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Brony4Ever1992


I am a man from Massachusetts who graduated on June 9, 2011. I have been a brony since 2014 and I hope you enjoy my stories.

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Hmm, I am sort wondering about the adventure tag, twilight without magic is sort of useless and helpless outside of being employed as a researcher though for that if anything I wondering why she's even being let out for every would be avenger to 'bring real justice on her' unless Celestia wants someone else to dirty there hands and that seems rather out of character for her.

It certainly can't be good for twilight's mental health.

:fluttercry: PEOPLE GIVE THE GIRL A BREAK WILL YA! :fluttershbad:!... IF NOT!... THEN I'LL FUCKING BLOW YOUR BRAINS OUT.:flutterrage:!

I'M SORRY, I'M GETTING EMOTIONAL!:raritycry:

I don;t get it, last story ended wit Marble being ok, but in this one she tried to kill herself?
Also seem everypony was sorta ok with Twilight meaning the main six.

I think you really need to work on matching the first and the sequel because what you wrote has plot holes the size of a city.

8850104 I explain that as the story progresses

Angel hopped over and blocked the door.

"Angel." said Spike angrily.

Dam that dragon still hates that bunny...so do I.

Angel stuck this tongue out at Twilight.

"Give me the word and I'll roast him." whispered Spike.

Don't we all.

Oh don't think like that Twilight :pinkiesad2:

It'll get better soon...hopefully.

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any other time would agreed with Spike but ..SPIKE DON'T MAKE THINGS WORST!!
Angel Bunny was trying to protect his mistress, Fluttershy was badly traumatized, and can not be close to twilight.
Least she gets worst,Angel was doing the right thing.

If Spike had harmed Angel Bunny it would unleashed Flutterrage and she hate and mistrust Spike as well as Sunset.

Also still waiting to see why Marble became so bad, when it looked like she was ok from the last story.

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Who cares, everyone...hates...the 🐰

But you’re kinda right Fluttershy come first before hatred towards the devil 🐰

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Understand the hate no problem, but in this case such actions would made things far worse.
May be a long time before she recovers, and then there is Rarity, she has a terrifying fear of Twilight, she actually worse off then Fluttershy.

Wrap it up as in story over? Or wrap up as i. The current events

8875556 The Season 4 premier. This story if far from over.

im still waiting for Twilights break down where all the hate just becomes to much
Edit mostly for the guilt reactions on every one else and the likely blow up of sunset

Your Doing great keep up the good work

Good job i can tell things are going to go wrong bery soon that suicide tab its going to get its use soon enough

I bet one of Twilight's friends finally talks to her, letting her know that they forgive her.

So, Twilight reconciled with Rarity.

just saying but you might want to get an editor or pre reader. im willing to do it if you want.

"No offense, but why are Fluttershy and Bulk your parents?" asked Sunset, "They're not the best fliers."

Huh?

9074901 A criticism of the episode is its never explained why Bulk and Fluttershy (weak fliers) where Rainbow's teammates. I addressed that.

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But it doesn't make sense its says fluttershy and bulk are rainbows parents
Shy us around rainbows age

9075101 Shit, I meant partners. Thanks for that.

Meaning, next chapter, Twilight tries to redeems herself to Pinkie Pie.

"You told me Lyra wasn't here." noted Bon Bon.

I think that was twlight's response

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: BOY! YOUR'RE KILLING ME! TWILIGHT AND FLUTTERSHY BECAME FRIENDS AGAIN! AND I'M SHOOTING WATERFALLS HERE!!!!! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Hmm something I just thought of, they are assuming that the voice is Sombra's but he's not the only villain around assuming he even survived what was done to him.

Applejack shit Twilight a dirty glare, but thought it over.

What.
Did applejack shot Twilight a peice of sh*t and then gave a dirty glare or what?

"I'm trying." whispered the voice.

I think Twilight said this not the voice

I figured it wasn't Sombra , it her all her. It's......Self hatred and depression, even if everyone forgives her, she never forgive herself, and part of her will do everything in it's power to destroy herself.

Because it was she deserves ...................or what she believes to herself.

Sunset and Twilight are date right ? Shouldn't they be more lovey dovey with Each other ?

All I can say is, Holy Pogostick Christ that ending sent shivers down my spine.

"You wish to talk with me due to my pastas Nightmare Moon." stated Luna.

Pasta over past as?

("I only have your best interest at heart.") said the voice.

BULLSHIT!!!

("I'm you.") revealed the voice.

Called it.

(" I'm you. ") revealed the voice.

:rainbowderp: Oh SHIT!

ah the time for the world to see the full affect of what happen to Twilight

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