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Ni-kun


Born a tiger, ain't gonna live like a dog/Pour me what you got, doesn't matter if it's money or fame/I never beg for anything/I ain't greedy about what's in your hand, whatever it is

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Luna wakes up on her birthday, feeling quite happy and energetic. But such emotions are drained out from her when nopony remembers her birthday. What will Luna do?:raritydespair:

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Comments ( 28 )

Well, Howdy, ya'all! Hope u enjoyed this story as much as I did!:twilightsmile::ajsmug:

I liked it. πŸ˜„ But unlike you, in my story, I make Luna an even more depressing character XD

Still, great first story. 😊

Comment posted by Ni-kun deleted Apr 18th, 2018

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Yeah, you're welcome. 😊

And haha, good one! XD πŸ˜„

8870713
Thanks. Also, did u create ur avatar on Doll Divine? :duck:

8872374
No, from the 3D Pony Creator. πŸ˜„

8872721
Oh, yeah. I know that game. Forgot which website, though. Anyways, Doll Divine is a good website. Try it.

Wait, I deleted a comment by me? Remind me what it was?

8874977
I think it's Ponylumen or something like that. I keep forgetting that last part of the website name XD

And unfortunately, I don't have a computer to use Doll Divine, or the 3D Pony Creator anymore. πŸ˜•

8874981
Oh, yeah, PonyLumen. Thanks!

8874981
OMG what happened? Lemme guess.
*Got old?
*Spilt water?
*Parents?
*Other?

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Other. For some reason ( and this is my grandma's laptop btw ) it just goes black every time we turn it on. The screen just stays dark. We don't know if it's a virus or what. πŸ˜… My guess is it's old, like you also guessed XD

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Sorry, couldn't reply before as I was watching Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix.

Actually, v have 2 computers, one is a Toshiba, NON-touch screen computer, Windows 7 proffesional, and its older. The other one is an Acer touch-screen computer, Windows 8, and it's newer. So, the Toshiba one is mine.

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You're welcome. 😊

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Damn, that's the only one out of all HP films I haven't seen yet! XD πŸ˜„

My grandma has an hp and/or Lenovo laptop.

8875209
Really? I started watching #5, then realised that I didn't watch #4. So, I'm yet to watch #4, #6, #7a, #7b. The website is 123movies.com

Also, I was really NOT expecting Nymphadora Tonks to look like that.

8878883
Ah okay cool. 😊

Yeah, crazy that Tonks looks like that XD

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Ever realised that only u and I chat here? :pinkiegasp:

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I don't mind XD πŸ˜„

8880825
Heh yeah :trixieshiftright:

But, on my user page, a person called LustaniaTheBunny and I chat together. Or, atleast, v used 2. I told her about Percy Jackson. :pinkiecrazy:

8880856
Ah okay cool. πŸ˜ƒ

Happy Earth Day, everybrony! :yay:

Very cool and funny short, def loved it! Although it would've been funnier if Luna went to Rarity's and they both cried about being miserable while eating ice cream together..fanfic idea? :rainbowderp:
btw congrats on this one being your first, way to start off your writing 'career' with a good one! :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks! And good idea. Though...I’m kinda busy on a few other stories (because of procrastination) so I can’t include your idea (due to laziness) .

Comment posted by THEYRE IN THE TREES deleted Jul 21st, 2018
Comment posted by THEYRE IN THE TREES deleted Jul 21st, 2018

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Fair enough mate, btw if you ever need any free proof reading just msg me.

(idk how to reply to a response on this website)

I’m really surprised how no-one’s commented as yet about the fact that this story is rather cliche. Here’s the plot (oops, my bad, unintended pun, sorry. nowadays, no-one seems to appreciate a good pun anymore) in a nutshell:

Birthday pony wakes up, finds out everypony has forgotten birthday, starts moping around, somehow ends up at secret birthday party, happy ending.

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