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phantom ghost hunter

I like many different stories by the way boo timber light yay flashlight.


There are many stories to be told, stories about love, stories about demons, stories about people, and stories about people who fight their demons. But this story is one that has been told before rewrote and told again. In the human world a great evil magic has come to try and take the world by dropping evil powers into that world but the equestrian portal can sense this and starts spilling more magic that will grant powers to select people. Get ready for the canterlot high avengers. This story will contain action, fighting, people gaining super powers it is awesome prepare your self for action.

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Umm, okay, I like the concept, but you need an editor. There's a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, this feels a little rushed, even for a backstory. I am intrigued, so I think I'll keep an eye on it.

Man, and I thought that the backstory that I gave Flash was sad. :fluttershysad:

I enjoy this story quite a lot. Just please, capitalization and punctuation go a long way to making a story better. I believe in you!

Did you mesh the backstory of Big Hero 6 with that of Iron Man?

trust me I would look for an editor but haven't had much luck

Okay, it might just be the FlashLight talking, but I think your writing got a bit better in this chapter. You might still need to slow down the pacing just a tad. Also, what exactly was Flash's motivation for letting the bank robber go? Did he just not think he'd be able to really do anything, or was his motivation the same as Peter Parker's? I don't know. I honestly can't imagine Flash being that blatantly selfish.:applejackunsure:

Think of it like he just didn't see it coming and didn't react.

I was about to call Spidey sense on your answer, but then, I remembered that it only turns on when there's an immediate threat. :twilightsheepish:

Okay but as I asked in the note which one do you think will work for sandal wood ghost rider or wolverine? i need to know.

I don't know. The only name between those two that I'm even remotely familiar with is Wolverine. :applejackunsure:

So you don't know about the flaming skeleton in a leather jacket on a flaming motorcycle who can burn the souls of evil beings?(for the record that power normally only works at night when the sun comes up he changes back to normal kinda like the hulk only ghost rider has better control over his powers). your not a marvel fan are you?

Eh, not really. I only started getting into it when MCU started becoming a thing and even with MCU, I'm honestly only a casual fan. :twilightsheepish: The only thing that I know about the Ghost Rider is that Nick Cage played him once. :ajbemused:

Comment posted by phantom ghost hunter deleted Jan 23rd, 2019

Okay, this chapter didn't have a lot of backstory to it, but I love how it jumps into the middle of the action. There's a lot going on, but everything feels a little more plot-relevant. You still need to slow the pacing down. A little more dialogue and descriptive language certainly wouldn't hurt. I mean, I'm getting hooked into the story, but at the same time, it feels as if all the action was coming at me too fast. Also, I feel as if I'm not being shown enough to really get to know who the characters are outside of their backstories and roles on the team. I still want to know what happens next though.

Bon Bon as Black Widow!!!!

You got that right but it might be a while I'm gonna do a villain next one who lost his wife and control of his mind.

You do realize that scarlet means red, right? :applejackunsure: Ooh, so we're jumping straight into the plot-relevant stuff, huh? Okay, let's see where this goes.

Comment posted by phantom ghost hunter deleted Jan 27th, 2019

:facehoof: do you really think red is a good color for Lyra? Also I don't want to differ from the actual name.

Oh crud. :twilightoops: Also, aww, Flashy is a sweet boy. :twilightsmile:

Now, I'm secretly hoping that this happens in Endgame. It probably won't, but I really want Thanos to go down that easily.

um endgame? are you talking about my fic or infinity war? by the way squirrel girl did defeat Thanos in the comics

The Avengers movie that happens after Infinity War

Oh okay but you do know that there using captain marvel for that also if you want to come up with theories the infinity war movies are based off the 1991 comic infinity gauntlet (but you probably already knew that) but they unfortunately can't use silver surfer which is to bad.

Assuming Spike is a dog in this universe, how about making him Cosmo the Space Dog


well i'd need to look more into black widows history and I've never heard of cosmo the space dog.

Hmmm, these two don't feel as well fleshed out as the last few characters. :applejackunsure:

Please do Spike as Cosmo the Space Dog!

In addition to a dog's standard enhanced sense of hearing and smell, Cosmo has psionic abilities, including high-level telepathy and telekinesis. He has shown to be capable of creating defensive shields strong enough to deflect energy blasts, as well as project mind blasts of tremendous force. His exact power levels are unknown, but he has shown to be strong enough to take on a being such as Adam Warlock by himself, and powerful enough to unleash a telekinetic blast able to disable two separate teams of superhumans.

In addition to these abilities, Cosmo seems to have a considerably extended lifespan as well - especially for a dog since he has been around since the time of the Soviet Union.

I know this chapter is supposed to be Bonbon's backstory, but wow! That ending. :pinkiegasp:

Do you like it? (for the record twilight is basically Mary Jane not Quen Stacy) Just wait until you see what i have planned for timber spruce.

I'm just bracing myself for whatever you're going to do to Timber Spruce. :twilightsheepish:

Don't worry first he will be a villain then he will be an ati-villain (hint-hint).

So, when are they going to take on any major bad guys? :applejackunsure:

Well which villain would you like to see? Because I have plans for Terik and chrysalis ,and when Thanos appeared that was Sombra. But first I have two more heroes to bring in, Scootaloo and Rumble are next.

At the moment, it feels like a whole lot of exposition and not a lot of rising action. That's all, but if it's coming, then I guess I can wait a little longer.

Okay, let's wait and see what happens next. "waiting music"

You know, she could have just kissed him on the cheek. :applejackunsure:

I just wanted to do that up side down kiss thing from the movie you know she will eventually learn that flash and spiderman are the same guy but not now.:raritywink:

So, when are the characters' superhero lives and their personal lives going to intersect? That's what I'm wondering.

In the next chapter I might do some flashlight like that I probably need to finally catch up with sunburst.

Bulk Biceps (I'm caught between Hulk, Colossus, Hercules and the Thing)

Great chapter and wow I wasn't expecting sandman that was cool.

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