Gut Feeling

SilverPony98 #1 · May 27th, 2018 · 7 · 2 · She's Not Fine At All ·

Those Minotaurs would taste so delicious once they go through a meat grinder. Meat tastes even better if you put salt or sauce...

Damn. Just thinking about these big and strong bulls makes me so hungry for some odd reason.

Purplefan9

Purplefan9 #2 · May 27th, 2018 · 4 · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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8949192
You and me both

SuperGodzilla2030

SuperGodzilla2030 #3 · May 27th, 2018 · 5 · 1 · She's Not Fine At All ·

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Something tells me that... Spike is going to kill all of the minotaurs along with Celestia.

Fire Soul

Fire Soul #4 · May 27th, 2018 · 6 · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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I can make all of this an even darker premise: given that Celestia's been around for so long, and it's unreasonable to assume that she didn't know what the minotaurs were about, it's very likely that she knew this was going to happen.

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Combo_Breaker

Combo_Breaker #6 · May 27th, 2018 · 8 · 18 · She's Not Fine At All ·

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can stories like this (striped zbook fall of equestria and this) just be removed? this stuff is hot garbage

Robinebra

Robinebra #7 · May 27th, 2018 · 3 · 1 · She's Not Fine At All ·

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Wow, I'm sorry to say this Camel my man, but this story was VERY meh.

Gabriel LaVedier

Gabriel LaVedier #8 · May 27th, 2018 · 6 · 2 · She's Not Fine At All ·

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There's bad porn, and then BAD porn. It's like the difference between "Birdemic" and "After last season". This isn't entertainingly bad. This is sub-Creepy McCreeperson, and coming from me that's bad.

Yurtus

Yurtus #9 · May 27th, 2018 · 7 · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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Seems like the Minotauren bad end from CoC

Love able chaos

Love able chaos #10 · May 28th, 2018 · · · I'm Sure She's Fine, Honey ·

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Not bad so far.

Love able chaos

Love able chaos #11 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Nope, She's Not Fine ·

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Damn it Shining

Arkunus Stilshire

Arkunus Stilshire #12 · Jun 5th, 2018 · 1 · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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Are you planning on making a sequel to this story?

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #13 · Jun 17th, 2018 · 1 · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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Damn it man.
You should make another story to this
Full blown war.

TheShadowKnight

TheShadowKnight #14 · Jul 14th, 2018 · · 1 · She's Not Fine At All ·

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I hate the ending!!! I HATE THE SITUATION YOU PUT MY GIRLFRIEND TWILIGHT THROUGH YOU SON OF A BI-

Actually... I end the ending.

Haunter_Rayne

Haunter_Rayne #15 · Jul 10th, 2019 · · · She's Not Fine At All ·

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So you got a lot of negative feedback from this story but I just want to say that I liked it. I admit the writing quality has room for I improvement. But that's not to say it was poorly written.

Also I didn't have a big moral problem with the content like some of the other readers. The drama was dark, which isn't to everyone's taste. Not all stories have a happy ending. But while dark, I enjoyed the twists of how things went from had to worse for Shining.

To be honest I would have enjoyed seeing another chapter where Cadence does travel across he sea and Shining is forced to watch what Minos promised would happen. But seeing as you posted this a year ago and marked it as completed, it's a shame that won't happen.

J-90