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... That cover image.
Anway, the story's not that bad. I don't usualy comment on stories like this one, but I looked at this and thought:
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lolololololol this made me laugh so much! xD
Thanks for sharing!
OH MUH GAWD SO MUCH AWKWARDNEES NASTINESS AND FUNNINESS AT ONCE! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
TROLL FIC ALERT!!!!!
Not to be read seriously
Wow, just wow...I like it!
Ewww...
I swear to god, if you do one of these of Lyra...
I don't know, I suck at threats, DAMNIT!
dis why I watch you
for teh trollfic
Lol great chapter!
so the mane6 is down, yes?
really good man,will you write more of this (troll)clopfics?
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I'm gonna write clopfics for some of the side characters. Celestia is next. 
Yep.
Good job
Oh my god im crying tears of hilarity! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! He ****ing drank his jizz! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Fluttershy!
I love how your stories always end this way.
I really should've checked the author before I read so I would know what to expect.
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Hey... I thought you got assassinated after commenting on one of my other stories?
Please keep making these there loltastic
yes i just made a new word specifically for these stories
977617 Your hitman sucks! He failed to shoot one of the 4 people who live here, or my dog. He was probably too busy masturbating.
...why ;_;
OH GOD WHY
You know, I never look at the author when I read a story. But when I see the sentence "Rated M for some sexual content towards the end ;) " I know its gunna be funny.
Oh god that was hilarious! Keep writing funny stuff man!
977985 damn decoys
Heh heh heh>>979864. I put up the decoys because you're my competitor.
Mhm, he keeps on screwing up.
975590 I could always mindf*** him for you until he has no idea what exists and what doesn't. My creed is, after all:
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980187 your next comrade
IM THE BEST FUQING ASSASSIN IN EXISTENCE yes that means all universes WHT NOW SON!
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Anyways dear author please hire the best assassin when putting up a contract I hope u learned ur lesson.977617
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985460 Joseph, you are NOT the father!
985366 congrats on your fake title. Considering I was hired by lune herself back when I graduated flight college. You know the assassin who kills all the threats for the royal family? That's me.
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Pftt I kill for the rest of the universes royalty Luna and celestia just think I'm too expencive. Plus in the mlp univrece IM AN ALICORN top that 986391
Btw I'm also the best at arguing things over the Internet I haven't lost yet!
990736 I probably could make you lose an argument by default, but I'll be easy on you.
986391 I will kill you with wubs. I win the conversation.
I can regenerate endlessly
Frost this is between me and dark glider oh wait he killed himself PROBLEM SOLVED
This is probably the most intense comments battle I have ever witnessed.
Now this my friend, is how you get my coverted, and difficult as fuck to gain followered status in a single fic.
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"The battle, it shook the world apart with fire!"
975453 That comment...it is funnier then this fic. Yes I do agree the fic is a masterpiece of comedy.
"What were you thinking to drink Angel Bunny's semen sample?" One word. LOL
Man i bet he feels pretty stupid...but why not? 
-Trollestia Approves
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I didn't read all of them, but, like, isn't this one of the very few where he actually has some pleasure before riding the failboat downstream into God-oh-god-nonononoo! Falls?
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He makes some progress in a few of the stories before it all goes horribly wrong. Basically, I'm not sure whether it's funnier to have him completely ruin the situation before it can begin or taunt him by having him start to experience things going properly just before they all fall apart, so I mix it up a little.
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I've seen both, I liked em both
One suggestion, if I may of course. Hinting at the immediate disaster in a casual and inconspicuous way would improve this a lot! Here it was unexpected, but reasonable, Flutters being a cute Pegasus and all. But in another, as I already duly noted, Deus Ex Machina I-need-to-piss-now.
Even in a random fic such as yours a bit more consistency couldn't hurt
^ also, not complaining, only wanting what is best (or worst) for Eye Accidentally the Scene (that's what I named the hero in my head -- where the Scene is a royal title of course. Read with a french accent.)
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I tried the "hinting-at-incoming-disaster" thing with my newest story, the one with Berry Punch, and some people in the comments said they saw the twist coming. Which might not be a bad thing.
Also I love your name for the hero.