• Published 28th Jul 2012
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Of War and Friendship - DocDelray



Mandalorians and Ponies working together to stop the Deathwatch, what could be better than that?

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Epilogue

Far to the north of the Equestrian border, deep within the snow-capped mountains, sat an ancient fortress carved into the living stone itself. In centuries long past, it had been a key military outpost during aggressions with the Gryphons to the north. During these brutal exchanges, the ancient fortress had changed ‘hands’ several times. Now it served as neutral ground and an ideal location for peace talks and summits between the various nations.

Celestia paced back and forth along the stone balcony overlooking the sprawling mountain range. Her eyes scanned the skies with an impatient glare as her hooves clacked against the stonework. It had been several days since her world had learned it was not alone in the universe. In this time their new allies, the Mandalorians, had extended a hand in friendship towards the various nations bringing about the talks today.

Finally, upon the horizon, she saw what she had been waiting for as a small shuttle craft made its way across the mid-day sky towards her. With a few choice words, she eyed the craft as it made its descent. A strong wind kicked up from the engine blowback, rippling through her long, bright pink mane and tail. A small pang of sadness teased at her as she was reminded of the power she no longer possessed since that fateful encounter with Teth. Granted, her magical prowess was still far beyond any being alive, though barely a fraction of what she once could wield.

As the craft hovered in place over the edge of the balcony, its gangway lowered to allow the important passengers to disembark. Celestia recognized the humanoid forms and the distinct armor of Shaysa Fett. One key figure stood out to her, a tall Equestrian standing close to half the size of Celestia. She was clad in alien armor hued as the night sky that had been fit to her unique form. A deep blue aura surrounded her helmet before it was lifted off, letting Luna’s sky blue, short-kempt mane spill out.

“Sister, Mandalore Fett, how nice of you both to finally show up.” Despite centuries of honing her diplomatic skills, Celestia could do little to drain the venom from her tone.

“I apologize Celestia, completely my fault,” Shaysa stated cheerfully, “I insisted we share a glass of Corellian Blue, calm the nerves before such an important talk. You really should consider joining us, next time.”

Celestia fought as hard as she could to withhold the urge to verbally tear into the alien warlord. Keeping a vice-like grip on her emotions, “Perhaps at a later date. For now though, I would like a moment to speak with my sister before we address the others.”

Shaysa gave a bow of acknowledgment before leaving the pair. The white Alicorn waited until she was satisfied their off world guests were no longer in ear shot before turning a critical eye to her sibling. Her growing ire now clearly reflected in her face.

Luna let Celestia stew a moment in her anger before finally losing patience, “If thou doth have something of which to speak-”

“Indeed I do Luna,” Celestia quickly cut her off, “What exactly were you thinking when you forced us into this alliance?”

“That I was acting in Equestria’s best interests!” Luna barked at her sister.

“Be that as it may, you did this without any discussion with me or any consideration of the allies Equestria already had!”

Luna snorted indignantly at the mention of allies, “Yes, let us take a moment to look at those whom think themselves our equals, the feathered cats or perhaps the cave mutts.” She spit out each term.

“Luna, it’s been centuries, when will you let these old hatreds die?”

Luna quickly spun around to meet her sister eye to eye, “Centuries, perhaps for thee dearest sister, but not for I. The treacheries and vile acts our people suffered at claw and talon are but distant memories for thee, tis not but a long dreamless sleep that separates me from those dark days. As for our new alliance, I was led to believe my crown still held power and authority, perhaps that hath changed as well with the political shifts whilst I slumbered those many years away.”

Celestia visibly fought to keep her growing anger from getting away from her, “How dare you throw that back in my face! Not a day has gone by in all these years that I don’t regret what I did to you.”

Luna let out a sigh as she brought herself into check as well, “I am sorry my dearest sister… I doth speak out of turn and with little thought of how my words may wound.” Her head lowered in sadness as she moved closer to her sister, “When I stood upon the vessel of Mandalore Fett, I was witness to hordes of ships spread out across the endless night. Twas an act of desperation and a choice born of little consideration, but I shall stand by it.” Her shimmering eyes desperately stared into Celestia’s, “I ask thee sister, please, stand with me and see this choice to its end, if not for I then our people.”

Celestia let out a tired sigh as she broke under her sister’s pleading eyes, “Alright, I will trust your judgment Luna, I only hope we can defuse the situation waiting for us inside.”

Behind the visor of the helmet under Luna’s wing, a small icon had been flashing the entire time this conversation had gone on. A similar icon was active in the far corner of Shaysa’s HUD as well. With a knowing smile, she ignored the untrusting glares of the beings assembled. The massive hall, like the rest of the fortress had been carved into the living rock and was formed to accommodate the majority of this planet’s species. Shaysa’s gaze drifted over the ornate carvings that decorated the walls and the spiraling pillars that lined the room. At the center of the room, a much welcomed roaring fire pit crackled and cast a dim light upon the hall while at the furthest end of the room a wide open balcony allowed a breathtaking view of the mountain ranges.

Fett’s attention was drawn away from the wonderful craftsmanship when the double doors behind her swung open to allow the entry of the Equestrian Princesses. The Mand’alor took note of the glaring stares they received from the assembled beings all clad in what she assumed they viewed as finery in their borders.

One creature in particular took this moment to let them know just how displeased he was with this meeting, “Celestia, what exactly is the meaning of all of this?” Fett took apart what she could recognize about this creature’s build. It appeared to be a mix of feline and avian wrapped in finely-sewn garb. His large, powerful wings flared out in anger, “All of our courts have received envoys from these… These things, and now you leverage archaic treaties to force a meeting of our countries.”

The white Alicorn raised a hoof, “Please, try to calm yourself, Prime Minister,” She spoke smoothly, “I am sure you have all had a moment to at least hear what these beings have to say.”

A tall, brutish-looking creature snorted in retort. Its body was strongly built and bipedal, wide shoulders and thick muscles rippled beneath thickly plated armor that gleamed brightly. Atop its head sat a pair of long, sharpened horns jutting out from either side of the beast’s head, “They speak nonsense about being travelers from the stars.”

“Because we are,” Shaysa stated flatly as she reclined against a randomly chosen pillar.

Celestia shot a biting glare at both Fett and then towards Luna who snorted back the urge to break into a fit of giggles. Her mind briefly mused on how nice it would be to magically silence the pair of them; at least until this whole affair was over. She returned her attention to the rest of the delegates assembled, “Yes, as hard as it is to believe, they have been telling you the truth. They do in fact come from far beyond our own solar system.”

“I believe it to be true,” A stocky figure dressed in a pressed, blue uniform with a chest adorned with medals spoke up. The canine creature with short stubby back legs and long muscular arms padded its way towards the center of the room, “I have seen their technology at work, no nation on this planet can possibly boast such advancements.”

“And what exactly do our visitors from the stars want from us?” The bird cat questioned as it looked over Fett in a predatory manner.

Behind her visor, she couldn’t help but smirk at the ever-thickening air of unease around her. Pushing herself from the pillar, she began a casual stroll towards the opened end of the hall, “All we want is cooperation,” Shaysa stated as she leaned her elbows and back against the stone railing, “To that extent, I have a simple message for you all.”

“What message would that be, off-worlder?” The horned hulk questioned.

She assured them in a pleasant tone as she took in the view, “You see, we Mandalorians are a very welcoming group. All are welcome, and all are equal under our banner. We have allied ourselves first with the nation of Equestria, but we can just as easily extend the same courtesies to all of you, as well.”

To this, the already very vocal half-bird half-cat couldn’t help but laugh, “Hah, you sound exactly like Celestia and all her talk of friendship and peace. It is a tempting offer, but spies within the white gold city have heard whispers that the goddesses of the sun and moon have fallen from grace. What would stop us from simply attacking Equestria in their time of weakness?”

From one of the pouches on her belt she produced a small device as she turned to face the room, “This.”

With a press of the button, the sky behind her lit a bright crimson before massive bolts slammed into the jagged mountain visage on the horizon. The deafening roar of explosions and smothering heat drowned out the shouts and screams of fear and surprise. Mand’alor Fett stood her ground, back lit by the barrage from far above the planet, her visor reflecting the uncaring bonfire of the fire at the center of the room.

As the shock began to wear off, all eyes were on Shaysa, “Now, just in case anything was lost in translation allow me to rephrase that little statement,” Her voice rang out clear and bristling with authority, “Equestria is now under the protection of the Mandalorians, her people and her land are considered a vital part of our nation. As such, any acts of aggression taken upon the Equestrian people or attacks made on her holdings will be seen as a declaration of war against the Mandalorians. Now, I’m sure a few of you are considering testing this for yourselves. So let me offer you a little bit of advice.” With a motion, she pointed out the smoldering heap of rock that once was a mighty, snow-capped peak, “Remember what you saw here today, remember what we are capable of, and then ask yourself: is extinction truly worth saving face?”

In the throes of the chaos, Celestia beheld this show of force and aggression in mingled shock and disgust. A chill ran down her spine as she began to realize the extremes her new allies were capable of going to. Her gaze quickly shifted to her sister, only to find her heart being gripped tightly in fear and sadness by what she saw. Upon Luna’s face was a smile of satisfaction.

Comments ( 66 )

Wait...it ended? But you left so many loose ends! :raritydespair:

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Did I? Well, guess I'll just have to cover those at some point in the future. Maybe a sequel or something. :ajsmug:

Now the story really starts. Good work Doc I'm looking forward to more. :twilightsmile: Soon hopefully. :moustache:

And so ends part one of this series that you have created. All I can really say on this matter is that I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Great job on this story!!

Great story one of the best star wars/MLP crossover ever. hopefully a sequel

Please write that sequel soon, I join my fellow fans of this tale with the cry, MOAR!:flutterrage: But seriously, I loved all of this story, please continue to write, please? :fluttershysad:

Sweetiebot: There is a falsehood in your summary, there can be no such thing as too much friendship is magic

1831253
Hah, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

1831789
Erm... Uh... You really wanna know that?

'the feathered cats or perhaps the cave mutts.' bit dickish Luna, beside that Diamond Dog I assume to be their alphas of alphas seemed smart enough to believe them, sides Griffon/Diamond Dog mandalors? They'd be badass like Tray levels of badassery.

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Can you freaking imagine it? With as fast and strong as a Griffon is, then clad them armor and give them blasters, it'll be so awesome!

Once mooooorrrrre the Sith shall ruuuuule the galaxy.... and we shall have Ponies.

1850615
Oh, if only it was that simple.

Kandosii gehat'ik vod.
I would have liked to see more of Mackers' alien obsession, if you know what I mean. :rainbowwild:

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Hah, everyone loves Mackers, and Machers loves everything about women, regardless of planet, species or faction. Something fun about writing for an intergalactic sexual deviant, I'm defiantly going to have to write for him again.

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Heh, only spotted the one?

2047290 ...I'm bad at references... :fluttershbad:

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Honestly dude, I love this comment of yours. No one else has really stopped and tried to call Kad out on what he did the way you have. It was a selfish move on his part in the long run and he doesn't care. He's not a hero, none of them are, they just look like they are at times because they're killing the guys who are arguably worse than them.

a very interesting story...thought i do have one question...where in the hay was Spike while all this was going down? also, i noticed those few lines u gave Pinkie...r u trying to say that shes really a Silth? somehow, i cant quite see it...

Liked it
Idea for future stories with mandos
Put in footnotes of what the mando'a phrases mean

2560340 Yeah, now that I've read a bit further (ch 16 now) he is more Simmins than Grif. I just heard his line in Grif's voice. ...:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:!! Have you ever thought of doing a RvB/MLP cross before? Could be EPIC!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

2560352
It's actually been done a whole lot along with just about anything else involving Halo and MLP. Sides, Star Wars is more my wheelhouse, glad you're enjoying the story though. Feel free to comment and critique by the way.

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Keep reading and find out.

Am I wrong to think this epilogue points to a future sequel?

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I don't even, whaaaaaaat, I mean, c'mon, a sequel, what would give you that idea?
*nudges part two back under the rug*

Hmm.
This might be personal preference or it might have something to it but I feel this story misses a huge amount of opportunities.

I feel that the Equestrians are undersold, underutilized. That the Star Wars components of the crossover take almost full overriding priority over the FiM components. That the ponies are forced into a mold that is manageable from the perspective of the Mandolorians. That much opportunity to utilize Equestrian lore and pony abilities and character attributes is ignored. That all of the major affecting changes on outlook, belief, and conviction are applied to the ponies in a one sided vindication of the Mando agenda and philosophy.

While the story is exciting and decently written, I am disappointed at how unbalanced your imagination is in favor of the incredibly destructive influence of the Mandolorians and the Star Wars universe in general.

It feels almost disturbingly as if you are opining that peace is a flaw if one does not need to constantly struggle for it. That when an oasis in a desert of conflict and destruction is found, the righteous course of action is to muddy the water. That the way of the warrior is superior to the way of the diplomat, rather than the truth that they both have their roles to play. And the truth that any protector who believes they are more important than the thing they protect is unworthy, corrupt, and tyrannical.

The ponies have so much to teach being like the Mandolorians and the rest of the galaxy. It's too bad you seem to believe all they have is naivete.

4266222 I just wanna point out the whole 'teach the mandos' stuff.
Apart from satine and fett bringing it back the mando culture has barely changed since its founding as well as its language.
And please they are naïve that whole friendship and magic stuff is great but untempered by the larger scheme of things.

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You are missing the point.

The Mandos are nomads. That means that while they are united under one banner and are career soldiers, individuality is not discouraged. They are already supremely tolerant since they allow anyone to join who can hack it and who does not have their own agenda. Beyond friendship, they are encouraged to treat each other as a surrogate family.

Tho only difference between the Mandos and the ponies is that all of the Mandos are warriors. And the only reason for that is because they live in a galaxy which is constantly at war.

Yet the fact that they find an entire planet of people who are strong and brave enough to fight alongside Mandos against other Mandos but have actually achieved peace amd tranquility for the most part with only minor conflict... This is what they should be fighting towards. Equestria is the example that the Mandos should see as an example of a brighter possible future.

For instance, the ponies are amazing at conflict resolution. Also manipulation. Skills the author completely disregards in this story to validate the Mandos' brutal methods.

The Mandos were certainly not sold short in this narrative, but all the ponies certainly were.

And the Friendship ajd Magic stuff is only "untempered in the larger scheme of things" because of the priorities in this crossover. This is a Star Wars Universe story with FiM as a secondary element. So of course all the FiM stuff does not hold up well against the Star Wars stuffm The Star Wars stuff has priority in this story, so how could it. But they could have been equal.

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Actually, I think you missed a very big point in the story, I'm kinda sad too since you went so far to point other things out. You brushed on it but never really pointed it out. Did you happen to notice something a little off about the so called "heroes" in this story? Everything they do, every seemingly brave and brutal act they preform in the end is aimed at their own personal goals and the goals of their people.

Kad kills the Force being that has kept the planet safe from the rest of the war torn galaxy all because he's in his way. He has no remorse for this act and never gives it a second thought. Torb manipulates the nearly broken insurgents into a suicidal final attack just so they can be a distraction. He flat out lies to them about their chances and about any kind of help being on the way. They load up several of their new friends with powerful explosives and have them march up to the enemy gate. Do you think those things only had one detonator? Somehow several of the galaxy's biggest players just so happen to show up on the doorstep, all of them looking ready for an invasion and guess who stands up to protect the Equestrians. They just got a foothold on a planet with massive amounts of untapped resources. Luna by the prologue has pretty much embraced the Mandalorian culture completely. You don't think even she might have something up her sleeve?

See, it's not that I think peace is flawed, it's the fact that these characters are all very flawed. I'm not trying to promote the warrior culture as the superior way compared Equestria's peaceful philosophy. I'm propping them up against it to show you how broken and twisted these guys are in the long run.

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I understand the concept of an author writing from a viewpoint they themselves do not wholly endorse. However the total explainability of Equestria from a SWU perspective, the lack of "structural integrity" of Equestria when faced with a new culture, philosophy, and threat, the under-utilization of Equestria-exclusive assets, and the fact that despite the characters' short-sighted, self-serving, bull in a china shop tactics, every action they take has either greater or equal benefit as detriment (usually via last-minute ass-pull plot twists, but I can't fault you for those as they are a SWU staple) makes it feel less like character perspective and more like the point of the story.

4287265

I'll be honest man, there's a lot of both sides that I didn't fully utilize or explore when I wrote that thing over a year ago. Things I either didn't think of at the time or didn't know about all together. Too late to do much about that now. As long as I've told what I feel was a fun story and there are people who enjoyed it as well, then I've done my part as an author.

4287353

Agreed as per the disclaimer on my original critique.

5242913
Technically, if we wanna be scientifically accurate then there wouldn't be any talking ponies, magic, specifically labeled alien species, readily available faster than light travel or the Force. I honestly do appreciate the very fact heavy review, it gives me more to brag about to my friends as far as the caliber of readers I attract. However, having Celestia or Luna just up and god-brick the bad guys would make for a very short and boring story.

5243013

Technically, your point is scientifically accurate only if it can be tested for falseness. In other words, the scientific method requires there to be a method (which other scientists must then agree is good enough for the test) that will prove the claim to be false. This method should prove the claim false. Therefore, if it fails to prove the claim false, then the claim is accepted as being true (and then nay-sayed and tested by other scientists using the same method and the method is tested).

Since there is no test (currently) to prove that your claim is false, your claim is not scientifically accurate. I am not saying it is true or not, only that there is no way, currently, to prove you wrong. Therefore, there is nothing to prove you right, either.

5344778
Cool story bro

5392458
Yeeeeeeeeeah, when I saw that I was about to give myself such a massive main cast I kinda backed off on that till around the end. But if you'd like to see some Star Wars fun with one of the other three, I've got a fun adventure going with Rarity and a scruffy nerf herder that people seem to enjoy for some reason.

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Actually, this is several hundred years after the events of the Legacy Comic line and based off a table top game my friends and I played a few years back. I had named the character Kad without ever knowing about the character from the Karen Travis books until someone pointed it out to me a long time afterwards. Still, I guess you could say he's named for his great great great grand Uncle.

5428288 Yeah, I thought about the time line a bit later and realized it didn't fit for him. Still, good story so far.

5428323
Glad you're enjoying yourself, hope the rest continues to be a fun read.

Other than a few mispellings it was a very good story. I really enjoyed it. Only thing I would like to have seen is what the Mandalorian Armor had become over the centuries since Boba Fett. Armor does change afterall, although I am guessing Skirata's armor has ARC Trooper influences in it from its initial description.

5589962 Yeah, that's something I really should have done. In the Legacy Era the armor stops looking like a shirt with plates slapped onto it and gets this sort of layered look. Especially around the chest i55.photobucket.com/albums/g155/JHart06/Mandalorian%20Armor/Legacy%20Era%20Ref/legacy41_11.jpg It kinda has a bit of a romanish look to it. But yeah, in the game I played him in and the story itself, I wanted to make him stand out from other Mando's. So I decided to add some of the ARC Trooper flavoring.

5590331 Yeah, read Legacy series for a bit but then I stopped for some reason. I even remember that page you have posted. I just was wondering if Skirata was using repurposed gear. I always like the Phase 1 ARC Trooper Armor and seeing a suit remade into Mandolarian armor with jump pack and a new paint scheme might have been interesting. Might have to look around for another ARC Trooper figure and some other Jango/Boba figure and do that at some point. Just a swap of parts, some filing, a judicious amount of glue, and paint. Maybe black and gold...

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Yeah, that actually happened completely on accident in the table top game all these characters came from.

This was an enthralling story of epic proportions, worthy of the Master himself. *applaudes*
I was on my seats edge the whole time, torn between wishing Darth Jackass the most painfull death possible, d´aaawing about Flutters and Arkanna, smilling like mad over Luna being Badass and sheding a proud tear for Tracyn. And of course, laughing my ass of about Mackers (he´s your version of C-3PO for me, if you don´t mind. A very, very horny C-3PO).

I admit I never delved much further into the Star Wars lore than watching the movies to the point of bleeding eyeballs, nights of devouring Star Wars wikis, the occational Clone Wars and of course the PC games. Never read the books or comics but I think I should catch up on that.

Thank you for this story.

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Thanks for the words of praise, I'm always happy to hear that someone enjoyed something I wrote. Hopefully you enjoy the other stuff I've thrown together. As for Mackers, I really should give him a one shot at some point, he was a LOT of fun to write for.

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My absolute pleasure.^^
Oh please, do that. That would be epic and Mackers deserves it (and by it, I mean lots and lots of sweet alien girls of course).

Just the story I needed to get through the night. Another enjoyable read.

6263077 Honestly, I was about two seconds away from putting up the clip of Ogre screaming that. But me wanting to be a civil host stopped me from doing that. But yeah, totally agree.

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