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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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8915211
Just wait until you see where this story takes him :trollestia:

This was a good read, I hope to see more works with Rumble being a sissy, keep it up.

8915280
There'll be more, trust me :raritywink:

8915288
Happy to hear it, I wonder if the potion he gave Rumble will make him smell more appealing to stallions. Would love to see him grow a more feminine figure from that too.

8915294
Guess you'll just have to wait and see! :rainbowkiss:

And...downloaded. Not often we get quality Gay, Age and Size-Difference foalcon. Thanks for that.

And although the summary makes it rather obvious that it’s foalcon, you might wanna flat out state that it is Foalcon in said summary, so peeps wanting to avoid that kinda thing won’t get mad.

8915396
Fixed. I guess it wouldn't hurt to add it in the description even though it should be pretty obvious...

Well done!

We’ve got pugasi, unicorns, earth ponies like myself

Rumble is a Pegasus ... :facehoof:

Royal7 #12 · May 10th, 2018 · · 2 ·

Rumble's been having a grand old time trying out all sorts of stuff since the Cutie Mark Day Camp. Deciding

I think you mean “gay old time”

8915668
Don't know what you're talking about! I'd never miss something like that ;>_>

It's refreshing to see a story with positive domination. As much as I love me some humiliation, it can get stale. Seeing a dom, especially a zebra, being supportive and appreciating the sub, is really sweet.
Also, damn, you are productive.
Also, this story could use some more proofreading. I probably should have made notes of all mistakes I encounter, but I was too busy reading.

8917362
I swore a vow to produce one story a week for all of 2018 and I'm pretty close to being on track (minus a week where I was swamped with overtime). I've got a buddy who looks over my stuff, and I give it a final once over myself before publishing, but there are things that slip through the cracks.

Also I figured it'd be refreshing to have a series of shorts involving an eager bottom, without going for the whole humiliation and degradation flavors which seem to be popular with zebras now.

This one really needs a sequel where Rumble does go out dressed up like a mare.

Brilliant. This was one of the best clop stories I've read in a long while, and I got a lot of enjoyment out of it. Straight and to the point, and very very hot sex scenes.

YJF
YJF #20 · Jun 8th, 2018 · · 1 ·

Sinful enough for me. My insatiable need for good plot was sated. My thirst for smut was quenched. Bravo.

It'd be interesting though if he had decided 'eh, let's turn rumble into a seductor anyways, it'll be fun'.. Mm.. Hm..

8915668
8916383

pugasi

I wish I knew Photoshop because I would already have this image on Fluttershy or something.
cdn2-www.dogtime.com/assets/uploads/gallery/pug-dog-breed-pictures/2-face.jpg

8936597
And so it was

8917362 8917446
Comments like this disturb me. You do realize this is an adult deliberately sexually exploiting a minor with lies and manipulation, right?

9195071
You do realize that this is a work of fiction right?

By your logic, getting off to pony is the same as bestiality. :trollestia:

Fome #26 · Sep 26th, 2018 · · 4 ·

9195076
And it would be equally strange to see comments on it about how refreshing it was to see some good clean human sex.

Trotting up to the door he knocked his hoof against it,

he went to sit beside nearby a table.

It’s one or the other.

Zibari proposed while leaning closer to the pony.

“I’m only slightly taller than most, or were you referring to something else?” Zibari chuckled.

That sounds like a rhyme to me.

“A worthy quest,” Zibari noted, standing and slowly trotting to the counter. “Would you like a refreshment?”

All Rumble could do was nod as he stepped

lest Zecora find discover us in such a compromising state,”

One or the other.

He knew good and well that he’d planted a seed within the colt that day;

0:57

It wasn’t long before he crested a small hill and spotted the zebra’s hutt.

I initially read "butt". Must admit, it had me OwO for a second.

9400953
See, that would be magical AF.
Going out for a hike, just as the sun is coming up, and stumbling across a majestic zeeby posterior.

9195071
bro they're not real. that's kind of the point

9457234
...The comments aren't real?

9457344
The characters. Nobody's being hurt unless they can't be bothered to find the back button.

9457527
Then isn't it equally true that nobody's being "positively dominated", "supportive and appreciating" or "eager"?

(Except the readers, of course; but that didn't seem to be what the comments were talking about.)

9460089
That is a very odd bit of pedantry, and I'm rather awestruck that you think me stupid enough to miss the impressively lazy GOTCHA in forty-foot-high neon. You know the difference between fiction and reality, you know how investment in fiction works, you know the difference between wanting to experience and wanting to do, and you know the difference between reading and condoning in reality.

You just want to bitch because you think the fic is icky. You can think that, you have the right, but kindly do the bitching somewhere else. Tumblr's very open to purity crusade bullshit right now.

9460288
Do you know the difference between commenting on descriptions of a fic and commenting on the fic itself?

9460294
Yes. You were still attempting to pointlessly moralize on a fucking pony porn fic, with implied judgement on people for enjoying an assortment of words, like they didn't know this would be bad in real life. That's dickish. I'm getting a rather sealiony vibe from this exchange, so I'm done wasting my time.

Sorry about this, Leech. Love your work!

9460313
9460294

Nah, y'all are fine. Like, I get how this sort of story may not be up someone's alley, but it's all good. One could make the argument that clop is tantamount to bestiality, since they're horses, so there's that.

Regardless, didn't mean to start a fight between y'all! :fluttershyouch:

9460313
You and I clearly have very different understandings of what 8917362 and 8917446 are saying. Not sure why you're getting so offended on their behalf; surely they can speak for themselves if they choose to?

9460320
I hope nobody's actually making that argument, because it would be pretty stupid.

9460341
I know it's goofy, but that's what I'm saying.
At the end of the day, this is all just imaginary, so I don't see the harm. Anyways, I'm always supportive of discussions!

9460363
I just find it hard to see Rumble as "eager" when the zebra is so completely in control. All the agency in the story is his. And I don't know what the word "sissy" means if it doesn't involve humiliation or degradation.

9460378
The lack of control can be a turn-on for folks.
If it came across as anything other than eager, I'll try to remedy it, for future stories!

9460388
Thanks.

I feel like there's a difference between:

  • Eagerly giving up control. Fine in fiction or reality.
  • Having control forcibly taken (ravishment). Potentially, though not inherently, problematic in reality.
  • Being manipulated through one's ignorance and naiveté. How can he be "eager" for something he doesn't even understand is happening? Not my fetish, and not something I can reconcile with descriptions like "positive domination" or "support".

I hope the other upvoters are upvoting for what it actually is. Personally, I like the second story (with Rumble acting on his own) better. (The subsequent ones look similarly exciting, but I haven't got to reading them yet.)

9460341
Might as well clarify. The attitude of the dom may imply that he is dominating the sub because that's all the sub deserves or is good for, or because he thinks that's what the sub will enjoy. Both can happen while following the safe-sane-consensual rule or when breaking it. I think the first option is more frequent, so seeing this story use the second was nice.

9461770
I feel like there are a lot more possible motivations than those two. And he doesn't exactly seem totally without ulterior motive to me. But fair enough; thanks for clarifying.

9461848
It appears you think I said something about motivation, so my clarification attempt failed.
I think you worry too much. It's porn; just assume everything is fine unless stated otherwise. Rumble is not yet adult? Just assume he's smart and knowledgeable enough to make informed decisions about sex. You can't assume that in real life, but in real life you can't ignore dangers of STDs either, which pretty much all clop does.

>Welcome to the Jungle
>We've got fun and games

We've got everything you want, honey we know the names! We are the people who can find whatever you may need; if you got the money, honey, we got your disease! In the jungle, welcome to the jungle...

Eheheheh... sorry about that

9652313
*Tilts the guitar up to activate Star Power as the solo approaches*

Can you please give me links to the art of the Rumble stories?

10152304
artist:regolithart

On derpi

10152332
I can't find all of them.

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