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Most stories will be based around Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Sci-Twi, and Scootaloo!

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Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #1 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 01 - We Begin ·
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"Do you think...we might've went a little too far?" Apple Bloom asked aloud in worry as they walked around. "I thought I heard her cryin'. I didn't mean to laugh at her."

But you still did:facehoof:.

"Well....maybe a little," Sweetie Belle agreed. "I didn't think she was going to start flying through the air. I thought she was just going to land nearby. Instead, she went flying that way, flew back, and caused a whole bunch of chaos. I was not expecting that."

With you three nopony knows what to expect:trixieshiftright:.

"Me neither. I mean, I was mad at her, yeah. But I don't think....I don't think that was cool of us. At all. We need ta' apologize."

I think its a little too late for that Apple Bloom:ajbemused:.

Way to go AB, SB...you made Scootaloo the laughing stock of all of Ponyville...over something so petty no less...I hope you're happy with yourselves:ajsleepy:.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #2 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 02 - Consequence ·
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"You know.....sh-she used to tell me she was going to be flying...soaring," Rainbow chuckled sadly, holding the wings back up to her chest. "'I'm gonna fly as fast as you, Rainbow Dash'......She would always say that to me....and now.....I'll never be able to see her smile ever again. Never be able to hear her cheers, her shouts....her playfulness.....I'll never be able to see her take her first true flight......she's gone."

Oh Dash...:fluttershysad:.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #3 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 03 - Respect ·
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It was an Aurora. An Aurora shaped and colored like Scootaloo's cutie mark. Magic. "Congratulations, Cutie Mark Crusader Scootaloo," the two said, grabbing everypony's attention. "You just took your first flight. We love you."

That was beautiful:fluttershysad:.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #4 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 04 - What's The Situation ·
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Twilight sighed in response. "I don't know. She's more than likely still grieving. But if I hear that she doesn't come back down from her home in two more days, I'm going to go check up on her. Because I have a bad feeling that if she doesn't...we'll have another huge problem on our hooves."

Please tell me she will not kill herself:twilightoops:. That is the last thing they need right now.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #5 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 05 - One More Time ·
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I like Nurse Goldhoof, she reminds me of Nurse Redheart:twilightsmile:. That was cute how she bonded with Scootaloo too:rainbowkiss::heart:. If she thinks that little Bright Snow is a handful, she should’ve seen how Scootaloo was like before she got amnesia:rainbowlaugh:!

thedarktome
thedarktome #6 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 03 - Respect ·
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8952363
Yeah, I cried writing that.

thedarktome
thedarktome #10 · May 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 05 - One More Time ·
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8952821
But i have more happy going chapters. But that won't be until chapter ten or eleven.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #12 · Jun 2nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 06 - Planning ·
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Apple Bloom breathed a sigh of relief before she walked over, pulled her into a hug, and nuzzled her cheek, making Sweetie gasp and blush seemingly unnoticeably. "Thanks, Sweetie," she whispered with a smile.

Do I sense shipping coming:ajsmug:?

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #15 · Jun 16th, 2018 · · 1 · Chapter 07 - I Lost A Part Of Myself... ·
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Wow that was emotional:fluttercry:. And yes, you do write great stories:ajsmug:.

Also, AB and SB SHIP:rainbowkiss::heart:!!!

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #16 · Jun 16th, 2018 · · · Chapter 08 - ....That I Found Again ·
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So heartwarming:fluttershbad:! Goldhoof is getting attatched to Scootaloo:scootangel:!

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #17 · Jun 23rd, 2018 · · · Chapter 09 - Intimidation ·
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So nice to see that Scootaloo made even more friends...I wonder how things will turn out from here:unsuresweetie:. I also hope she gets her memories back, cause the more I see it the sadder I get:fluttershysad:.

thedarktome
thedarktome #18 · Jun 23rd, 2018 · · · Chapter 09 - Intimidation ·
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9002787
Well the memories won't arrive until ______s later. Sorry, no spoilers allowed. I hope you can deal! Because this story is in for a ride!

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #23 · Jul 1st, 2018 · · · Chapter 10 - Welcome Home! ·
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Nurse Goldhoof smiled sweetly, knowing exactly what she wanted before she reached around and unhooked Magenta's rear hooves from the mobile assistant. She then put her muzzle down to a level she could grab. Which she did. The nurse pulled her into a loving embrace, nuzzling her cheek.

:rainbowkiss:!

"I'll see you soon, girls!" Goldhoof yelled, waving as the chariot drove off. She could make out the two foals' little hooves waving back at her for a moment before she sighed, picked up the steps, and made her way slowly back into the hospital. She was going to miss those little angels.

I hope she’s seen again soon:pinkiesad2:.

"Yeah. And Bright?" Bright Snow looked towards her with a smile. "Thanks. For being my friend and for being there for me when I need help. I have a feeling we're going to make some great memories together."

They’ better:ajsmug:.

Ultimaexe24
Ultimaexe24 #24 · Jul 1st, 2018 · · · Chapter 10 - Welcome Home! ·
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This story is shaping up better than I thought it would especially with sweetie bell being in the hospital, I thought someone would have been a link in Magenta and sweetie bell hearing something about each other, like if bright went in her room and met her too. Anyway as for the names part I may be able to point you in the right direction, on deviant art there's a user by the name Nimbostratus that has a name generator that should help :pinkiehappy:

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #25 · Jul 7th, 2018 · · · Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Home ·
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Oh great, now Scootaloo has to deal with another group of bullies:ajbemused:. Just wat she needed:facehoof:. Hopefully she won’t he effected too much by the.

As for Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle...well, I can only wait see where their lives go from here:applejackunsure:.

As for that dream Scootaloo has...hmmm:trixieshiftright:.

Speculore
Speculore #26 · Jul 7th, 2018 · · · Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Home ·
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Is Scootaloo/Magenta gonna be reunited with her old friends anytime soon? It's honestly kinda nerve-wracking having them be in the same town like this.

Kikio3000
Kikio3000 #28 · Jul 14th, 2018 · · · Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Home ·
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For which characters are the romance tag for?

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #30 · Jul 14th, 2018 · · · Chapter 12 - She's Out There; Promises Promises ·
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"That's okay!" Gabby interrupted. "We can find her! Come on Babs, we got a Cutie Mark Crusader to save!" She quickly turned back with Babs' hooves wrapped around her neck and quickly made her way back to the elevator. Goldhoof and the doctor shared a look while they stepped inside and quickly closed the doors. Scootaloo was alive. But was now missing. The others had to definitely learn about this.

Looks like they're finally getting clues:twilightsmile:.

"No," she interrupted. She picked up another apple and tossed it into the bucket that was inside of the cart before turning to her sister. "Don't even try tah' change up my mind, Applejack. I told ya'. The Cutie Mark Crusaders is over. We all agreed tah' drop it."

Bullshit:ajbemused:.

"Not for me!" Bright interrupted. She started walking in a circle with her head held high proudly. "I do what I want!"

Sure you do...:ajsmug:.

"But it's okay. They'll warm up to you," she appeased. "Just give it a shot one day. It doesn't have to be now, it doesn't have to be next week. It doesn't have to be next month, it doesn't even have to be next year! But promise me that you'll at least try and do it in public. At least once." Magenta pulled in her lips as she gazed into Bright's hopeful light blue eyes.

Face your fears Scootaloo/Magenta:pinkiesmile:.

"Yay!" Bright bounced off the bed, nearly tossing off Magenta before trotting eagerly back towards her desk. climbing on it, she grabbed a spare sheet of paper and started writing on it with her mouth. Magenta watched her with interest before she spit out the marker and then grabbed the paper, holding it up so Magenta could see it. It read, "Magenta Promised To Sing In Public At Least Once!"

Nice title:trixieshiftright:.

"I don't think I'll ever forget it, Bright. Especially this whole conversation."

Eenope:eeyup:.

V4SH
V4SH #31 · Jul 21st, 2018 · · · Chapter 13 - Bright's Mourn ·
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I don't know why Twilight says

"Now all we have to do is find her and bring her back."

as Magenta would not be sent to ponyvill as she still is an orphan and would be staying in the orphanage she is in, unless she gets adopted.

Still liking the story that was just a thing I need to say, and for all I know you have a seen in the next chapter that says just that.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #32 · Jul 21st, 2018 · · · Chapter 13 - Bright's Mourn ·
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This chapter hit me right in the feels with Bright Snow and Magenta:fluttershysad:.

Also...

Applebloom pulled Sweetie Belle into a much needed hug, letting her tears fall into her coat. They needed all the help they could get. All of it.

A lot of it.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #34 · Aug 4th, 2018 · · · Chapter 14 - Sweetie's Confession ·
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Magenta wrapped around Bright's shoulders and pulled her into her chest. "Yep! Nopony touches Bright!" Bright wiggled her hooves around, trying to escape. Magenta would never let her go.

:rainbowkiss::heart:!

Sweetie Belle sniffed and nodded into Applebloom's fur, who was looking at the afternoon sun that was setting in the distance. Hopefully everything will be okay. And that Scootaloo would be fine.

It will be girls...soon:pinkiesad2:.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #35 · Aug 11th, 2018 · · · Chapter 15 - Intermission ·
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"And don't you dare say she died with Scootaloo," Fluttershy interrupted. "You're better than this Rainbow Dash! You need to pull yourself together right now. It has been months since the tragedy. We all know what happened and we all feel terrible about it. But there's nothing we can do. Yes, we've shed our tears. We went to her memorial service. We've said we're sorry. But that's all we can do. There is nothing else but to learn from our mistakes and move on. Everypony already has. Even the crusaders. Although they are still holding onto hope, they are still doing what they can to move on. Scootaloo will never be forgotten Rainbow. But we do need to move on. Because if we don't, the guilt will kill us..... Like it almost did Sweetie Belle. You saved her life. Now it's time to save your own."

Yeah, you go Fluttershy:rainbowdetermined2:!

Bright landed next to her and looked her over. "Can you walk in your wheelchair? Are you in pain? Does it hurt? Headaches? Nausea?..." Magenta sighed and walked towards the door with Goldhoof, the latter giggling at Bright's overprotective attitude as she droned on. She and Magenta were definitely going to be watching out for each other. Always.

Always indeed:twilightsmile:.

OceanaNatureGirl101
OceanaNatureGirl101 #36 · Aug 11th, 2018 · · · Chapter 15 - Intermission ·
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Such a cute and sad fic at the same time. Also heartwarming. Can’t wait for more! :derpytongue2:

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #38 · Aug 25th, 2018 · · · Chapter 16 - Cloth Removals ·
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I hope Rainbow Dash will be able to put the past behind her...she punishing herself enough as it is:fluttershysad:. Good to see that Magenta is finally getting those bandages off of her, though I hope doesn't have to hide those scars for long:ajsleepy:. Also, please let Nurse Goldhoof adopt Magenta and Bright Snow:applecry:!

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #39 · Sep 2nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 17 - They're All Yours ·
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Goldhoof giggled like a highschool filly and looked at the paper. Thoughts raced through her mind. Would Magenta want this? How would she react? What would the future bring for herself, Bright, and Magenta? Would she...would she even be a great mother? Kind Goldhoof took in a deep breath, placed her pen on the paper, and signed her name. Finishing it off with the date.

Once done, Director Diamonds placed Magenta's files back in her folder and shut it. Then offered Goldhoof a happy grin. "Congratulations, Ms. Goldhoof. They're all yours."

WOOHOOOOOOOOOOO:yay:!!! GOLDHOOF HAS OFFICIALLY ADOPTED SCOOTALOO AND BRIGHT SNOW:rainbowkiss::heart:!!!!!

RDfan27
RDfan27 #40 · Sep 2nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 17 - They're All Yours ·
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I know it might be moving too fast if it did happen... but I am dying for Scootaloo (magenta) to remember something, or literally anything, even if it is small. It is killing meeeeeee. Ughhh. Also, in a previous chapter when Babs and the Griffin (whose name I cannot remember for the life of me right now) found out Scootaloo was still alive, Goldhoof said she was going to ask Magenta about it later. Has she already done it and we just didn’t see it, or has she not done it yet?

RBronyReader446
RBronyReader446 #41 · Sep 2nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 17 - They're All Yours ·
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...If it all just turned out to be an accident, like Magenta falling into a Water Channel Filter, which is entirelyimprobable—"

oddly specific considering that's what happened and don't even know of that insedent.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #42 · Sep 17th, 2018 · · · Chapter 18 - Happy Birthday, Bright Snow; Happy Hearth's Warming ·
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Magenta responded through her tears. "H-Happy Hearth's W-Warming, mom!" Then continued crying into her new mother's coat. "You hear that Bright? W-We got a mommy! A family!"

:yay:!

thedarktome
thedarktome #43 · Sep 17th, 2018 · · · Chapter 09 - Intimidation ·
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9011915
You know what? Eight is great. I'm doing eight.

Pegasi_347
Pegasi_347 #45 · Sep 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 18 - Happy Birthday, Bright Snow; Happy Hearth's Warming ·
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I don't know why I ever waited on this story it's one of the most heartfelt stories I've ever read and I've only ever cried at two stories queen Scootaloo when she was on about her past and this one at everything.

Also can we call emo applebloom, emobloom

spike2000
spike2000 #47 · Sep 22nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 19 - Flashbacks ·
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8 years baby!!! :rainbowdetermined2: excellent chapter:scootangel::moustache:

Lady Lightning Strike
Lady Lightning Strike #48 · Sep 22nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 20 - Going On Tour ·
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Four days with an expected house of five thousand per stadium, possibly more in Ponyville

5 thousand? try 20 million after the myStable post!

Pegasi_347
Pegasi_347 #49 · Sep 22nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 21 - Ponyville ·
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Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do more chapters I need this it's like a drug to me.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #50 · Sep 22nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 19 - Flashbacks ·
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Wow, such a long timeskip...and Magenta has taken an interest in music:ajsmug:.

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