The Battle at Bedtime
Many ponies work hard. Some work every day for twelve hours and make a substantial amount of bits to live luxuriously. Some work to provide for their families. Others like Princess Celestia work all day every day because it's her duty. She doesn't earn bits from her "job", she earns love from her ponies which in her opinion is much more important than any jewel or gift she could ever receive.
That didn't mean her job was perfect. No, Princess Celestia has moments where she loathes being a ruler. She has to deal with the nobles who wish to have more power over the "commoners" or have some other idiotic reason to bother her while she is dealing with real problems. If that hadn't been bad enough than the endless pile of paperwork she had to deal with was, and her "endless" pile was only half of the overall paperwork that had to be taken care of. In truth, her sister finished the other half of the papers, though that didn't make her own pile any less daunting.
The only time Princess Celestia ever got to rest was at night, specifically when she got to sleep. However, her only time to rest has now become one of her hardest chores. It wasn't because it was physically taxing on her body, it was actually the opposite. It was very taxing on her mind, so taxing that she worried all throughout the day about going to sleep.
Unfortunately for princess of the sun, she had just finished the last of her royal duties for the day, ending with the lowering of the sun and was about to retire to her bedchamber. As she walked down the halls of the castle, she couldn't help but feel dread. She couldn't let her panic show though, all she could do was sigh in exasperation.
"I guess I'll have to deal with this issue once again. I had hoped I could avoid this for awhile longer but I guess that won't be the case" Celestia thought to herself in anguish.
As her bedroom door came into view, she noticed two of her royal guards "guarding" her room. Despite her exhaustion and dread, she couldn't help but smile warmly at her loyal guards. Even if it was a part of their job to keep watch at her door, she still appreciated the gesture.
She looked in the eyes of her guards and spoke warmly with a hint of authority laced in her tone of voice. "I wish not to be disturbed unless it is absolutely necessary. Make sure to keep all ponies out of this room.
Her guards said nothing as they simply bowed to her, signaling they understood their given order.
Princess Celestia gave a much warmer smile as she responded calmly to the silent duo "Thank you my little ponies, goodnight." She then walked gracefully into her room closing the door gently and locking it behind her.
As she closed her door, her expression changed. Instead of the warm benevolent ruler she usually looked like, her facial expression changed into a sad smile. She knew full well that the time had come.
The white alicorn began to cast a sound proofing spell to keep all noise inside the room as well as close her curtains. The last thing she wanted were any eyes or sensitive ears to pick up on what she was about to do.
As she slowly trotted towards her bed she reached underneath, pulling out an assortment of items. She looked at them with disdain as she laid everything out. Foal powder, a changing mat, pink ruffled plastic pants, and the item she despised the most, a thick pale pink diaper with a large sun on the front and a moon on the back.
Celestia sighed in irritation as she ranted to herself. "Tch, it's bad enough that I'm a grown mare needing these things but being the ruler of a kingdom as well. If the nobles found out, they'd have a field day, even normal ponies would look at me differently if they found out. If other nations knew I needed diapers for my problem, there is no telling how they'd react and my sister... If Luna found out, I'd no doubt be teased relentlessly.
As she spoke to herself, she lied her changing mat and her diaper flat on her bed and preceded to lie down on top of said items. She then used her magic to sprinkle a fair amount of sweet smelling powder over her diaper area and lifted the front of the diaper up, making sure to fasten the tapes snugly. After finishing her quick and efficient change, she pulled her plastic pants over her diaper while placing her changing mat and powder back underneath her bed.
She couldn't stand the diapers for many reasons, one of them being the very loud crinkle that accompanied them. What's worse is when the plastic pants are added. It seems like they increase the amount and volume the crinkling gives off. Then there was the fact that she couldn't even put her hind legs together. Over all, she felt like a helpless foal getting ready to go to bed.
She was glad they were at least very comfortable and protected her bedding. She wouldn't know what to do if she had leaked or wet the bed without a diaper. The first few times it happened, she had to clean her bedding all by herself, mainly because she couldn't ask a maid to wash her urine soaked blankets.
If getting rid of the urine from her bedding wasn't bad enough, actually getting the necessary supplies for her bed wetting was even worse. She had to go all the way to the Crystal Empire to get the supplies. Lucky for her, she had an excuse for buying such items. She was able to pass off the purchases for her nieces daughter Flurry Heart and with the help of magic, she was able to make the diapers her own size.
The worst part of getting foal diapers and resizing them was actually knowing that she was wearing real foal diapers. They were more embarrassing to wear then adult diapers since the print of the sun would disappear when wet. Of course Princess Celestia didn't know this at first. The only reason she even found out about that was when she woke up the next morning with a very wet diaper lacking a sun print. That was probably one of the more embarrassing details of the diapers because the wetness indicator would easily prove the foal had an accident just by looking at the front. No matter what you said or did, if there was no sun print then there was no denying that there was wetness in the poofy front.
As Celestia pulled her covers over herself, she tried (and failed) to ignore the loud crinkles emanating from her diapers and plastic pants. To her, it sounded like a nonstop lightning strike when in reality, it was probably only as loud as ripping open a letter. She knew that sleep wasn't going to come to her easily since sleeping with diapers so far had been annoying. The only thing she could do at this point however, was wait.
***
The princess quickly woke up covered in sweat and panting. She had a slight nightmare. While she couldn't quite remember what it was, she knew it was bad if her heart rate was anything to go by.
Celestia blushed and groaned from under the pillow that she had buried her head under "Buck my life".
It's been only an hour and she already slightly wet herself. She knew falling back asleep wouldn't be easy. While the diapers were comfy, the crinkles and the foreign feeling the damp padding caused her to feel made sleeping a chore. At this point, she knew she had to bring out her secret weapon.
She opened up a locked drawer and pulled out a small piece of plastic with a piece of rubber at the end and brought it to her eye level. It was a pacifier. A light pink pacifier with a sun emblem on the front that was resized for grown ponies.
"I guess I have no choice but to use this again. I really didn't want to become dependent on my pacifier but if I want to actually sleep well any time soon, I'll need it" Celestia thought to herself tiredly.
She popped the pacifier into her muzzle and immediately began suckling on the soothing piece of rubber. While she wouldn't admit it out loud, she really enjoyed suckling on her paci both because it helped calm her down and because the rubber nipple tasted like vanilla which happend to be her favorite flavor of cake.
The only downside to suckling on her pacifier was that it made her feel even more like a foal, a wet foal. If she could choose to only have her pacifier at night instead of her diapers then she'd make that choice in a heartbeat. She wished she could use it during the daytime as well but she knew that could never happen.
As she lied her head back on her pillow, she suckled on her pacifier contently, allowing herself to fall into a steady rhythm. As she listened closely to the sound the pacifier made as she suckled on it, she couldn't help but smile. In less then five minutes, she was back in dreamland all while smiling behind the gaurd of her beloved paci.
***
The princess woke up in her bed as she felt it was time to raise the sun. She opened up her curtains with her magic and began to raise the sun like she did every morning, though she was far to relaxed to get up so she simply rose the sun while laying in bed. As the sunlight began to wash over her, her grogginess slightly began to disappear.
She slowly pulled her covers down to reveal a soaked diaper. While she was expecting this, she couldn't help but feel disappointed that the precious sun had fully faded from her diaper. As she was about to get up, her face turned red as she felt a twinge in her bladder.
"I can't believe I have to urinate again. These diapers are pretty absorbant. I guess since my diaper can probably hold one more wetting... I could use it again" Celestia groggily thought to herself without really thinking.
It took a few moments but soon, a hissing sound started to fill the room. As her cold and clammy diaper began to warm up, her grogginess began to fade away completely.
As the hissing continued, Celestia suddenly sat up and panicked as she realized what she was doing. "Wait, I'm peeing myself! Why did I choose to do that! I wasn't thinking straight! C'mon, stop, stop, STOP!"
She struggled to control her bladder but it was to late, no amount of pleading could stop her bladder from emptying itself into her very thick diaper. It must've grown to at least three times the size as it was when it was dry. There she was, the proud ruler of Equestria, wetting her diaper like a foal with misty eyes, all while she was awake and powerless to stop it. All she could do now was suckle strongly on the pacifier that had stayed within her mouth and wait till she finished wetting herself.
It must've been a minute in total but to Princess Celestia, it felt like an eternity. Finally the hissing died down as her bladder fully emptied itself. Her eyes decided it was their turn to uncontrollably leak liquid as tears slid down her face. She grabbed her pillow and hugged it tightly as she cried out all of her pain.
After a few minutes she regained her composure. Her eyes still slightly looked red but she wasn't sad anymore, in fact, she didn't even remember why she was so upset in the first place. In truth, she actually sorta... enjoyed wetting herself and losing control. It felt so liberating. So intoxicating So... amazing!
No, stop! It wasn't that big of a deal. Sure the diapers feel nice and I really like my paci... and I liked crying out my frustration... and I liked feeling helpless–" she then quickly cut herself off.
"Do I?.... I... I like this. But, why?"
As she stared down at her very saggy padding she couldn't help but blush in embarrassment. "I'll worry about this later. For now, I need to get ready for the day."
As she began to throw her immensely soaked diaper away as well as clean herself off and put her plastic pants away, she couldn't get over the floaty feeling she felt throughout her whole body as she wet herself...
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Come on Tia, you like it
8886604
Of course she liked it, how could you not!
Now if only she could think less like a ruler and more like a normal pony.
A very interesting little one-shot. Although I have to wonder if Celestia has thought about consulting a doctor in private for her "issue", I'm sure any medical professional could be motivated to stay quiet for the right price.
8886604 I wonder how she'd feel if she did something else in her diaper.
8886858
She might have considered the option but I think her position as a ruler causes pride to cloud her judgement every now and then. You never know though, anything is possible.
I could only imagine how I'd write out a scene of her having a much bigger "accident" or how she'd feel after such a naughty deed.
A great piece to get the creative juices flowing. You created a very emotional work that transitioned us from Princess Celestia feeling terrible about a condition she had acquired, potentially from age, and how she 'owned it' over it owning her.
The way the tale ended makes me think a lot on how we have choices in life regarding our misfortunes. Our bodies can change at any time and sometimes with no reason at all. Age is often a guarantee that things will stop working like they should but parts can 'malfunction' before their expected times. You then need to figure a way to accept it or let it ruin you.
It's a tad different, but I learned going 100% blind isn't the end of the world. I felt so much was taken and that I'd never be useful for anything for awhile. However I did gradually start trying to ways to make it 'good'. I always find not seeing people physically as a benefit as I don't suffer from judging someone based on appearance. I also like how I can never feel disappointed in a book, show, movie, etc. as my imagination is in full control of how events play out. I'd want my sight back if it were possible but it is nice to make peace with a physical ailment.
So, in this story, you wrote a Celestia who wasn't "Yay! Diapers are great!". You wrote one that feels the grief have needing an adaptation that is far from what she'd ever wish to need. Fortunately, by the end, she began to see that it doesn't need to be awful all the time. Find the good in the bad. :)
8887159
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I get what your saying. When you get older, your body tends to become more susceptible to certain ailments that aren't easily fixable. I tend to have chronic pain with a few other problems and I'm still young. While I'm worried about the future, I know that I have a good chance to overcome this, maybe not "fix" but rather "beat".
I didn't want to make a story with a sad ending where the reader or the character(s) feel like garbage, I wanted to make a story where the character could learn to accept and possibly even enjoy their flaws. Plus, who could resist a cute scene with Celestia wearing diapers for bedwetting.
Thinking perhaps the author should add the 'Fetish' tag to this story...
8887438
I was thinking of adding the "fetish" tag for safety reasons but bedwetting is not a fetish. Also, enjoying diapers and other babyish items is technically not considered a fetish unless it takes a more sexual route. This is not what my story is meant to be at all, just a story with cuteness and acceptance.
I suppose I could add the fetish tag but at the moment, I don't see the need. I thank you for the concern though.
8887892
No worries. I've agonized over what tags to use more than once myself.
8886621
Perhaps if her sister teleported into her room, said "pardon me sister, but I need to borrow one of your diapers" and then teleported out...
8892498
Lol, I could already imagine Luna with a smirk on her face as she asked. Celestia would be like "H...how did you know?!" Then Luna would say something like "We know many things our dearest 'baby sister'. Then she'd disappear.
Though, I can't write how Luna speaks to save my life so that probably won't happen.
8892990
Just throw in a few "we-er, i-"'s, have her be eager and exuberant, and you should be good.
8893070
Yeah I know that, but I don't know how I'll be able to handle any time she would say "thee, thou, and doth" while typing the story out on my phone. I have to type out all of my stories on my phone which is kinda difficult. Maybe when I know I have lots of time, then I could try to write a story with Luna.
8893746
That's just it-don't have her go thee and thou, let her speech patterns be modernized with at most one or two slips into ye olde equish. As I recall, canon luna gets better at that as the show progresses.
Not bad.
I'm not a fan of diaper/babyplay but this wasn't bad.
8895884
Sorry about that. I know some people aren't into this sort of thing.
I'm glad you were willing to give this story a chance despite diapers/babyplay being involved.
At some point, I'll probably make an alt account for stories that don't involve diapers or involve any "fetish" material. This profile that I'm using will be used for diaper stories mainly, just to warn you.
8893779
I didn't know Luna's speach became more modernized later on in the show, though to be honest, I am still pretty far behind in MLP.
There's a concept here, some effort on display in representing the characters and spicing up the exposition. However, the story is in need of an editor, with even large and visually distinct mistakes like italics not ending at the appropriate place being apparent. The story has a habit of becoming tell-y when it should really be trying to relate the feel of events to the reader, especially when it comes to Celestia's reactions to the diaper.
Of special note is the ending, which is abrupt and inconclusive, resulting in me being rather dissatisfied with the time spent reading the story. It feels like you've set up a prime situation to have Luna interfering with Celestia's sleep to make her wet the bed, and then continue with her dream-manipulation to encourage the pacifier and diaper-usage even after waking up. Instead, the story has a [Complete] tag beside it with no real conclusion to speak of.
Your writing needs work, but I would like to see more of it. A little more thought and polish would go a long ways, though, and I would encourage you to read a few professionally published stories before continuing to observe how they construct their sentences and ideas.
May your quill stay sharp and your ink never dry.
8898008
So glad to see a response from you!
I do agree, I need an editor. Working on my own means rereading and fixing my own mistakes which only goes so far. Having an extra set of eyes goes quite a long way even if they only help with simple spelling errors.
The italics issue... that happens often unfortunately. Out of any error I make in anything I write, this makes me cringe the most since it's one of the more "important" things I try to perfect. The last thing I want is someone getting confused on whether the character is having an inner or outer dialogue with themselves or with another individual.
I guess I do sorta see where your coming from when you say the ending is abrupt and how Luna seems to be the cause. In truth, I never wanted that to be the case and I still don't feel like it is but I do see where your coming from. Do you think you could quote a part of the story that made you feel this way or explain why you felt this way in more detail? I just wanna make sure I'm not missing or misunderstanding your explanation.
Your absolutely right when you say my writing needs work. I can try looking at other professional novels but I have a pretty bad memory when it comes to reading, sometimes I have to read chapters 5 times before anything sticks. I also feel like I can never find any good books that meet my preferences. I like dark stories, mysteries, drama/thrillers, and sometimes even horror. I loved reading the first book of the "Dexter" series and I just feel like I can't find anything else that can compete.
Anyways, I'll see if I can fix those darn italics and some of the other problems I find once I reread.
8898063
>The italics issue
For one thing, inner thoughts with Italics are usually done without quotation marks. This helps prevent confusion with inner thoughts and dialogue made with emphasis. If a character is quoting another character during their inner thoughts, single 'quotes' are typically used.
>Do you think you could quote a part of the story that made you feel this way or explain why you felt this way in more detail?
The fact she can't recall her nightmare. That she has the thought of 'Might as well use the diaper' and her subsequent panic over doing so makes me feel like it's a sort of lingering hypnosis that was part of the dream/nightmare. This is further supported by her begrudging admittance that she somewhat enjoyed the feeling of losing control, which could be further twisted into Luna doing this to gain a position over Celestia in some respect by eventually taking on the role of caretaker or something to that effect.
>I like dark stories, mysteries, drama/thrillers, and sometimes even horror. I loved reading the first book of the "Dexter" series and I just feel like I can't find anything else that can compete.
I would suggest Terry Pratchett's Discworld series. The stories involving Death (the character and concept, not just the state of unlife) would fit into that 'dark' area, and stories starring Samuel Vimes involves mystery, thrillers and some light horror elements.
8898246
Thank you for the tips and suggestions! I feel as if this new information will help me with my future stories.
I never considered hypnosis to be the cause of Celestia's bed wetting but what your saying does make sense. While I don't know if Luna would go to such extremes for a prank or to achieve a caretaker role, I'm sure Discord would. He'd probably try to create a situation where Luna finds out and then observe what he caused from the shadows.
If I ever get a chance to go to the library, I'll try and see if I can find those books. If for some reason I can't find them, I'll try looking online.
Again, thank you sooo much!
8899687
Welcome, good luck.
So what’s her plan for when Flurry doesn’t need diapers anymore?
10738821
Good question!
Uh... one that I haven’t figured out yet, and one that she probably hasn’t figured out yet either...
Though like all things in Equestria, the solution will most likely involve magic!
10739576
I guess she will probably disguise herself with magic and buy the best nighttime diapers for sale at a store such as Filthy Rich’s Barnyard Bargains (or any other pharmacy, grocery store, or department store that may exist in Equestria at that point).
8893746
If you pair a Bluetooth keyboard with your phone you should be able to type what you need to without autocorrect getting in the way.
I'll admit this was an interesting read