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Philosophysics


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A skeleton pony travels the newly formed Equestrian Wasteland in search of answers to questions that can only be found by living life to the utmost extent.

It's a very good thing that he's a skeleton, because he's not very good at staying alive.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

This is a rather good story, keep up the good work, I wait in anticipation.

8939877
The next couple chapters are kind of boring in my opinion, but necessary for the continued setup.

So maybe stick tight?

I have to be honest, Did not expect five votes already.

8940084
Don't worry, I plan on sticking around until the conclusion, I look forward to what you have planned, and I'm surprised this doesn't have more votes personally.

8941947
I just hope I can keep up the updates.

It is disheartening to publish five chapters and have only three comments.

You have my interest, it's an interesting character and I'm liking the the internal dialogue a great deal. Looking foward to more, keep it up!

8942592
I'm trying to capture Ye Olde Frustration with Thy Younger Self.

I'm sure everybody wants to choke their younger selves at one point.

8942836
Well you're doing fantastic with that, this is one of the most well written story that I've read in a long time.

8943348
You're kidding. You better be.

If not, here's a link to an ACTUALLY well written series. Ten novels long. Thank me later.https://www.fimfiction.net/story/116344/foal-of-the-forest

8943358
I'm not kidding you actually, I've read a lot, and I mean A LOT of stories, and you are better than most of them by a long shot, even some of the more well known authors, trust me, I know a good story when I see one, and this is one of them, thanks for the link though, I haven't read this particular one before.

8943371
Well, I hope I continue to live up to your expectations and don't sufufer writer's block or ass pulls.

Another good chapter, it's developing nicely. As a bit of friendly advice, it might be worth to get a pre-reader as a second pair of eyes and sounding board - two heads are better at one at catching little snags! Don't let it dishearten you, keep it up!

While microscopes were plentiful in the lab, the glass lenses

Paragraph ends here my dude, either add more or scrap it!

8952371
Don't apologise my dude, it's part of the writing process!

8953039
Thanks for understanding. Call me out on any mistakes and I'll do my best to fix it.

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