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Pinkamena Diane Pie; Pinkie Pie remembered the name. Haunting her past and family name, she's always wanted a normal life as a filly. Now in Ponyville, she's got it all. And she does not want anything to ruin it.

But when Nightmare Moon comes back, she's forced to confess and face the truth. And who would have known that she wasn't alone...

If you have a better picture for this story (or you made one) I'd be happy to see it! If it really applies to the story's plot then I'll put it as the picture! :) Thanks!

EDIT: Proofreading by Mudkippower1!

Chapters (13)
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Comments ( 185 )

more plz :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiehappy: I love it so far! Keep it up!

Good story so far, can't wait for more chapters. I haven't read a vampire Pinkie story before.
Mostly people makes Twilight the vampire.

This could be interesting. Let's see if this turns out like The Vampire Lestat (Good) or Twilight (You know what? Fuck it.)

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How come this fic is so God Damn Great! It's Uncanny with how awesome both this fic and Memories: Another Time

:pinkiehappy:
Happy Fic reading. :twilightsmile:

996758 I know. I've read some good vampire Twilight Sparkle stories though, and they are AWESOME :rainbowkiss:!

good chapter :pinkiesmile:
But I'm confused about Luna, as she and Nightmare Moon two different persons now or is Luna really evil? :rainbowhuh:

1012051 It's supposed to be explained later, but I'll give you the answer anyway:pinkiehappy:! The 'Nightmare' as mentioned in the letter is supposed to be one of Luna's separate personalities, and now that personality is strong after hiding away so now it took over Luna :raritydespair:. :pinkiesad2: If you don't get it, just wait for a few more chapters or so for the real explanation :derpytongue2:

HAZAH! The Fun Has Been Doubled!

Very Nice Chapter, i love Backstory. :pinkiehappy:


Can't wait for even more!

Very very good. But, could you write a little bit faster? please?
I was waiting forever for this. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png

1014406 It's been only a few days but I'll try. I'm not the best at writing, so I have to really focus and that takes a lot of time. But I'll try~!:pinkiehappy:

Pinkie Diane Pie, you are one of those hidden gem writer's here on FimFiction. You are a Genius when it comes to pacing. Your stories should be Featured .:pinkiehappy:

1022898 That's really my wish. I mean, the only thing that seems to be holding down my story from being more popular is probably the many grammar errors. I try to get my older sister to help me (TruePinkamena) because she's so awesome at grammar but she never really has the time :fluttershysad:. That's why I really need proofreaders to get my story on Equestria Daily! It'd be so wonderful!

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I could be a proofreader for you, it's not like i have anything i have to do aside from making 2 fic's that i rarely work on. :pinkiehappy:

1023671 Thanks! Um...I'm pretty sure you have much better grammar then me. So...um...could you please fix any errors there is on the first two chapters, and keep doing that until the end? I mean, if you have the time, that is...:fluttershbad:. I'm not trying to force you or anything...

But thanks for your generosity :raritystarry:! :raritywink:. And maybe I could even send you the chapters beforehand to edit. :) I mean, if you want!

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Sending the chapter's beforehand to me to edit would mean that more people wouldn't see any grammar error's in the story no matter what. though i might miss like 1 word, but nopony is perfect. :derpytongue2:

I am definitely able to proofread all of the chapter's until the end. It's not like i have anything to do, all i do normally is just play TF2 to pass the time so this will actually be fun for me to do something else. :pinkiehappy:

1024161 Thanks! It takes a lot of time to do each and every chapter, so you'll be in no rush. I hope.

If you want me to slow down the chapter process,just tell me. Any questions, just use private messaging. :) THANKS!

Just Finished Reading Chapter 3, I Loved Pinkie's (In the Story) Reaction to the Ritual Of Turning a Pony into a Vampony being in a Book. As Pinkie (In the Story) Said "THAT'S IN BOOKS?" :rainbowlaugh:

1024209 LOL! It's great you think that's funny. Most of my jokes are either not funny at all or so stupid they're funny!

1024209 And, um, I guess I'll send the next chapter to you soon. I do a chapter like every two or three days, and least commonly one day. So...thanks again! YOU'RE WONDERFUL!

1024361

It's Ok :ajsmug:

Though it was just a idea i had on the spot. :twilightsmile:

Very nice! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes, but I'm sure they're there. Short chapter? awwww dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png

But still, great work on the story. Unique idea, and not a lot of grammar errors.

I wonder who disliked this...

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Fox News probably disliked this

:applecry:

1034147 Huh wat Fox News
Do ya mean the real Fox News or is there some user named Fox News...?

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I was just joking around. though i was talking about the real fox news

1025098 Thanks I have a proofreader to fix it

:pinkiecrazy:KILL HER PINKIE! KILL HER THEN LET HER BECOME YOUR SLAVE! MOUHAHAHAHAHAHA:pinkiecrazy:

Truth to be told I'm an RD hater. And any fanfic I see Rainbow getting scared, tortured and/or killed and made into a pathetic mare, I like it!

1047190 So I'm guessing you like Cupcakes more then Rainbow Factory?

First i didn't belive in comedy tag but it's actually quite funny :)

1047513 Thanks! I try.:pinkiehappy:

"Oh...um...hello! Rainbow Dash and I...if you don't mind I telling them...were just training Tank!"

"if you don't mind I telling them"

"mind I telling them"

"mind I"

Mind me seems more logical, right?
Also, what is up with Rainbow Dash, now? She seems more angry than she normally is. Seems out of character, or is she a lecan?

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Same here, but with Applejack. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

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Hehe! Truth to be told my fave Mane 6 is indeed Applejack! :ajsmug:
But unfortunately, my favorite pony without any second thought is Scootaloo! :scootangel:

This is freaking awesome....me likey and wanty moar!!! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiecrazy:

This is freaking awesome....me likey and wanty moar!!! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiecrazy:

I think it's safe to say this story in a few chapter's is become quite abit darker and also so awesome

oh and if anypony think's this is spoilers... OH COME ON dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png

Can't make Applejack's accent much more thick then that, you really should tone it down a bit, scratch that, a lot.

1105431 LOL alright. Do you like the story? I plan on making three chapters today, but I may be busy.

1105439 So far seems like the story could be interesting, though currently it's on my read latter list instead of favorites, to me it just doesn't really have anything on it unique enough to earn a "favorite", at least not yet, I'm still following through read later to see further updates. There is nothing really wrong with it, aside from the accent on this latest chapter, but there isn't either nothing noteworthy on the positive side. It's mainly the only reason I have waited until now to give a comment, I really didn't have any constructive criticism. The idea has merit and is somewhat original, not just another Twilight is a Vampony and in a relationship with Luna, it seems you took your time either looking for a proof reader/editor or you carefully check the chapters yourself, but there isn't anything extra to make it special, and I can't really advise you on how to add that.
Is stories like this that make me miss the separation of tracking and favorites on other sites, then again not many sites have the read latter. I'll be looking further chapters and keep my little to zero comment policy until something tips the scales either in a positive or a negative light. I'm kinda hoping for the former.

1105522 It's alright. I know, I haven't gotten to the more, um, dramatic parts of the story yet. I think it's gonna take like a billion more chapters :pinkiehappy: lol.

1105538 Well, don't go rushing on my account, pacing and world building are important, there is no need to ruin what could have been a good story because you tried to rush to the "good part". I've been tracking quietly for 5 chapters, I can wait at least another 5, if not more. Good luck.

1105566 I didn't mean that. There's at least two more chapters before the mane six even get on the train to canterlot :)

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