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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Upvoted for good pacing, characterization and attention to detail. Though I noticed a few spelling and grammatical errors, nothing too glaring to take away from the story as a whole. Looking forward to more!

Quite a new take on a my little pony story. It is a good start and had great pacing and characters..

But what did they see?

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You mean old lady smut? I was thinking the same thing~

especially after today's episode...

interesting...? twilight you're bad at spying in general especially with pinkie (in S1) & starlight in S6. this won't end well for anypony involved!
hey Vclaw somebody did something cool https://www.fimfiction.net/story/405343/involuntary-voyeur

Excellent as expected! I especially love orgasm denial, especially to use it to let someone do something degrading. Whether its begging for release, or referring to themself in some degrading manner, its always a big turn on.

heh, ooh, Twilight you're a naughty, naughty mare

discord and spike ?
really discord and any other male character would be cool as there is not enough of that

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If it's suggested on my Patreon Page, then I'd definitely give Discord some consideration~

Yass fucking finally! the freak outs of twilight and sunburst were priceless! made me laugh...i'm still laughing:)

Quiet Sunburst I’m watching my soaps!

Truth be told, I think I'm gonna enjoy reading what Twilight's and Sunburst's reactions more than what they're actually watching...

[Note: This series is part of an experimental project as part of my Patreon Page. Whether it's SFW or NSFW, all the chapters featured in this story (aside from the intro) are suggested by my Patrons. If you want to submit an idea for a future chapter, I suggest you check out my Patreon and consider becoming a Patron yourself.]

So.. If I don't pay you, I can't have you make my story ?

Edit: Jest wanted to know

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Not for this series, I'm afraid. This is a Patreon-funded fic project where I write out ideas submitted by Patrons.

Also, I've been struggling paycheck to paycheck for a while recently, so cut me some slack. I need money.

Absurdly wonderful! :heart: The ships, the lewdness, the pacing: I'm just 100% on board with this chapter. Thanks for posting!!

I have never before considered Thunderlame to be Braeburn's Pegasus counterpart before today. Frankly, I'm ashamed I didn't think of it sooner.

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Well to be fair, it's easy to assume that Rumble is a better fit for the role than his big brother. But alas, I'm happy I got to open your eyes to the concept~

As someone who isn't into elderly at all, having Sunburst be into that is just...yeah. Not really sure how to respond to that, it's just so outta left field.

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Well, I did try to establish that as a trait of Sunburst's in the Granny Smith/Burnt Oak chapter. I just figured it would be a good addition to the smut being shown through the screen.

Next time, Shining, just ask Luna for a lucid dream.

“YAKS HAVE SEX NOW!!!”

I thought it often.

Well Ocellus is already keeping a secret or two for Gallus, so he owes her one...

I wonder how he ever had self-confidence issues is beyond me.

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Rephrase:

Luna. Cucumber with a top hat, mustache, and a monocle. Space.

Nice. It makes me wish there was a proper sequel to Shining's Return to the Brood.

*chuckles* this might count as a full blown friendship problem actually. Be interesting if the map got involved to fix it.

I think sunburst's horn needs a change after this.

Also I wonder how much extra credit Gallus would get?

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Hopefully Gallus doesn't get too much extra credit for his assistance. Otherwise Twilight might get bothered by other students desperate to improve their grades.

Oh there has to be more of this world again soon, would love to see what other embarrassing situations while trying to sound serious.

“Hey, Twilight!” she shouted loud enough to make her voice echo a bit throughout the castle. “Next time, close the door! You don’t want Spike walking in to see THAT, do you?!”

Finally! Someone said something! There are children in the hou- castle you know. Gotta hide your porn.

That was, before a distinct red draconic tail came out from behind the bed, and grabbed the journal to pull into his chaotic abyss~

"Dun dun, duunn!"

"Elan, no dramatic cue music for the God of Chaos!"



I'll be honest; I'm skimming most of these. The spellcaster trio is where it's at. The top and bottom of these things is SO entertaining! :pinkiecrazy:

Sooo...

What will the foal look like? A normal pony with a few extra features? A furry changeling reminiscent of the Law Abiding Pony changelings? A straight up changeling? Or perhaps some horrible looking fusion of the two?

Just finished re-reading it and love it. I am literally laughing because of the coincidence with the chapters.

Well, i wonder if this is going to be part of new Guard rituals from now on? great chapter.

“Oh! Sorry Spi iiIIIIIIIIII AIIIEEEE, WOW!!!” Spike and Pharynx quickly pulled away and gasped upon hearing the door open, but it wasn’t quick enough to keep Rainbow from making such a shocked reaction. As soon as they saw the two kissing, Dash reeled back with a tremendous blush and slammed the door shut. The pegasus covered their muzzle tightly with both hooves, and had their back turned to the doorway while reeling in stunned silence. After taking several seconds process what they just saw, Rainbow put their hooves down to reveal a dropped jaw. “Hole… Lee… Shi--MMMPHHH!!!”

This is the best thing I've ever read! :rainbowlaugh:

I wonder what a foal with those two would turn out?

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Probably a massive stallion named Big Love. A large unicorn that gives the best hugs. He has no actual magic but who ever he hugs has good luck for the day

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