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Do not stand at my grave and weep, I am not there. I do not sleep.

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This story is a sequel to The Truth Behind My Little Pony


This is the end, for you, for them, and for me...

Anna has been betrayed by Twilight and Discord, only to return to Derpy for guidance. After taking her to the place she wants to, she finds the terrible truth behind Discord, Derpy, and her fate.

Narcotics for smoking

Note: takes place 20 years after "Wanna Play?".

An unofficial squeal to The Truth Behind My Little Pony by Opium4TmassS

50 views, :pinkiegasp: HOLY HECK
100 views :pinkiehappy: Thanks Guys
200 views 👌:raritywink: *click* nioce

I've given up on this story.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

Looks interesting. When I get a chance Ill take a read.:twilightsmile:

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Thanks. It means a lot to me.

Sorry for asking but, are you a boy?

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Are you Discord in the creepy toys universe?

*takes out a stake*

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well in that universe Discord is a giant black worm so huge he's wrapped around the earth. with stump wings and claws much to small for his body

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Hang on a minute, while I call the S.C.P. Foundation, and report a Keter class object.

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I made a Q&A. If you have questions, put it in the comment section if needed.

btw, we CANNOT contain Discord. We can’t even fit him in the van.

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I like this a lot. Interesting story.

Hm. I must admit, the act of placing a video into the story so as to give ambience was an interesting touch. The story, for a start, was also a good building block to start on.

Please do not think of this as an insult to your writing. These are simply tips I have, for every story involves positives and negatives.

  1. In all honesty, you should get an editor or prereader. It would improve your grammar and such.
  2. Your writing seems to go in all sorts of different directions, for instance, the recording seemed to come out of nowhere.
  3. Never add more detail than necessary.
  4. Do not forget to start a new paragraph when a new character begins speaking.

I pray you will take this advice to heart and adjust your writing appropriately. Please do continue trying, as I will support you throughout your writing.

And as always, May the Stars guide you and the Darkness fear you.

- Silence.EXE

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Understandable. This was a one shot really, I don't know how long it will be until the Truth Behind MLP series actually ends, so this is where the Alt. Ending thing appears. Also Chapter 2 of The School for the Mindless is out. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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fnaf 6 funny meme used as an actual chapter

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It wasn’t really much of a meme when this was made but fair enough

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