What if first contact between civilizations went much cuter different than anyone could have expected?
With Goldfur's permission, an alternate version of the last section of his Cosmic Lotus Chapter 17: First Contact
Co-author of Off The Mark with Goldfur. Occasional spin-off writer.
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dawwwww
Too cute for words. I could so picture Forestwalker playing with Skyborn, even without the picture.
I actually didn’t initially imagine the two lying down like that, but Foxenawolf had a vision and it came out great. I modified the story a bit to make it work and the result was an improvement!
never underestimate the power of the Dot Warner Effect!
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Dot's got nuthin' on Skyborn! That colt is cuteness personified (at least in this situation).
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As Radiance Point is well aware....
OH FUR HER WEAKNESS CUBS
The only viable defense send in some chakat cubs to entice the ponies
"lied down" should be "lay down". "lied" is the past tense of "told a lie", not "lie on something".
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Good catch! Got that fixed.
You've used her instead of hir nearly every time, on the Pegasus side of the 'conversation.'
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Ack! You're right! Found all the places where "her" turns into "hir" and "she" turns into "shi".
Thanks!
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No problem, dude.
adult-onset diabetes after this much sweetness is defiantly a huge problem after this chapter.
a super good version for this chapter grate work.
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Thanks!
Note that the hardcopy book Cosmic Lotus is now available!
My heart melted when I saw the pic.
a very funny alt. chapter, the idea of skyborn 'tackling' forest was adorable and it fit hir character absolutely perfectly
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Thanks!
Forest never stood a chance!
Combat effectiveness: immeasurable. Do not engage at all costs! 😜
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Skyborn used cuteness!
It's super effective!
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One wonders what other manner of being Skyborns adorableness could thwart?
......
Skyborns eyes fluttered open at the sound of his rooms door slid open, and sitting up in his bed he regarded the small blue figure as it clunked its way to his bed. As the small astartes locked on to the colt, its bolter clicked.
"Heed me xenos. In the Emperors name, I shall smite thee!"
...........................
"Skyborn, mommies back. Its time for... gah!"
"Xeno broodmare, thine whelp has ensnared my bolstered war frame in the foul form of martial art of your wretched race he called huggies and has returned to his slumber. Your intervention is required."
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Even the dread Astartes legion is no match for pegasus foal cuddles!
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"Oh for... look, little metal human... they're just snuggles. Whats with this no touchy thing you've got?"
For a moment a heavy silence filled the room as the memories flooded in,
"I do not wish to speak of it."