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Highlord Langslock


If the darkness grows so deep that we cannot see the light, then we shall rise up and BECOME the light!

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Sunset Shimmer's ex-boyfriend, Flash Sentry, approaches her one day with a request; he wants to raise money for a bunch of people who lost their homes in a fire, and he would like the Rainbooms' to help him organize a fundraiser. Naturally, Sunset agrees.

However, things become a lot more complicated than either of them could have expected. In-between preparations for games, activities, a bake sale and a live concert, they have to deal with family drama, old rivalries and grudges, a new rogue magic user, and even a kidnapping.

Throughout all of this, as Sunset spends more time with Flash, she realizes that certain feelings are being stirred up. Feelings that she had once simply faked, but are now very real.

But does Flash feel the same way?

Looking for editor.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 27 )

Good Flash stuff as usual, but I'd still like you to continue "All bad days come to an end."

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That will probably be awhile, but I'll get to it one of these days.

This great! I love a goid Flash Sentry Story!

Okay, you've got me interested! I particularly like how you're trying to avoid fanonising the characters and, instead, are portraying them as-in-show.

This was a great start! I'd love to see more of this story.

Another great story from you, as usual. I am interested in where this will lead.
Interesting for Dinky to be Ditzy’s sister instead of her daughter, but I guess that is more appropriate given she is still in High School. Though that thing about pretending she’s her mother sounds familiar for some reason.
I have a feeling I know what Flash and Rainbow are talking about, and I cannot wait to see the results of it.

I look forward to seeing this update, as well as all your other stories you are currently working on. Your updates are always a surprise but they never disappoint.

Always nice to see good Flashimmer stories on this site :twilightsmile:

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Dinky is her daughter. They pretend (badly) to be sisters. :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh, then that’s my mistake. Ditzy calling Dinky a “brat” sounded more sisterly then motherly to me. :twilightsheepish:

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Clearly you've never met my sister and her two sons. She loves those boys to death, but she's not afraid to let them know what she thinks of them whenever they're acting out.

This looks like a good start, I'll definitely be following this!

Where's the comedy tag on this thing, this is hilarious!

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They would only let me use three.

This has potential.

"sigh" I wanted to like this, but I can't. At the same time, I don't really dislike it either. I just don't think this story is going to suit my tastes that's all. This is barely the first chapter, and it already feels like too much drama for my tastes. I'm sorry, but I don't think I can keep reading this. There's nothing wrong with the quality of the writing. Like I said before, it's simply a matter of taste.

Diamond Dudes

I laughed way harder at this than I should have, :rainbowlaugh:

Also, they're planning to actually tell people that they're only auctioning knockoff jewelry, right? I mean, without anyone bringing it up during that scene, it almost sounds like the plan is to trick people into thinking they're buying the genuine article, and I can't see AJ (or any of the Rainbooms for that matter) being willing to go along with something like that.

Well this has gotten me curious.

Ri2

...Ditzy, is there something you want to tell us? (I mean, isn't she too old to be Dinky's mom? Unless she's from the future.)

Also Lyra and Sweetie Drops are adorable.

And was the War of Two Ponies a scuffle between two ponies? A war being fought over two ponies? Were they like really special and important ponies or something?

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And was the War of Two Ponies a scuffle between two ponies? A war being fought over two ponies? Were they like really special and important ponies or something?

It refers to how one side had a red pony for their crest while the other had a blue one. More details will be revealed in my Harmony and Valor series.

Ri2

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Oh. That's not nearly as much fun.

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Wait until you hear the story bwfore you say that.

Ri2

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Was the war started by two kings arguing over which color was the best for a pony?

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I agree personnelly I perfer fannonising only when you don't have much to go on in the back story department.

Please keep this going! *begs on his knees*

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I'M WITH THIS GUY PLEASE

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