When Rarity is mining for gems, she comes across a very strange looking stone. Little does she know until it's too late, the stone change s her life forever... by ending it! Now no longer just another normal unicorn, but a Lich, a horror Equestria hasn't seen in ages, Rarity must figure out how to either break this curse, or convince everypony that she means them no harm!
Error in short description: "due" should be "do".
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Thank you
Oh, I do love a fic with liches in it. Always (well, usually) quite interesting.
perspiration.
I hate autocorrect too
maybe?
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Thank you. Yeah, it can get quite annoying, especially when you write these on your phone
Am I the only one who's laughing there ass off at the image of raritys face in your head? Or is that just me?
Interesting. Dang paladins always mucking things up...
...The young one reminds me of Blueblood.
Well damn she went splat
Huh well I read this all throughout my night shift and I find it intriguing. I will follow this for future updates
Eh, neat concept, but you might want to go though it again. Saw a couple instances of missing words/letters/spaces and other basic spelling and grammar issues. I might go though again latter and point them out when I get more time.
Hope this continues soon-ish
Splatto McPoner, Rarity's only slightly dead.
Grogar!! :D
I am... Unsurprised, actually.
Oh god, it begins
Aaaand the other shoe breaks through the floor.
Hello main antagonist
(Oh shoot I caught up)
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My OC has a STRONG dislike of those kinds of beings, due too past experiences.
cant wait for this to continue :3
Hmmmmm, seems like Rarity is going to find out about a LOT of her new powers before this is over.
huh, that was not expected. hey dead dude, you follow a fashion lich now, how do you feel about that?
Woah, did Rarity intend for that to happen or is the whole "blood and pain" thing a requirement? Good luck not seeming like an embodiment of evil when a simple look has that effect... Although I now question Fluttershy's stare, lol.
*in caveman voice and poking you with a stick* You write. update story. *proceeds to make ape noises*
I like how they are being cautious here.
Wow. Not bad.
Wow, this is really cool! I can't remember why I picked this one up but I'm glad that I did. Rarity is best lich. ^^ The dark, sad atmosphere around Rarity in the wake of her new life direction is built up very well and makes for a compelling read. I also particularly like how the Paladins are written too, and that they aren't just thoughtless smiters. (Their scene reminds me a bit of the Second Foundation from Asimov's Foundation series. )
Good stuff, I hope this continues!
is this cancelled?