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desolate_account


Pony fangirl who likes to write horse stories

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Pinkie and Dash have been very special someponies for a while now. Pinkie has been thinking about how she wants their relationship to go to the "next level." She has no idea how to approach Dash on the matter though. So she goes to Rarity for advice.

No language, not a clop fic

Rated T for: Conversation about sex

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Wow. My favorite ship. Didn't expect Rainbow to have even a semblance of apprehensiveness at the thought, but it does make a bit of sense that this would scare Dashie a bit. And the line about "Rarity Sense" had me laughing. Not sure why, but well done regardless.

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Thank you, compliments are always appreciated. <3

I like your pfp.

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Hard to go wrong with Scootaloo getting high:scootangel:

Love this! It's pretty cute!!

adorable!

I like how each of the characters are awkward about this in different little ways, each of which feel very believable and true to their personalities. And they're not simply "awkward for the sake of awkward drama" because they do express a lot to each other. It's not a comedy, but it still feels a little humorous at the same time as it's being romantic. :twilightsmile:

I like it so far, hope to see more soon.

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Though if you mean that you hope to see more of this story specifically, I'm afraid to say this was a one shot and nothing more will be done with it. Unless sometime down the road I decide to write a sequel, which I guess is always a possibility.

Pinkie Pie nodded and went to trot out the door. She was caught however by Dash lifting her into her arms and into the air. Pinkie didn’t have time to ask why she needed to be flown before Dash was out the door and soaring into the clouds.

>arms

Regardless this was adorable. Considering they were talking about sex, lesbian sex nonetheless, horse lesbian sex double nonetheless, that's really hard to do, but you did it. PinkieDash ftw (though I'm pretty sure you probably knew that about me, wink wink). It was cute, it was gay, it was Pinkie, and I really enjoyed this. It felt like if the show got a TV14 rating and became a romantic drama. Props!

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