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Dafaddah


Stories about families, friends, the past, the present, the future, the science of magic and the magic of science.

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This story is a sequel to Reaching For The Sun


When working for two handsome - and unattached - alicorn princes, a maid's job is never done!

A bawdy farce in 4 and 1/2 acts, submitted as an entry in the Springtime Sandbox Switcheroo Event and based on Jet Canon's Reaching for the Sun

Edited by the most awesome Nevina!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

All that for a cake. :D And boom!

Ha! Oh that Violet.
I like what you’ve done with them, I like the direction you took the story. Interestingly I’d actually imagined their positions switched somewhat, with Marigold the older and more responsible one and Violet the gossipy upstart, but I can hardly complain as I didn’t even describe them as such.

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I’m really glad you liked the story - it was a hoot to write, so thanks for the inspiration!

Is it wrong that I thought one of the maids was actually Twilight for a moment? Alternate Universe and all.

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One of them was purple and a unicorn, but that was her coat color in the original story so I stuck with it. Besides, wasn’t she just a bit too worldly for our favorite little egghead?

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I again go back to the AU tag and the idea that not everything is like we know it is. My mistake, but that's just me.

An enjoyable collection of misunderstandings and misfortune. Thank you for it.

¸It was a cute read, I am more a fan of the Dusk Shine X Luna shipping then the other way around, still was good through keep it up.

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Thanks for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

Thoroughly enjoyable story, and I had to laugh at the brief dive into art history.

Great job.

Poor Twi...

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