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Amereep


Here to show you what real creativity is. I'm rusty at animation and haven't set up my voice recorder, but I write alot and try to bring a fresh look to it.

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Life may be one of the longest experiences we'll ever get, but it's also one of the hardest. We each have our own personal issues, struggles, challenges, tragedies, and there could be even more ready to drop on us at any given time.

You will always have to accept what has transpired, you have no control over it. But what you do have control of, is how you'll let it affect you.

Four ponies will be tested with this lesson as they head off to save Equesria's magic, for they are the only ones left in Equestria that still possess any.


This is a 'Final Fantasy' crossover that'll be much like my 'Legend of Zelda' one as you don't need to know anything about the franchise in order to enjoy the story. The Final Fantasy elements will be pushing this story along, as there'll be plenty of common themes and characters that are associated with the franchise (some will be the species/monster and some may act like certain characters).

My basic concept is to make a 'My Little Pony' story that comes out as if it was meant for a 'Final Fantasy' game.

This will be present tense in 3rd person pony. HOWEVER, I won't have any inner dialogue and instead only focus on feelings and emotions of the characters.

Story takes place almost 2 years after the MLP episode, 'The Ending of the End'.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 21 )

Is there any Character that has AS in that story ?

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Yeah, it's intended to be a surprise but...
The Ice Queen.

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K, then you can keeping in the group

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Without (hopefully) spoiling anything, can I say that is a surprisingly fitting name?

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There's a lot of befitting names in this story.

Like one of the main OCs who's... a pegasus with an prosthetic wing named 'Second Wind'.

And Tempest's weapon which is called... 'The Spiorad' which is Gaelic for 'The Spirit'. Very befitting for a Claymore (Scottish sword) and for what happens to that sword in the story.

Which one of the games is this story crossing over with?

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It's crossing over with the entire franchise rather than any specific game in mind.

Shining REALLY needs to pull his head out of his flank and let Tempest make the tactical decisions, he makes better diplomatic choices anyways.

Sure hope this continues. It's good sofar.

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Sure hope this continues.

That's the plan.

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It's 'A Secret'.

Alright, it took me a long while to read this chapters but it was worth it. I may not have played ALL the Final Fantasy games (only finished I and X, while also played II, VIII and XIII) but I did catch many references here, enough to satisfy my love for references.

I'll enjoy this read.

Nice to see this update.

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I hope it makes up for the wait.

Amazing, loved how you made the mechanics part of the story

You will always have to accept what has transpired, you have no control over it. But what you do have control of, is how you'll let it effect you.

I think it's affect than effect.

My Little review & Feedback Also I did this review.

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To Google

*Batman transition*

Affect
/əˈfekt/
verb
have an effect on; make a difference to.

  • touch the feelings of (someone); move emotionally.

Effect
/əˈfekt/
verb
cause (something) to happen; bring about.

Physics

  • a physical phenomenon.

...huh... the subtlety is so faint, but you're correct on your assumption. Thank you.

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I was thinking of it for a moment and thought of it as if it was a million dollar question.

The pressure is lifted.

i hope you plan to continue with this story. I'm looking forward to 8 through to 13

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