Spitfire accidentally drinks a love potion and fall's head over hoof in love with Spike.
welcome to love HELLi am your Satan XD i wonder if anyone would get this reference XD
I wonder...
the chapter title has an unnecessary h in it, thus making the wording confusing. I also noticed some misspelled words peppered throughout the chapter.
It might be a good idea to go through all your chapters and check for errors and correct them.
You need to check for Capitalization Mistakes. They are everywhere.
welcome to love HELL
i am your Satan XD i wonder if anyone would get this reference XD
I wonder...
the chapter title has an unnecessary h in it, thus making the wording confusing. I also noticed some misspelled words peppered throughout the chapter.
It might be a good idea to go through all your chapters and check for errors and correct them.
You need to check for Capitalization Mistakes. They are everywhere.