After a spell cast by Twilight had side effects on Fluttershy, her life is now in danger from the magic ravaging inside of her.
Rainbow Dash has lost almost all hope for Fluttershy at this point.
But it has always been said that love conquers over all.
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I love this story!!
DUDE is that it FINISH the story please i want to no what happened i need to no
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I'm still working on it don't worry, it's not over yet.
this is such a sad story i realy have no idea whats going to happen all i now is that i will be ether happy or heart broken. an epic read! ^^
this was awesome but i want to know about when will the next chapter be done and how many chapters will there be?
just tell me will Fluttershy die yes or no Please answer i can't stand to wait
Wow postim your brave and loving to bad he had to die
*sniff* so beatyful thank you for the greatest series I loved it it has a place in my hearts now with the name dracolit
hey when will you be done with explaining who postim was and how he got his powers
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When? In the sequel obviously. But for now I need a break from this series. I am going to write some more lighthearted fics first, including a ship about Pinkie Pie, with Applejack and Rarity competing for her affections.
*slow clap* omg that was an amazing seires truly epic
i would cladly w8 to read more from you
gl have batman!
omgomgomg a fourth part to this trilogy?!?!
I WANT IT NAO
but seriously... great writing... you almost made me cry... [I have never yet cried to a fanfic]
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my little dashie. also epic series you are officially my shipping role model on fimfiction. jake heritagu is my role model for scary/creepy stories.
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Thank you for the compliment.
YAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!! go
save 
to make 
happy and do something mean to 
nooooooooooooo......... poor
elements of harmony GO!
save
!
ohhhhh poor
now im all 
NOOOOOOO postim is dead at least
is now 
!
I stayed up late to read this and i dont regret it at ALL this was wonderful. <3 Thank you for such an amazing story.
Wait...you mean I just read the LAST one!?
GAH. I guess I'd better read the first two, then.
Er... The reasoning behind not getting married was weird...
In my opinion, they still should've...
Hell man, This is fucking awesome, made me cry when Fluttershy was dying, but then cry with happiness when she survived, Also felt really sorry for Rainbow Dash, I've been in a simmer situation where somepony close to me went into hospital, and you described it pretty well her reactions really well.
* Likes and favorites *
You really know how to make a happy ending. In my opinion these 2 were meant for
each other
great job, this has to be one(if not the most) conveluted, plot twistiest, emotional, fluterdash story i've read, and that's saying something i read a lot of flutterdash
... I don't see how this series has this many likes. Don't get me wrong, they're solid short stories.... At first glance. Then you actually read them, word for word, and find out that there's more holes in this than were dug on the set of Holes. Who is Postim, aside from being this Deus Ex Machina that came from literally out of nowhere with no backstory or explanation beyond being this uber powerful time pony. Great, hello insert stereotypical all powerful OC here. Seriously, why was this dude stalking RD and Shy so heavily? Where did he come from? What's his deal?
And the jumps from one event to the next with very little transition is just confusing. There's so many over arching side stories and plotlines that are either abandoned entirely or just left unresolved. How does Postim know the Mane Six and their names? How does he know the exact causes of these events? The dialogue usually feels extremely forced and bland. I find so very little reason to care about these interpretations of the characters that I found this more funny than depressing. I find very little that connects these characters to those I care about from the show. They're named RD and Fluttershy, but they could seriously be anyone at all.
I know I keep bringing up the subject of Postim, but he literally has no reason to exist beyond being a Deus Ex Machina.
All in all, as short stories go it's a pretty OK series, but it suffers from enough plotholes, bad dialogue, forced romance and all around lazy writing to ever make this series anything more than a one-time read through for me.
Have a good night. Until next time, this is FlutterDashTableThrower signing off.