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True Edge


"Bad things happen. There's never gonna be a time when everything's perfect, but that don't mean we stop tryin'!" - Applejack

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It's been ten years since the Storm King's attack and the founding of Twilight Sparkle's school of friendship.

Scootaloo finds herself part of a loving, caring adoptive family, but sometimes finds herself worrying that she doesn’t fit in, or isn’t capable of doing her part to earn their love. This lends her to taking up the position of store manager of her family’s newest shop, in Manehattan. However, she can’t work all by herself, now can she?

Enter Alexei Crofter, the only Human in Equestria.
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My own little spin on the classic HiE story, avoiding all the "Anon" and second person perspective stuff which, while I don’t dislike, I can't write worth a damn.

NOTE: I originally intended to have this be a full length, as in multi-chapter, story, but I intentionally wrote the first chapter so that it could hold water as a stand alone story, in case my writer’s block got the best of me. Well, with this particular tale, that has happened . . . for now. I may yet continue this universe in future stories. But, for now, here it is. Consider it a small gift, I guess, to those who might care.

I hope everypony enjoys. :raritywink:

Cover art by BreadPande on Deviantart, used with permission: Sad Scootaloo ( <--- Psst! That’s a LINK!)

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Comments ( 10 )

A cliff-hanger really i was enjoying That

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Sorry! I was hoping it wouldn’t really come off as a cliff-hanger. As I said, I did originally intend to make this a full length story. Never fear, I will more than likely continue it later. :raritywink: At least you enjoyed it, though. :pinkiehappy:

All goods Mate

This should be way more popular than it is. Great story, wonderful writing, good pacing. I can't wait til the sequel you mentioned in your blog. Keep it up!

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Thank you! :pinkiehappy: It might be a while, admitedly. I’m working on some long term plans for my main story, Pony Plots, but there will be a point when I have more freedom to work on other things. It will depend on where my muse is at, at the time, but this is liable to be pretty high on the list of priorities for getting something done on it. :raritywink:

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Not at the present, but you never know what the future might hold.

I'm not crying... you're crying!

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I was a little, yes. Is that egotistical? XD

It's a story that I liked, the start of something in a sad moment.... 🌨🌈

Made me want to hug Scootaloo. :fluttershysad:

Me too I would like to see a sequel one day.

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