A cleric named Damien Flamel ends up in Equestria after wishing for a world without flame to bring justice in the name of his liege, Princess Luna.
OMNI:Hmm...Good.
Thanks, I'll be improving it before I write anymore chapters because I want to add more to the fight.
Interesting always ways a fan of dark souls fics
8914723Thanks I hope I please you with it.
A rather nice beginning, enjoyed reading it despite not really being acquainted with Dark Souls lore. Noticed some typos here and there and also a few recurring issues with direct speech and punctuation—can explain more, if you’d like.
9826167More Souls lore will be added as time goes on. As for the other errors, I'd like some clarification.
OMNI:Hmm...Good.
Thanks, I'll be improving it before I write anymore chapters because I want to add more to the fight.
Interesting always ways a fan of dark souls fics
8914723
Thanks I hope I please you with it.
A rather nice beginning, enjoyed reading it despite not really being acquainted with Dark Souls lore. Noticed some typos here and there and also a few recurring issues with direct speech and punctuation—can explain more, if you’d like.
9826167
More Souls lore will be added as time goes on. As for the other errors, I'd like some clarification.