When Pinkie Pie's sister Blinkie comes to town she unwittingly lets slip a hint to an old secret of Pinkie's. When Twilight catches on to this, Blinkie must confess to who Pinkie really is.
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Lovely! Great work and a shocking backstory. Keep at it!
I should have checked the tags before reading.
You just got yourself a like!
I has a sad nao
Seems a bit short and you could have used a flashback to add detail and length to it instead of just giving a brief explanation. However somewhat good.
Short, Bitter, and a little dark. I'm okay with this.
Not bad, not bad at all.
A bit of an infodump, and not much else.
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That aside... ponyfac.es/sites/pony/faces/3cc43dc9.gif BRAVO!
Will put this on read later. Just had to see that based only on the summary...well, I just had an image in my head of Pinkie running away from Pac-Man.
I have several comments:
one, Blinkie could have just responded "Oh did I? I must have misspoken." and avoid any risk to Inkie having a psychotic breakdown.
two, reminds me of This ending of silent ponyville just a wee bit
three, as others have said, it would have been more emotional and moving if you put in a flash back or something. Making longer would definitely help
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I am not quite sure what you mean by that first comment, as for the second one I have never read that story before so any likeness to it is purely coincidental.
Went way too fast. And seconding that I immediately thought of that Silent Ponyville ending. I just read it a couple days ago.
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Same here. Also reminds me of Silent Ponyville.
Anyways, that was a good story.
I LOVE the concept of the story. But it went by way to fast. I think it should have been stretched out with more detail.
And I agree with Donald-Trump-Card, Blinkie could have just said that she had accidentally called Pinkie Inkie.
Good work not bad at all.
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Keep it up!
It's... okay. The idea is good, but sounds very similar to Silent Ponyville save that Pinkie wasn't murdered, she died accidentally. I'm not too upset about the pacing of things, but it is a bit fast. Also, Inkie didn't have to tell Twi-she could've just said "I said Inkie? Oops, my mistake," and boom, problem averted. I probably would've done something like this.
"Oh, did I call her Inkie? My mistake," smiled Inkie, and Twilight nodded.
"They are very similar," she agreed, and Inkie sighed.
"No they're not," she said resignedly, and Twilight tilted her head, staring at the grey mare confusedly.
"What do you mean?"
"Pinkie isn't Pinkie. The Pinkie you know is... Inkie." Insert backstory here.
Besides that, there's a couple grammatical/mechanical mistakes that are noticeable, but not bad per se. Overall, have a thumb.
Yes! These are the kind of sad stories I like! You did very well on this story and I hope to read more stories from you soon!
So, Blinkie is a pathological liar who likes to make up traumatic stories.
That's surprising.
I like this, uh-huh. Very nice backstory too.
Interesting read and I think I know where you got the idea from. (Party of None comes to mind.)
I'm depressed now thanks
I guess that explains why when she turns into Pinkamena her color dulls and her hair turns straight.
I can't... I don't want to...
I can't stop thinking "OMG, Pinkie is dead? Pinkie is dead? Pinkie is dead? Oh wait, this is a fan-fiction 
" 
I would sooner believe that pigs fly.
That's new and haven't seen anything like this before. I like it!
The concept was nice but the story went way too fast, if there were any spelling or grammatical errors that I never noticed, I blame sleep deprivation.
This is a new kind of story. I like it.