly into the face of the saiyan. Gohan stretched his hooves and let out a soft yawn. Forcing himself out of bed, Gohan went to the door, ready to look for the princess and clarify things a little better. Suddenly, the half-saiyan stopped in his tracks and began to feel a familiar sensation from inside his body. Baffled, Gohan was able to feel the ki to the living beings around him again. Although his powers had not returned at all, the young saiyan was calmer now knowing that nothing had happened to his powers and that he had only a temporary mishap with them.
Opening the door slowly, Gohan poked his head through it and with a quick movement turned his head to both sides making sure no one was there. Turning his head to the left, Gohan met the stare of a stallion in armor. Instantly, the half-saiyan shouted and fell backwards opening the door completely.
"Ehh ... hello, can I help you?" The saiyan asked, giving a nervous smile "I really need to train again, I could not feel the ki of this pony" thought the young saiyan still waiting for a response from the pony.
The stallion turned and signaled the hybrid to follow him. "Princess Celestia ordered me to take him to the throne room as soon as possible"
Having passed through an infinity of corridors and corridors, Gohan finally reached the throne room. Opening the huge doors, Gohan entered a huge room with different glass panels everywhere, each panel seemed to represent some important fact that had happened in this world. Without giving it more importance, the half-saiyan could see the mare with whom he had spoken the previous night, seeing her now sitting on a great throne with a couple of guards on each side. Turning his vision to ask the guard because he was in this place, Gohan watched as the latter bowed bowing to the colossal pony.
Gohan imitated the same pose quickly. His lips moved slowly with nervousness as he opened his mouth to speak. "Wanted to see me, Princess Celestia?" The half-saiyan asked, still kneeling before the alicorn.
The colossal pony smiled, looking with violet eyes at the nervous saiyan. "Gohan, I thought that formality was not necessary, please just call me Celestia."
Gohan stood up and sighed to himself, it would be strange to call someone of such high prestige just by his name, even more when this someone was a princess !. "Y-I guess I can do that, so... wanted to see me for some reason ... Celestia?" He asked, still having some difficulty in pronouncing a simple name.
The princess cleared her throat "Gohan, the celebration of the summer sun will take place the day after tomorrow, I need someone to supervise the preparations so that everything goes according to plan".
The middle saiyan was excited at last he would have the opportunity to go out and explore this new world and know himself more. Smiling at the princess, Gohan nodded and looked at the mare with a twinkle in her eyes. "I'll be happy to go oversee this celebration, just tell me when I should go and I'll do it right away."
The princess laughed seeing the emotion that emanated the saiyan "There is no hurry my good friend, you will go to the village of ponyville tomorrow morning, but I need you to return to the castle at noon to give you directions, but for now you can go out and know better the city of Canterlot ".
Gohan nodded and walked quickly towards the door. Opening it and leaving the huge room where the colossal princess was.
"This is done, now gentlemen I need-". Suddenly, the doors slowly opened again, revealing the young saiyan's head, "Jeje, Excuse me princess, but could a guard guide me to the exit, this castle is ... gigantic" asked the young saiyan, scratching the back of his neck with the right hoof.
Celestia laughed, ordering a guard to guide the hybrid. Once the saiyan had left the room, Celestia muttered to herself "I wonder how far Gohan can go"
Having left the castle, Gohan thanked the guard and began to walk through the great and beautiful streets of Canterlot. The city was huge and the middle Saiyan had no idea where to go, but he knew where to start. Asking for directions to the different inhabitants of the city, Gohan positioned himself in front of a building covered by a spiral staircase.
Gohan started jogging as he climbed the white and thin stairs of the huge building, reaching the top floor of the building.
After a few moments, the hybrid was opening blue doors adorned with glass in the shape of a heart. Having closed the door, Gohan observed a balcony adorned with furniture, a couple of flower pots and a staircase that seemed to lead to a second floor. Without wasting time, the young saiyan climbed the stairs. Finding a large library that had an iconic huge hourglass that was supported by golden beams, consecutively near the hourglass was a huge glass panel that worked as a wall, allowing to see the huge city.
"This is amazing, I've never seen so many books in my life" Gohan walked slowly through the library, carefully observing every detail he possessed. "Excellent, if there is any place where I can learn the history of Equestria it is here, LET'S START!"
As if it were a child, the half-saiyan began to take hundreds of books and read them as fast as he could, being bothered from time to time by the inability not to turn a page with his new hooves ...
A few hours later, Gohan heard the doors of the floor below open. Leaning to see who had entered, Gohan saw a strange creature with purple skin and a pair of green scales protruding from his head.
"Is that a dragon?" The hybrid asked, squinting and analyzing every detail of the little creature he had entered.
The baby dragon was humming a song and wrapping a small plush bear in a red box. "This should be enough" said the dragon, finishing wrapping the gift with a golden ribbon.
Without giving it more importance, Gohan continued reading the book that had him so entertaining, going to the next page and losing himself in the hundreds of words that he had in front.
Suddenly, a strong blow on the floor below accompanied by the dragon's moan brought him back to reality. "Spike, Spiiiiiike? There you are. " Instantly, a pony with lilac fur, sea-blue mane with violet and pink stripes, galloped up the stairs, totally altered for some reason. "Quick, find me that-" The pony stopped short when she saw someone else in the library. It was not usual to see another pony around here, so the unicorn only saw the pony and blinked a couple of times.
"Ehh... hi?" Asked the pony still surprised to see someone else here. Gohan left his trance and prepared to respond to the pony, but a baby dragon climbed the stairs quickly, rubbing his head for the blow he had received. "What do you need Twi- ... and who is he?"
"Well I-" the young saiyan started to speak, only to be interrupted by the unicorn.
"Spike we do not have time for this, I need you to look for the old copy of Predictions and Prophecies" the pony shouted, turning her head to see the dragon and returning to its state of alteration.
"Right away!" He said, bebe dragoon giving a military salute to the pony and running to the top of the library.
Ignoring what had happened, Gohan just continued reading his book, occasionally listening to some murmurs thanks to his audience of saiyan. "Spike, what's that for?" "Well, it was a gift for Moon Dancer, but-". Pointing his head through the book, Gohan watched as the baby dragon took off its old gift from the tail and the little plush bear fell to the ground, squeaking when it hit it.
Gohan turned his eyes so he could see the pony again, the latter was searching through a large number of books while using his magic and quickly read the titles of all these. "No, no, no ... no, no, no, ugh SPIKE!" The unicorn shouted, attracting the attention of the baby dragon. "I'm sorry Twilight, but I think that pony over there is already reading it" The dragon ran towards the pony indicating with its right claw the young saiyan. "Ugh what I was missing, well Spike go ask, I need that book immediately."
Obeying without hesitation, the baby dragon approached the hybrid "Ehh, excuse me, but you think you could lend me that book, my friend needs it for something very important"
Gohan looked at the dragon and then at the book, repeating the same action for a couple of seconds. "Oh I'm sorry, if I had known that this was the book you were looking for, I would have given it to you." Gohan closed the book and extended his hooves to the baby dragon.
"Thank you" The little dragon said taking the book and running towards the unicorn again. Once it had arrived, the unicorn took the book with its magic and began to search for a particular section within it.
"Good job Spike" I congratulate the pony on the baby dragon. "Now let's see ..., Elements, elements, e, e, e" Said the unicorn, turning a lot of pages quickly while her violet eyes moved from right to left. "Aha! Elements of Harmony, see: Mare in the Moon?" The pony wondered, now confused by what she had read.
"Mare in the moon?" He asked as he drinks dragon while organizing the books that were scattered on the floor. "But that's just an old ponies' tale"
Ignoring the words of the baby dragon, the mare continued looking for "Mare, mare ... aha! The Mare in the Moon, myth from olden pony times. A powerful pony who wanted to rule Equestria, defeated by the Elements of Harmony and imprisoned in the moon. Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, the stars will aid in her escape, and she will bring about eternal nighttime ... ".
Gohan was surprised by what he had heard, he had no idea that in this world there were also evil beings who had tried to conquer him. Although on the one hand it was not a surprise, with so much magic in this world it was not surprising that there had been beings who had used it in the wrong way.
"That sounds terrible!" Said the dragon staggering in the library ladder while keeping some of the remaining books.
"I know, we need to warn the princess as soon as possible!" The unicorn sighed, nervous about the current situation. Suddenly, unable to hold on any longer, the baby dragon fell from the stairs while screaming.
Leaving his thoughts aside, Gohan galloped as fast as he could, stopping at the exact spot, and with a baby dragon falling on his back.
With the lower part of his body pointing towards the ground, the dragon sat on the back of the young saiyan and wiped his forehead with his claw. "It was close".
The baby dragon under the back of the hybrid, thanking him once had stepped on the ground. The pony ran beside them both, looking annoyed at the baby dragon. "Spike, that was very imprudent, you could have hurt you." The unicorn looked at the middle saiyan, giving him a smile "Thank you, I do not know what I would have done if something had happened to my poor dragon"
"Hey, I'm not a baby anymore!" Moaned the dragon crossing both arms and looking annoyed at the pony.
Gohan smiled as he shook his head. "It was nothing, I also believe that anyone would have done the same." The mare nodded and walked slowly towards him baby dragon, handing him a parchment and a feather with his magic. "Well spike, Take a note please, to the Princess"
The words of the mare echoed in his mind. Instantly, Gohan suddenly remembered that he had agreed to meet the princess at noon in the throne room. "It can not be, how could I forget it!"
Disconcerted, the unicorn turned her gaze to the hybrid, observing a worried expression on her face. "Something wrong?" Asked the mare, still confused by the pony's quick change of attitude.
Gohan sat on his flank telling him "Well, I need find me to the Princess Celestia at noon and-".
The pony's eyes widened at what the stallion had told him. "Do you know Princess Celestia ?! The mare asked, bringing her face closer to the half-saiyan's.
"Yes, but in fact I just met her." The young saiyan said looking into the eyes of the mare.
Moving away from her face, the pony became even more altered. "! You can not fail Princess Celestia, if the princess summoned you at noon you should be there immediately! "
As if by magic, Gohan began to be lifted by the mare in the air, watching as the latter went down the stairs and approached the blue doors. "You need to go immediately if you want to be on time. Also I do not think the princess likes a pony that is tardy "
Gohan descended slowly on the ground, while the mare ceased its magic and positioned it in front of the doors. Nodding, Gohan thanked the unicorn and opened the doors, preparing to gallop as fast as his hooves would allow.
Having reached the throne room, Gohan opened the huge doors slowly, walking through the large red carpet. He was still amazed by the enormous elegance and beauty of the room, of the whole city to be more exact. Although, I was still curious about the meaning of those strange glass panels that were scattered throughout the room. Maybe when I have some more time I could go back to that library and look for something that clarifies the hundreds of questions I had in his head.
Once in front of Celestia's throne, Gohan made a quick bow to the princess.
The mare looked at the middle saiyan, giving her a smile. "Thank you for coming Gohan, in a moment I will give you the indications about the Summer Sun Celebration. We just need to wait for a student of mine. "
"Wanted to see me, princess celestia?"
Suddenly, the same pony from the library entered the room with a baby dragon sitting on its back. "It's her!, ... I really need to ask the name of each pony I know" thought the young saiyan, chiding himself for forgetting something so important.
"Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student" Celestia said saluting the purple pony. "Thanks for coming, now we can start."
Twilight walked to the stallion, sitting next to him and waiting for the next word from the Princess with a big smile.
The mare on the throne cleared her throat. "I need you both to oversee the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration."
Twilight was speechless, never would have expected the princess to send him a task like that. Especially now that he had a duty to convince the princess about the prophecy of Nightmare Moon. "Princess is sure of this, I-"
Celestia lifted one of her hooves and closed her eyes. "I have not finished Twilight, as a special task I need to ask you to teach Gohan the city of Canterlot and our varied customs, he is ... from a distant place"
Twilight came out of her trance, shaking her head on both sides. "I ... I'll do what I can, princess, I will not disappoint you."
The princess closed her eyes and nodded, indicating to the pair of ponies and the dragon that they could now retire.
Once they were at the main gates of the immense castle, Twilight looked at the young saiyan. "I think we should start now if we want to finish by the end of the day."
As they both descended the stairs, Gohan felt a small touch on his shoulder. He turned around to find a baby dragon staring him in the eye. "I wanted to thank you for save me in the library, I'm Spike, by the way".
The half-saiyan smiled, extending his hoove to the dragon. "I'm Gohan, nice to meet you equally"
"Hey, Why do they take so long?" The unicorn asked, waiting at the base of the stairs.
"We were just chatting a little," said the baby dragon, looking at the mare.
Gohan signaled the dragon to follow him. "Well I think we should go now, I'm excited to know this place, it's huge!"
The dragon jumped on the back of the mare, raising its claw and indicating quickly to the side of the city. "Twilight, let's go to my favorite bakery first, I'm sure he'll love the donuts they sell there!"
Twilight laughed at the attitude of the baby dragon. Gohan smiled equally, galloping behind the unicorn and the baby dragon as he followed his directions.
At a window in the castle, Princess Celestia peered out at the trio, concentrating on the thoughts that resonated in her mind. "Go Son Gohan ..." she smiled "fulfill your destiny"
I hope you liked the first chapter of this story, this chapter is positioned in the first episode of the series.
Thank you for taking the time to read 
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Hmm.... Not bad.
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Thanks for the support
This is actually pretty good. I can imagine this Gohan being a mix of his canon and abridged selves.
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I'm glad you liked it
Turned into a pony, no thanks.
Good luck, and I hope you have fun writing the story.
It's a really nice idea, and the setup is pretty ok minus a few things.
Particle accelerator being supercharged creating a wormhole/portal, I like it.
Ambient magic in Equestria changing his form, pretty ok, though the explination was a bit lacking.
Gohan temporarily loosing his powers, believable, but, again, the explination was a bit lacking, even directly saying that its to make him not-over powered/unbalanced.
And celestia, why would she put Gohan, a guy she just met, on the same task of doing the SSCel with her prized student? Yes she probably knows everything about him due to the mind reading (I think she went too far with that, but it's a good detail to keep for a not-all-good celestia), but how does she know about his "destiny" and what he's supposed to do? She is throwing me off a bit, but I'd like to see what you do with her in the future, it could be interesting.
And now for my last question, what language are you translating from? It's pretty clear this wasn't written in english, so some characterization I talked about earlier could have been lost in translation.
Overall, it's a pretty good story so far and it has a lot of potential, let's see where you take this.
i'll take a look in the morning. :D
Nice concept, but you write like a noob. I could barely follow the story in some parts because of how jumbled the pronouns were getting and some places where entire sentences just dropped off without any meaning.
This is a interesting story so far, can't wait to see where it goes.
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Sorry about that. I will rewrite completely the next chapter, because I have it in spanish .
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Thank you for your amazing review and to answer your questions:
- Celestia sent Gohan with Twilight because she saw the opportunity to teach more things about the friendship to Gohan and for other reasons ... I will explain that in the future
-And for the second question: yes, my native language is the Spanish and I know
I made a mistake trusting in the Google translator.
I will rewrite the next chapter, but dont worry about the writing. I have studied English for a long time.
Well, I'll finish the next chapter soon. Thank you for reading
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Thanks for your support
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Nice, I've heard good things about grammarly, maybe run the chapter through that once or twice so it can help spot some things you might miss. Maybe a google translate + grammarly pass would help? I've never used it myself though, but it's something to try I guess.
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I will keep your advice in mind, thanks
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I see this story having potential in the future. Would you like an editor since I can tell English is not your first language.
I can spend a little on it making those curections for you if you like. Privet message me if your intrested.
Nice one but if my memory does not fail me, i think there's magic in the DB universe, just a little detail jejeje
You have my attention. This is interesting so far.
I really dont like it when they start off knowing everything about the main characted at the very start..... but thats just me.
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Dont worry, the drama is more interesting and profound than you think.
Please tell me that's Spike will get some sort of powers or do something amazing that don't let him look like a sidekick
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of course, don't worry about that. I have some ideas.
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good luck
That's great!
Why does the summary say Gohan never hoped to find love or friendship?
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Well, How many possibilities do you have to land in a dimension with beings that give you a home and love?
that's why the summary says: He never hope to find.
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Got it. It wasn't clear to me that you meant finding them in that dimension, and I was confused because Gohan definitely has friends and loved ones.
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No problem, if you have another question, let me know.
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Ok, got it.
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Still, you should clarify so people won't get confused.
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Well, the story takes place after the cell games arc and before boo arc, , it is not within a specific arc.
I can't wait too see the next chapter. And by the way is his friends from back home realized he in equestria and Bulma will make a portal for him or will Celestia do it. I'm just curious. And I hope we see the ponies go to Gohan place where he lives.
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Thank you very much for your support, I am working on the chapter at this time and I will upload it very soon and about Gohan's friends, only those who have the ability to feel the ki noticed the disappearance of the half saiyan. But that part of the story I'll tell y'all later.
stronk start.
ME WANTS MORE!
This is off to a interesting start. Will it be continued?
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Is this story still going?
9106822
Of course it will continue and I'm really sorry for not constantly updating, but I have not had much time. I've been very busy looking for a place to study my career, but now everything is fine, I found a place and I can update more often. By the way, I will study animation, I really love drawing and creating new things, so while this story grows I will do it too.
9108619
Ok good luck with you're career!😁
9108619
Whoa! You're gonna study animation. So you're gonna be an animation person. That really cool!
9108680
And not gonna lie I can see gohan and twilight as a ship because of their personalities.