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Great Scott, that's a hot story
Might just be me though... And the summer sun
I dunno man, it was a good story and all...
But they both seemed so out of character. I mean, I know sex can really change a person, falling into the other person's fetishes and all. But I feel like she'd always be the more dominant one. Yeah, I guess it made sense if Dash was the one always coming up with the "games" they'd "play", but still... Something about the dialogue and the character seemed out of place.
Great story nonetheless, definitely better then my erotica fics. Speaking of that, I need to go delete the one i uploaded
7/10
the crap did i just read 0_0
well anyway your a good writer ill give ya that
Oh Celestia, I'm going to pony hell for reading this.
Dayum that was hot.
Never thought about this, but it's brilliant.
Do you mind, writing some more chapters with other characters?
Would be sooooooooooo hot².
Bronydragon
damnit. another pony related fetish. Sorry, I cant handle anymore fetishes but good story none the less
977457 worth it.
THAT WAS INTERESTING, ALRIGHT PHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
977453
That's what I said, in my comment.
But they seemed so out of character throughout the ENTIRE fic.
don't get me wrong, i did think the fic was great, but they just seemed so out of it.
Applejack you you are so innocent how could you
you ae sooo kinky 
977614 I must've misread something there then
guess it's just a matter of your headcanon against hers
That was AMAZING!
977631
Happens, I dunno
That's just my input, everyone else loves it.
So, what I say really doesn't matter anyways ;D
977682 don't mistake my questions for hating your input.
You see Dash as being the dominant one
I see Dash and AJ as both being dominant and sorting that out by switching between dominant and submissive
but as I've stated, another headcanon, another story
glad you enjoyed the story though
Warning: Sex. Sexxxxx. Secksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.
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Yep-o. That was Kinky indeed.
Not usually the pairing I read, but well done.
Damn Sun, making it all hot...
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My thoughts exactly
Ooohh kinkey
That was really.....funny. I laughed the whole time.
Hmm, much better than I expected. Now I'm kinda interested in a sequel, just to see some of Little Jackie's dialogue.
The stuff I read when im bored....meh its was funny.
There's gotta be a Molestia emoticon...
Close enough. :molestia:
Interesting idea, and really well written.
Wow... just wow.
Very well done.
That was some kinkeh chit right thar. All I have to say is...nice.
I'm like "you're having sex with a young filly" but then I realized she's a grown mare having sex with another grown mare pretending to be a young filly so it's cool
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That was awesome, I really hope there's more!
“I picked up orange make-up at the same time. Next time you play the filly, and we'll see just how naughty you are, little Jackie.”
Applejack felt a pleasant shiver up her spine, and she grinned at Dash.
Woah, I just got chills from this excerpt
Nice work
I thought of Rainbow being the more dominant one but overall, this was a great read 
I hope you make AJ's version
995370 is funny cause your name is 'Jackie'
997412 SO. AWESOME.
Didn't they technically just imagine they were pedofiles?
1098835
Nothing different from people acting as if they're schoolgirls
Twas decent. 7/10
I CAME
One chapter and it's complete? Neigh I say! Please write a little more? This is good stuff! It's awesome to see someone like AJ show such a surprising fetish
Not my fetish, so no fav, but it just cements my perception that you're an author who can write coherent, nice little one-off clops that seem about as realistic as one would want in a story about two cartoon horses screwing. I think I'll watch you.
Haha, from the very first sentence I could tell exactly what kind of story this was going to be. That's one of the signs of a great writer to me. Short, to the point, and it sets things up.
...Wow, I read a story about cartoon ponies getting it on. What has happened in my life
Jokes aside though, your writing is excellent and I enjoyed reading this work. Take care~
You know, I like the idea of Rainbow being the less dominant one. She's so outgoing and dominant in her regular life, it just seems fitting that she'd like taking the submissive role sometimes. Dat role reversal.
"ALL ABOARD THE TRAIN FOR PONY HELL!!!"
*Raises hand* That'll be my ride....
I LOVED THIS. age play is a very difficult subject but you stated it in the story quite nicely "that's a huge difference on the creepy meter."
its so perverted and kinky ...
More more more
wait are the others into that as well..
I'm not one for fetishes, but goddamn, why does age play have to be so fun?
This could have been handled so very, very badly... but it wasn't.
Good job, author
. Tis a subject so touchy that the word "touchy" itself barely covers it.
I like it a lot
The Hot of this fic has comletely burned the barn!!
I really like how Applejack made it clear that she'd kill anypony who looked at a foal like that, making the distinction between a real foal and an adult pony roleplaying as one.
And I think Applejack and Rainbow Dash were really sweet together in this fic, both within and outside of the sex scene.
Oh man... Just imagine if Applebloom walked in on that, while Rainbow Dash is talking about "getting her cutie mark".....that would be a lot of awkward explaining. XD
