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Good fic, but why is Limestone so happy? Is she happy her sis got laid, or that she's gonna try and get him booted out?


Is she happy her sis got laid

Yup. :rainbowkiss:


roided-out equine taco

This is one of the most hilarious phrases I’ve ever read. Thanks for that!

May we have some more?:pinkiesad2: Very amazingly done story I might add, maybe this will bring more attention to Marble Pie? :trixieshiftright: Of course it will!
*Types furiously*

Sequel? Sounds like a great idea!

“O-Oh… my!”

Oh, god. Why the fuck is she smiling?

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

“Ah, I see our little plan worked.”

:rainbowderp: :applejackconfused: :twilightoops: :pinkiegasp: :derpyderp2:

I would like another please.

Huh... never thought theses words would come out of my mouth but somehow, this got me back to writing after putting it off. Is that normal:twilightoops:?


this got me back to writing after putting it off. Is that normal:twilightoops:?

I don't know if it's normal, but I like it. :moustache:

I'm interested.

The Featured Box Troll likes! Maybe.

*<>* worth a sequel just to find out what they were planning... Need more shy pie stories

she may also be happy because their plan is to share, since she's very abrasive and has had no luck getting one herself. the fact limestone really wants a coltfriend is shown in S8E3, when she hears maud got one she denied being jealous right away, very tsundere-ish.
also i'd love to see a sequel, even if my idea is totally off.


even if my idea is totally off.

Nope. You’re actually spot on. I'm surprised it's taken this long for someone to guess that Marble and Limestone intend to share Max, if he's down with it, of course.

That was their plan from the start. :twistnerd:

Human: You wanna fuck me, don't you, Marble?
Marble: Mmhmm.

I want you to give this beautiful piece of work a sequel, time-now.

Sequel(s) would be amazing, this was fun to read in more ways than on huehuehue :moustache:

What a hot read! :pinkiegasp:
Surprised that Limestone was in on this.
Thought Anon was dead. :rainbowlaugh:


A sequel will have to join the queue of fics I need to finish writing. Time is a precious commodity these days. :twistnerd:

I laughed way harder at all the metaphors in this than I should have.

Great! pony porn. TFBT was here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I sense a lack of sarcasm.

No downvotes for you. :trollestia:

Yeah I don't down vote stories. I just comment on them.

You do know the rating system is bullshit? You got featured because a mod liked your story and not because its popular.

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Aug 24th, 2018

Changed your tune a bit, eh? :rainbowlaugh:

The fic was auto approved, so no mods were involved. Also, the featured box runs on an algorithm. As for my previous comment:


I never said you downvoted any fics, I implied your comment wouldn't get downvotes because your comment appeared sincere.

9128870 "algorithm" sure it does.. Just like facecrook and utube LOL. Oh please are you really that naïve?

Begone, troll! :trollestia:

Lovely story, great details on both the emotional and lewd side of things. Please do the sequel with Limestone Pie! :pinkiehappy:

Limestone…wants to form a herd with Anon?

Awesome fic! 'Course the way it ended you really left it leaning towards a sequel, and I'm certainly hoping for one.

And I kinda get a certain vibe form Limestone there. And I'm afraid of what may have happed after she smiled...

9127042 Sorry for the late reply. Just got a chance to check in. Also,um... thanks lol. Although I'm pretty sure it'll come nowhere near your work lol

This is some good clop. Both my heads approve.

Loved Maud in this​ story.

"I believe she wishes to mate with you."

Limestonu is mai waifu,pls mor.


Thanks! A sequel is on the list. :twistnerd:

My writing is really nothing special, but thanks. I think it's fair to say we all find fault with our own work at times. Try not to doubt yourself. :fluttershysad:


Yeah, she's pretty blunt. :rainbowlaugh:

Just make sure the sequel won't also take 3 years

I don't mince words. Nor do I puree them. :)

Is Maud a weed, ‘cause she’s blunt.

9131901 Shucks, the fact your story got featured is an achievement in itself. I've been at this for about 2 years(well 2 and some days but that's not important) and barely got anything to show for it lol. Hopefully once I find a editor, I can get my stories up and running again. In any case, still hope you get more stories out and show everyone your writing :twilightsmile:

Great story!
BikerPon3, how about sequel?

Dude, you have mad Human X pony writing skills!

And hell yes to a sequel! That end left too many questions and not enough fucked pretty pony pussies!:pinkiehappy:

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