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Snow Quill


Just a bat, sometimes writes, sometimes draws

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Oh Luna, my love. I’m sorry I failed you, I’m sorry I couldn’t save you.

Discord, adoptive prince of the Hypogriff Kingdom, and Luna, one of the rulers of Equestria, were betrothed and set to marry in a years time. Unfortunately, it was not to be. Within that year, Luna had become more and more separated from her sister, and despite all the love Discord had to give, she became Nightmare Moon. In his grief, Discord earned a title of his own; the God of Chaos. How did it happen? And what of when two estranged lovers meet again?

A/N - Now with new cover art! (Still drawn by me lol)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 18 )

Wow... Just.... wow.....

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Is that a good wow or a bad one?

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Oh, well thank you very much!

8925933
No prob. Hope to see more of Luna and Discord's relationship through the rest of this fic.

Very very good!
U gonna update or is this cancelled?

9036267
I am working on another chapter, sorry for the super long wait, life is a real b sometimes lol.

Yay!! An update! Can we see more Discord and Luna fluff? I feel like Discord's wrath would be better understood if we saw more of him and Luna bonding and forming a strong relationship and how Celestia's neglect caused her to become Nightmare Moon.

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That was actually my plan for the next chapter :P. I’ve got a sort of ‘filler’ chapter with Discord remisncing more about Luna, and you get to see the building of their relationship. Then I have a final chapter planned as well as a side story which will reveal a twist. I’ll try not to take so long though

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It all good, keep up with the good work

I hope Discord's mother is happy with herself. First she failed to make Celestia wake up, till too late now she banished her son!

I hope i really hope this backfired and maybe lost the trust of Discord Nation, they may fear the two more then care for them and break off any treaties and connections to them for good!

Well conqualtions Queen Azure YOU JUST KILLED YOUR SON!

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don’t be so quick to assume Discord is dead ;P

Impressive. I like discord making clear that ignoring her sister was part what got her into this mess.

Its not bad but the emotional issues were never resolved. Celestia never was forced to face the fact that she ignored her sister and tried to interfere with her relationship with her fiance. Discord only cause trouble as punishment for her ignoring Luna.

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*shrug* yeah, this is like, my first published story on here so I didn’t have nearly as much experience on how to actually resolve plot points lol. I might get around to re-writing it someday because it does have a special place in my heart but who knows. Thanks for the read though!

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