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Razor Blade the Unicron


No longer writing here.

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This story is a sequel to A Good Filly


The Crystal Empire was once controlled by a wicked tyrant. And though joy can be found once again with a simple faire, to overcome fear that festers throughout every bit of your life...

Written for Orbiting Kettle for the Springtime Sequel-Slash-Sandbox Switcheroo.

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Comments ( 6 )

I like these kind of stories where Cadence helps the Crystal Ponies in dealing with the aftermath of Sombra's death and how they can move on for the better, and this one is no exception.

An excellent continuation of the original. These are scars that no amount of funnel cake can heal. It will take time and constant reassurance. Excellently done.

A splendid glimpse at the beginning of the healing. Thank you for having written it.

It kept well in the spirit of my story, and it is nice to have a look at what comes after the scars.

This is a good one.

I really wanna hug her. :(

"that I would granted mercy"
"that I would be granted mercy"?

"not matter how merciful"
"no matter how merciful"?

"to be his slaves and how beneath his iron hoof"
"to be his slaves and bow beneath his iron hoof"?

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