This story is a sequel to The Hero of Legend
Finally having returned from CHS, Loyal winds up going on more adventures than he can count on his fingers. From being bamboozled to finding out what he's actually allergic to (even though he was sure it was nothing) completely by accident, he's sure to never forget all of the good and bad times he's in for. And it seems a new, mysterious friend has appeared, claiming to be looking for a small yellow flower....who is this pony, and why does such a flower matter?
Chapters (15)
The beginning I think was a bit annoying no offence ok.... the rest of it is alright... the first paragraph is very childish writing. It was weak is what i'm saying. You could of done better. Do not make a mistake like that again. You must keep the beginning way more interesting
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This was almost two years ago that it was written. I was still learning to write. And, honestly, I'm not sure if I should take advice from someone who isn't exactly using proper gram and punc.