While returning from a political summit in the dragon lands, King Thorax and Prince Pharynx navigate their way through a dense woods. When gnarled branches and twisting shadows take shape, the brothers find themselves holding their ground against the changeling's former tyrant. But while one brother readies himself for a fight, the other faces his predecessor unarmed, seeking not victory, but answers.
* Edited by Double R Forrest
* Part of the Love Bug Continuity!
* Covert art commissioned by me, created by the always fantastic Percy-McMurphy!
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HOLY ****! That was awesome! Go Thorax! Kick that ugly bug's ***!!!
I've heard that a nice dip in a volcano does wonders for a changeling queen's exoskeleton.
Reminds me of that one story about Celestia and Chrysalis, A World of Matchsticks.
I really hope there will be something like this in the shows canon
I haven't read the Love Bug Continuity.
That said, this story is... empty as a standalone.
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The Love Bug Continuity is a mostly-canon, fanon-verse I created, of which this story and several others are a part of.
I can see how you'd think that, not being familiar with my writing. The intent was not to build a unique plot, but to, like with most of my writing, focus on character interaction and create snippet scenarios and scenes that could be inserted alongside the show's events.
This particular one serves to bring meaning to Thorax's close relationship with the changelings (found in my other stories), while also giving us a chance to see how these three could potentially interact if they were to come across each other in an episode.
Yes yes yes yes yes yes YES YES YES!!!
Such amazing scenery and dialogue, emotion unbridled and true heroic strength shown! Very well done, I'll take this over another chapter Of KotLB anyday!
(might I by chance get link's to these emotional songs of yours? I'm in need of some good writing tunes.)
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I spent a lot of time on this one, for how short it is.
From the looks of it this is gonna fall by the wayside compared to KoLB, TLaHO and a lot of my other recent stuff, so I'm glad to see people who've enjoyed it.
The song most in particular I was thinking of was Invasion, by Pony Music. It's an instrumental that felt very dramatic and fit the tone I was going for with this story. The first minute especially is really great.
You are an amazing writer, no doubt. Loved every bit of this.
That was a great story. I loved the dynamic between the two royal brothers.
That was amazing!
Very well done, sir. Really hoping they give a definitive end to our evil queen before the end of the show, but even without, I think you writing something for this universe would be even better.
Dark but I love the brotherly bond of Thorax and Pharyx you portray them
Do NOT mess with Thorax's Hive! Damn! And yeah, Chryssi totally came off like she knew this could happen and was hiding it.
Amazing story. Thorax is really a kind king, the opposite of Chrysalis.
Thorax just fricking—wow.
I am so proud right now TwT
Oh wow so Queen Chrysalis knew about some of the changelings even before thorax try to overflowing her but unfortunately Chrysalis kills them and thorax was the lucky one to getaway before he share the same Faith as the other ones and despite he got so scared at everything he stood his ground and I have to admit that was really cool that he just blasted her but the emotion took a toll on him when she left but at least pharynx is there to confort his brother this was a pretty good story and once again I do love the interaction with these two brothers and how much they really truly care for each other
"After I put Starlight Glimmer and her friends in their place, maybe I can give you that challenge, Pharynx. And then, who knows, perhaps it isn't too late for the rightful queen of the changelings to reestablish her place, as well."
Just as the words left her tongue, a blinding flash filled the clearing, and Chrysalis was blown off her hooves. Slamming into a far tree, the changeling slumped to the ground like a mangled spider, her mane obscuring her face. Toppled from her head, her crown laid by a pile of fallen leaves.
"I will never let you near them, ever again!", Thorax shouted, shaking violently, but resolute in the display of power contained between his antlers. Even with tears trailing down his cheeks, his raw emotion had Pharynx at a loss for words. "That crown is no longer yours, Chrysalis, and neither are the changelings! You have no right to them!"
Wow Chrysalis you really push his button to far but at least thorax well never ever let that happen now that's how you take charge thorax awesome
10017463 Thorax is kinda like Zatch Bell! He wants to become a kind king, but must battle to the top!
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Well, now that crossover needs to happen.
Damn. Go Thorax. This definitely feels like the kind of confrontation that could have happened. Great job on this.
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Love when thorax knocked the shit out of her and his brother cheering