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TheCamel


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Those Minotaurs would taste so delicious once they go through a meat grinder. Meat tastes even better if you put salt or sauce...

Damn. Just thinking about these big and strong bulls makes me so hungry for some odd reason.

Something tells me that... Spike is going to kill all of the minotaurs along with Celestia.

I can make all of this an even darker premise: given that Celestia's been around for so long, and it's unreasonable to assume that she didn't know what the minotaurs were about, it's very likely that she knew this was going to happen.

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted May 27th, 2018

can stories like this (striped zbook fall of equestria and this) just be removed? this stuff is hot garbage

Wow, I'm sorry to say this Camel my man, but this story was VERY meh.

There's bad porn, and then BAD porn. It's like the difference between "Birdemic" and "After last season". This isn't entertainingly bad. This is sub-Creepy McCreeperson, and coming from me that's bad.

Seems like the Minotauren bad end from CoC

Are you planning on making a sequel to this story?

Damn it man.
You should make another story to this
Full blown war.

I hate the ending!!! I HATE THE SITUATION YOU PUT MY GIRLFRIEND TWILIGHT THROUGH YOU SON OF A BI-
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Actually... I end the ending.:twilightsheepish:

So you got a lot of negative feedback from this story but I just want to say that I liked it. I admit the writing quality has room for I improvement. But that's not to say it was poorly written.

Also I didn't have a big moral problem with the content like some of the other readers. The drama was dark, which isn't to everyone's taste. Not all stories have a happy ending. But while dark, I enjoyed the twists of how things went from had to worse for Shining.

To be honest I would have enjoyed seeing another chapter where Cadence does travel across he sea and Shining is forced to watch what Minos promised would happen. But seeing as you posted this a year ago and marked it as completed, it's a shame that won't happen.

Mostly red this due to lack of minotaur stories. Overall, pretty meh.

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War? Who needs war?

I demand a massacre.

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exactly that where this would head too. XD

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