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Three rules all Villians know.
1. Only invade Ponyvile on a Tuesday.
2. Do not anger Dis, before he's had his coffee
3. This one is the most important of all. Never, ever, in any situation hurt Miss.
Well let's see what happens when these three laws are broken.
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Ok that was fun to read, thanks for writing it.
I like the idea behind it and you made the silly random character awesome and also added a bit of fun between them
Great work.
On the other hoof, I have to add you made a LOT of spelling errors and stuff, you should get an editor please. And your word choice could use a bit improvment here and there.
Still you got an upvote for the entertaining read you offered.
Yeah, this was one that I found while I was cleaning out my google docs. Figured I'd post it. I do intend to make a lot of edits to it later. But ultimately, I really only gave it a quick once over, finished it and threw it up. Probably why it looks a little like throw up, but still, may or may not edit this, as really it was just a project I wanted to finish. Needed a win today, as it has been a tiring week. I am happy that this made someone other then me giggle. Thanks for the kind words and the input.
Wow, when I took a glance at the title Three Strikes, You're Out, I instantly thought "Oh snap, the moderators caught on!!
" which is weird, because I haven't done anything that would anger the moderaters... Or did I but I don't remember'?
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I'll admit, this got some chuckles out of me. If there's one major complaint I have though, it's that your grammar is horrible. Your first mention of Applejack included calling her Appledash, you called Pinkie purple, and you spelled Tirek's name wrong. Many times over in the fic were things misspelt, punctuation being incorrectly used, and at times words simply being in the wrong place or the wrong word used. You need an editor, and bad.
I had so many questions when I read the description, then I read it...
And I laughed my butt off. Very nice work! Like many of the other comments suggested, the grammar in this story can be fixed, just like you told me with Prismatic Soul.
(#NOTSPONSORED I use Grammarly whenever I write ANYTHING, and it really does help with basic grammar and spelling errors. I only got it recently, but it really does help correct things that I didn't even know needed fixing. If you're willing to pay, they do offer more premium services if you want corrections on word choice and other mistakes.)
So if you'd like, Grammarly really has been helpful. But I did find this story entertaining! Well done!
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Yeah, this was something that had sat long forgotten in my google docs. I had been having a rather frustrating week, both professionally and personally. Nothing all that bad, but enough that I needed a win. So, on a whim, I went deep into google docs and pulled this out. I then finished it and posted it, along with, The Capricorn Born in January. Yeah, a win was a win in that case. Even if no one liked either, they had at least been finished. I took everyone’s advice and have Grammarly on my phone, just not my laptop, but I have reached out to NotJohnHarker and she has graciously decided to edit for me. It helps that she’s my girlfriend of eight years. Oh, I will also be posting an epilogue to this story, so expect that soon.
This was a good read had me chuckling by the end with everyone's reactions to the dragon attack. Looking forward to more.
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This story is finished, but I am not sure I am done woth Dis and Mis yet.
I just love the casual invader villains.
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Hey, everyone knows the rules. And Mis is so adorable even Tirek can't help but like her. Not to mention have a healthy amount of respect for the Apocalyptic force she keeps on a leash known as Dis. But mostly the like thing, everyone likes Mis, or else.