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Foal Star


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This story is a sequel to Baby Hoity Toity in Manehatten


This is a story based of the episode "The best night ever."

This story is about Prince Blueblood as he was magically trasnformed into a foal one strange night. Now as he tries to still do his princely duties in diapers. He also has to find out more about this strange enchantress and learn how to reverse the curse before he remains a foal forever!

Editor Superpinkbrony12

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 78 )

I like how this story is going so far. I also really love the cover art!

Liked and Fav heehee. maybe now the Prince will be a good boy when he grows up. I vote for Rarity to be his mother :raritywink:

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I second that with rarity being his mother maybe if he misbehaves she can punish him by making him were a dress.

Comment posted by phantom ghost hunter deleted May 9th, 2018

*Applauds* Brilliant! Such a delightful start to the next tale in this delightful series.

I love Bucket Bridle, Bright Wing, and Cannon Feather. Definitely all wonderful OCs. Seeing you have them existing in two different universes allows them to show their personalities as both foals and stallions. You also get a lot of 'What If...?" covered by allowing your characters to explore various ways life can happen in Equestria.

The way you redid the Grand galloping Gala was awesome! Twilight got to do what she really wanted, Celestia wasn't miserable, Pinkie Pie got to be... well... Pinkie Pie without feeling out-of-place, and Fluttershy was spared her total breakdown. Dash and AJ may not have had the happiest of outcomes but being on a 'mission' likely made their not-so-successful attempts for "The Best Night Ever" less of a let down. :)

Seeing how Rarity is going to handle everything will be a lot of fun. This was the moment she came to loathe Blueblood. Now she is, if I guess, caught between feeling bad for him and wondering if there is a way that this may make him less of a jerk.

I feel bad as I've forgotten some of the other OCs who play a part in this world. Though I know you'll be refreshing us all as the story further unfolds. :)

8914504 And not just any dress, the most frilly and girlish dress possible. Ooh, or maybe a sailor suit.

I’m so glad this is finally out I was expecting it to be named something like baby blue

This is going to be fun!

Nice to see Bucket Bridle's original foster mom has a way to still be there for him and his friends. :rainbowkiss:

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Shell be around for awhile the princessess going to need her later...:twilightsmile:

I had to take a break while reading this. It's just to cute and adorable!

I think Twilight should be Blueblood's momma. :heart:

8945216 I think he'd better with Rarity or Fluttershy, someone who could reign him in and teach him some manners.

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well Rarity is busy with Hoity. But if he doesn't go with Twilight, Fluttershy will be good too :heart:

Wonder what will happen when Blueblood has to do his other royal duties? :duck:

I am still going for Comfy Rump or Twilight to be his new mommy. :pinkiehappy:

More like royal doodies! :rainbowlaugh:

Hey, uh, I think there's a typo in the description.

This story is about Prince Blueblood as he was magically trasnformed

Comment posted by FairyFun deleted Jun 1st, 2018

Awesome-awesome-awesome! Lots of epic visuals in this chapter, too! I'm extremely impressed as some old friends are back for fun. Comfy Rump being one and Ms. Flower Petal the other.

Does this mean that Nanny DeFoal is in this particular story universe?

All the activity seemed perfect for setting up what will be coming next. Blueblood falling asleep during his big meeting and then getting a bit of a lesson on how to be 'nice' during the dance with Flower petal.

<LoL!> I liked Flower Petal's "I wanted to dance with a prince all my life!" followed by Blueblood's attempt at an insult followed by her justifying fully that 3 years was definitely a long life of waiting. :)

Looking forward to more. woop!

So... Can these stories be read in any order?

Ok here are the 3 mares I see becoming Blueblood's mother. Comfy Romp, Rarity, or Twilight. Sorry I just want to see Twilight with her own foal to love. Anyways cant wait for more :pinkiehappy:

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well not really I did my best to catch people up to speed on what;'s going on so you don't need to.

Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo! This was a super-duper chapter! You're really knocking it out of the park with this story. So many great visuals with awesome pacing. Truly delightful.

My favorite part was thinking on how Rarity would be going so maternal for Hoity and Blueblood. She certainly would take it very personally if her milk was seen as nothing less than the absolute best.

The fashion show and bath were also great for getting Blueblood to loosen up and be more accepting of his current situation. Being a grumpy butt isn't going to help anyone while he is stuck that way. His natural 'spoild brat' aspect is still there, too. He won't be outdone!

The scene with the newspaper saying how the foal prince is in love was delightfully precious. I'd have loved to see a genuine picture of that article.

Great work!

I think Blueblood needs a time-out, and maybe a spanking. :ajbemused:

(Now now, don’t get all fussy on me, or I’ll make you model the most frilly dress I can find) i hope that actully happens.

I sense a foal fight brewing!

Hoity's teasing remark about foals getting married reminds me of the content involving Pound Cake and Flurry Heart. Fans are treating them like they're in a relationship when they're just toddlers. :rainbowlaugh:

I just cant wait to see who his new mommy will be... Rarity or Comfy Romp. :pinkiehappy:

Blue Blood and Flower petal, sittin' in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!

8984715 And when they get married, instead of kissing they change each other's diapers.

Lots of ground covered in this chapter. Quite impressive along with insightful as the core plot is being furthered as 'Bluey's' adventures unfold.
I am really enjoying Flower Petal interacting with Prince Blueblood. I'd say it is my favorite part of this story. She was fun with Spoiled Rich but super-adorable as a 'friend' to Blueblood.

The foal art museum was very clever. I think such places would be fun in real life. Parents would have a lot of fun having a safe place for their kids to express their creativity without having to clean up the mess afterwards. Plus displaying the art would be a lot of fun.

Rarity's maternal side is super cute, too. I do wonder if being put in a parenting situation would make her go into 'Mommy Mode'? The more I read how you write her in the role the more I genuinely believe she could pull it off and be happy with it.

I wonder if Shining Armor's going to encounter Blueblood in this foalish state? Maybe for a playdate with Bright Wing? :rainbowkiss:

Bluey and petal, sittin' in a tree! Kissing while wearing diapees! :rainbowlaugh:

9001355 First comes love, then comes the messy diapers! :rainbowkiss:

So cute! I liked imagining Rarity taking a snooze in her chair as the trio plotted their escape. The whole scene in the throne room was ultra cute with Flower Petal seeing herself as a true princess. I had fun imagining that.

Poor Blueblood. He's just not able to accept his current situation. However I think it makes him so perfect to potentially become Flower Petal's very special some pony. She knows how to put him in his place and I could definitely imagine the pair growing to become fond of each other. She's truly what a stuck-up like Blueblood needs to reel in his selfish behavior.

I see Rarity's going into full on Mommy Mode. But I wonder if Celestia and Luna are secretly having the same thing since they're nursing in secret and giving away some of their milk? :raritywink:

Blueblood vs Hoity Toity: Dawn of Diapees!

YEAH! more of the story! Go Rain!

Wonder if Rain and Bright Wing will meet up as foals and re-start their relationship? :rainbowkiss:

Do these stories need to be read in order?

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Well I did a good job of explaining events so no not really.

Alright blueblood is a filly now great i cant wait to see what happens next.

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