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the7Saviors


I am a self proclaimed horror and dark fantasy fic writer. You want darkness, death, and despair? You've come to the right place. Also an eternal Twilight Sparkle and avid Lovecraft fan.

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What was the context for writing this? I am genuinely curious.

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Something that hasn't really been done before -- at least from what I've seen. The reason I made it a self insert was because I was imagining how I would react in such a situation. And you can bet your ass I'd die pretty damn quick. :ajbemused:

I'm also hoping this will kickstart an idea for something bigger in the future.

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Ah. Ok. It's just... This was out of nowhere, and I am having an extremely hard time figuring out where I stand on this fic.

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That's fine. This was somewhat experimental for me, so I'm expecting mixed reactions. If it does good hey, that's great. If it doesn't, meh. There's a lot that isn't explained and I'm sure people will have questions, but this story is supposed to be taking place from the POV of someone who has no idea what's going on and doesn't really have a lot of time to find out.

I like it enough. I’m neutral on this. If there is a next part or a new story, maybe the next part is try to have the person figure out what the hell cause this mess

Santa mierda:pinkiegasp:. esta historia esta muy bien ambientada:pinkiehappy:. ¿podrias hacer una segunda parte o algún remake?.

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Through the magic of Google translate I am able to answer your question. And that answer is yes, I have a multi-chapter sequel in the works. Expect it sometime within the next few weeks or so.

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:pinkiesmile:I always wonder if there will be any HiE or displaced that tries more or less like this fimfic. You know, a little terror but more focused on the survival thing:pinkiecrazy:. Obviously that kind of stories will not be for everyone, the taste varies a lot but sometimes the variety is good.:pinkiesmile:

it's a little funny that in almost 6-7 years, I have not seen any fimfic of that style that has HiE, displaced or of any similar style. Have you ever seen them?:rainbowderp:

even so, it was a relief to have seen it at least once (this fimfic, even if it was short, was well set for reading):pinkiesad2::twilightsmile: I will look forward to the sequel.:ajsmug:

Have a nice day.:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks, yeah, the fact that I haven't seen a fic like this before is one of the main reasons I wrote it. And it's funny you should mention survival... :trixieshiftright:

Comment posted by Divan1229 deleted May 20th, 2018

Sounds like Mehrunes Dagon found Equestria

Woo, definitely don't want to go to Equestria if this is what I'll wake up to...
Nice work, and I noticed you stated that there'll be a multi-chapter sequel soon. I'll look forward to it!

Very, very interesting to be quite honest. Looking forward to the sprouts of fics inspired by this, because I really want more context on what is going on.

Have a like~

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:

I'll be honest, I was expecting a lot more mixed reactions to this when I wrote it, but I'm pleasantly surprised that people enjoyed this so much.

TG: that is horrendous
TG: in the most beautiful way

This is good.
Very good.
And NOT too good.

Great hook from the short description. the tale told with ever increasing Dark with a capital 'D', open-ended ending left to the reader's imagination. Well done and done!

That description, doesn't really explain the big details but, the images are on my mind right now.

You have encapsulated me in your world of red and.. red. Conglaturations.

This kind of reminded me of “the trees are screaming.” That was a creepy fic.

Its hard to find good horror Fics on this site, and you my friend have added a classic short. In the perfect Lovecraft / King tradition, the protagonist is dropped into the shit with no explanation as to whats going on. Like King said in an interview once, "In real life you don't get everything explained to you. Sometimes you walk in somewhere at the middle of things. "

Great Job!

The Monk

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Thanks for that. :pinkiesmile:

Horror fics and just generally dark stories are what I'm all about, so if you're interested you should check out my other stuff. :twilightsmile:

This was good!
I haven't seen a good dark fic in a long time.
a perfect little short.
Bravo! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

If you enjoyed it you should check out my other stuff, plenty more where this came from. :pinkiesmile:

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Oh definitely.
Already have the sequel to this on my Tracking list :twilightsmile:

let's see. The princesses are MIA. The sun and moon are both hanging in the sky at the same time. There's black spiky trees springing up around Ponyville stupid fast.

This is a bad ending to "Princess Twilight Sparkle" isn't it?

Oh dear god, the fanfics.

Sure, some of them were crappy, but I have a knack for finding stories that I know I'll enjoy and a lot of what I read was extrememly good. Naturally I got hooked, and after far too long contemplating whether or not I should, I started writing my own fics.

Oh dear god, this fanfic.

*FRANTIC READING*

GUD SHET

Wow. Did no pony know or even care to bring him back to health? Dang, either everypony is dead or is an ass in this future. Who knew?

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Random bipedal alien tries to break into your safe place while everyone you know around you is dying.

I'd try to throw him out because dude's probably going to try to rip my organs out and/or eat me. Totally understandable response.

Love the pacing on this, I can feel the breathing and gasping for a breath as exhaustion sets in from blood loss. Beautiful work!

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So is this based off an actual story or is this a random thing you came up with?

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This was a completely random idea I came up with one day and was written on a whim in about two hours or so. It was written because I hadn't really seen anything like it done before, I wanted to know what people's reaction to it would be, and I wanted to create unique concept I could build ideas off of. The resulting sequel is what I came up with.

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Well you do good work

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Well thanks, it's nice to hear you say so. :pinkiesmile:

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The only down side is that I have a morbid curiosity, and now really wanna know what the tree did to the girls.

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Ah, it seems I’m not the only one with a morbid fascination, nice

Let that be a lesson kids, never blink

Black trees coming out of nowhere and impaling everypony? Only one action comes to mind:

“Iä! Iä! Shub Niggurath! Black goat of the woods with a thousand young!”

I just finished the reading and I must say... wow. I really liked it! I am not that hard to entertain, but this one was really good :). I can't wait to read it on youtube, with proper credit of course! Translated to my language, so people who don't know English could enjoy it too :D.

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Oh, nice! By all means go right ahead.

This story made me afraid of going to the land of pone. It's like reading an SCP entry, with one of those real spooky dimensional SCPs. Nice.

Something tells me discord was involved in this.

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